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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: MaD_DoGG on February 15, 2002, 08:56:58 AM

Title: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: MaD_DoGG on February 15, 2002, 08:56:58 AM
yo im a white boy that can ryme/
when i rap its a crime/
so bad im still doing time/
fuck the earth/for what its worth/
ima leave the rest of them niggaz on this forum in the dirt/
so bad it'll hert i mean fuck you'll be in the hers/
my rap styles like a curs to and MC trying to fuck with me/
any body will bleed when they fuck with me cuz im a crazy crip dont fuck with this/
you might get my pissed and i'll have to hit you with this bottle of cris that cost 600/

i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: Hittman on February 15, 2002, 08:59:54 AM
Wow, That Was Really Tite ::)

Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: Hittman on February 15, 2002, 09:01:51 AM
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yo im a white boy that can ryme/
ima leave the rest of them niggaz on this forum in the dirt/
im a crazy crip dont fuck with this/


Is It Only Me Who Sees A Problem Here?
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: NoT on February 15, 2002, 09:42:17 AM
I'm going to try to be kind... that was the single worst excuse for rhyming in the history of rap. Nobody, and I mean nobody, has ever come worse than that. Basically, work on every aspect of your craft because they all need improvement.
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: Maestro Minded on February 15, 2002, 10:44:25 AM
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I'm going to try to be kind... that was the single worst excuse for rhyming in the history of rap. Nobody, and I mean nobody, has ever come worse than that. Basically, work on every aspect of your craft because they all need improvement.



aaah Come On .. NoT, you're being biased now.. cant you cee the punches and metaphors he got?? ::) .. he got talent fo sho :-/
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: 'Illicit' on February 16, 2002, 01:26:17 AM
damn yall mean, lol  

but ay whiteboy, chill out on the "N" word, its disrespectful.   lil wannabe crip.    Yo TimeLock, could u start trippin off this kid now n leave me alone?   :P

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you might get my pissed and i'll have to hit you with this bottle of cris that cost 600

ahahahaha  ::)
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: KVB on February 16, 2002, 01:36:30 AM
No, I don't think that was tite.
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: ToNe1904 on February 16, 2002, 01:38:33 AM
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damn yall mean, lol  

but ay whiteboy, chill out on the "N" word, its disrespectful.   lil wannabe crip.    Yo TimeLock, could u start trippin off this kid now n leave me alone?   :P

ahahahaha  ::)


We alwayz gonna trip on you CKlown! lolol j/k but back tah tha whiteboy crip talkin bout puttin "niggaz in the dirt" uhh....well....yur rhymez....work on them! that simplistic shit wont get u nowhea on thiz forum CKuhhhhhh!! lol
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: DeaDSouLjaH on February 16, 2002, 01:40:12 AM
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yo im a white boy that can ryme/
when i rap its a crime/

i want some one to tell me if its tite!


btw..werent u insutlin urself there? ?? LOL

well first of all u shouldnt have asked ppl if it was tight....
u should ave asked us for our comments or sumthin like askin advice to improve...
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: ToNe1904 on February 16, 2002, 01:43:51 AM
oh yah, also....u shouldnta said u was a "whiteboy that can rhyme" cus u cant, n prolly jus gonna piss off all tha whiteboyz on this forum who actually CAN rhyme. lol but fukit, do yo thug thizzle thea dawg....lol
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: Maestro Minded on February 16, 2002, 06:14:27 AM
MaD_DoGG, ia be honest with you....

a country-artist could write a better rhyme than the one u threw ... seach for a new career ... :-/
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: Naz-T on February 16, 2002, 06:15:17 AM
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yo im a white boy that can ryme/

wow  :o !!
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: DeaDSouLjaH on February 16, 2002, 06:16:36 AM
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MaD_DoGG, ia be honest with you....

a country-artist could write a better rhyme than the one u threw ... seach for a new career ... :-/


LOL....!!! good one I-BO

Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: Reef on February 16, 2002, 07:59:50 AM
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yo im a white boy that can ryme/


lol.. no you aint!

im white an i can throw better rhymes.. well i think i can anyway! lol
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: Sikotic™ on February 16, 2002, 08:22:23 AM
I'm not gonna be mean because hey, not too long ago I was on this kid's level.

You need to drastically work on every aspect like NoT said and you gotta be real,man. There ain't no whiteboy crips, and everyone knows you aren't so why you even claim to be?

How dare you even ask if that was tight. I mean have you even checked any of the threads in here? Can you not see a difference between your nursery rhyme and the real shit people be spittin in here. I was gonna be nice but now that I think about it that was a pathetic attempt for anyone. I bet that wasn't even your first rhyme and I hope to God that isn't your best shit. A mute person could beat your ass with that so-called "tight shit".

Then your talkin about Criss, who the fuck are you R. Kelly?
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: Instant_Killa on February 16, 2002, 08:34:27 AM
lol
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: Naz-T on February 16, 2002, 08:49:59 AM
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I'm not gonna be mean because hey, not too long ago I was on this kid's level.

You need to drastically work on every aspect like NoT said and you gotta be real,man. There ain't no whiteboy crips, and everyone knows you aren't so why you even claim to be?

How dare you even ask if that was tight. I mean have you even checked any of the threads in here? Can you not see a difference between your nursery rhyme and the real shit people be spittin in here. I was gonna be nice but now that I think about it that was a pathetic attempt for anyone. I bet that wasn't even your first rhyme and I hope to God that isn't your best shit. A mute person could beat your ass with that so-called "tight shit".

Then your talkin about Criss, who the fuck are you R. Kelly?


true...

look it odn't mater what race you is, you can rhyme or you can't, but be real.

Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: ToNe1904 on February 16, 2002, 09:16:27 AM
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There ain't no whiteboy crips, and everyone knows you aren't so why you even claim to be?



actually there are lol. it seem like e'rytime i see white doodz bangin....they crips. i'on know why dat is. Ask dat dood Luni, on tha board....if he still around lol. he frum SD too, i think tha gang he chill wit got sum whiteboyz bangin wit em. but thiz foo righ hea...i dont know about lol besidez, this aint called tha "rep yo gang forum" lol so if u cant spit...dont nobody wanna hear it
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: Sikotic™ on February 16, 2002, 03:13:48 PM
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actually there are lol. it seem like e'rytime i see white doodz bangin....they crips. i'on know why dat is. Ask dat dood Luni, on tha board....if he still around lol. he frum SD too, i think tha gang he chill wit got sum whiteboyz bangin wit em. but thiz foo righ hea...i dont know about lol besidez, this aint called tha "rep yo gang forum" lol so if u cant spit...dont nobody wanna hear it


Word, I shouldn't of said there are none but they a minority.
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: Sub-Z on February 16, 2002, 08:28:48 PM
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I'm not gonna be mean because hey, not too long ago I was on this kid's level.

You need to drastically work on every aspect like NoT said and you gotta be real,man. There ain't no whiteboy crips, and everyone knows you aren't so why you even claim to be?

How dare you even ask if that was tight. I mean have you even checked any of the threads in here? Can you not see a difference between your nursery rhyme and the real shit people be spittin in here. I was gonna be nice but now that I think about it that was a pathetic attempt for anyone. I bet that wasn't even your first rhyme and I hope to God that isn't your best shit. A mute person could beat your ass with that so-called "tight shit".

Then your talkin about Criss, who the fuck are you R. Kelly?



what u talkin bout sikotic,yur still on this guys level......lol j/k
Title: Re: i want some one to tell me if its tite!
Post by: Sikotic™ on February 17, 2002, 06:00:19 PM
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what u talkin bout sikotic,yur still on this guys level......lol j/k


Shut up before I bring Hitler back from the dead to throw your ass in a concentration camp j/k