West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: HBKid_Jr on February 04, 2002, 01:37:59 PM
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ight have been k.o'ed in each of my last 4-6 battles, i dont mind losin but when im gettin K.O'ed it gets real discourging, tha only vote i got was sympathy vote. For tha people that actually read my rhymes what should i do to improve in order to receive votes an by tha way in my battle against tone jus give him tha KO cuz he deserved it
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nah man u tight, keep spittin, challange ppl on your level, analyze ure rhymes, and the votes against you, and try to improve upon that, like expand more in your barz, add more shit to describe what your trying to say numsayin. Holla at a few rhymers on AIM, u hardly come online, thaz wht i did, i talked to gud rhymers, who helped me improve, even if you lose, dont get discouraged, try learning from your mistakes, and improving upon what u lack, peace
-{bLaDe}
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nah man u tight, keep spittin, challange ppl on your level, analyze ure rhymes, and the votes against you, and try to improve upon that, like expand more in your barz, add more shit to describe what your trying to say numsayin. Holla at a few rhymers on AIM, u hardly come online, thaz wht i did, i talked to gud rhymers, who helped me improve, even if you lose, dont get discouraged, try learning from your mistakes, and improving upon what u lack, peace
-{bLaDe}
he talked to me ;)
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he talked to me ;)
he said "good" rhymers lol
jus keep at it Tom. Find a style that suits u best, n jus work on it. N try to be as creative as possible. Yur gettin better by tha day, jus keep expanding different aspects of yur rhyming. Metaphors, Multis....things like that. Rememba, so many people rhyme on here...that a simple "suck my dick" wont win anything, but if u bring it about in a creative way like:
"Blade "suckz" and tries to spit "sick-shit", givin head while my dick shot crabs thru his trick-lips" LOL
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lol see, there r homo rhymers on the board too ^^
-{bLaDe}
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lol see, there r homo rhymers on the board too ^^
-{bLaDe}
lol shut tha fuk up! n go respond to our battle lightweight! lol
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1. Metaphors- and try to use more metaphors that have to do with death, gay bashing, guns, bombs, military, etc.... so your shit comes with a lil more intensity.
2. Dictionary, thesarus.. improve your vocab, it wouldn't hurt for you to read and learn more, knowledge is key, even if it's knowledge on drug trade, you can turn that into some ill shit
3. Your illest shit was when you were rhyming about killing yourself, well flip it around, and take it out on them dog.. peace
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yo tom creativity is huge!, try to come up with new shit that no one has said before, ya know? be original, and reading and all really helps, cause the more knowledge you got, the more shit u can talk about, bring up everyday shit that people can feel and relate too, i think thats all i can say for now....peace
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1. Metaphors
When you're battelin someboby, try to imagine how you will defeat/kill him... ex: "like a dragon im blastin fire, removing your derire"
2. Punches.
you gotta have punches .. punches is like a very hard uppercut, when the target is open.... currently you only have funny punches, but you also need to write sum hardcore and iller kind of them
3. Vocabulary
like infinite said, you gotta start rhyming with iller vocabs. try to have longer rhyming words and use sum multis too
i hope it helped
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1. Metaphors
When you're battelin someboby, try to imagine how you will defeat/kill him... ex: "like a dragon im blastin fire, removing your derire"
2. Punches.
you gotta have punches .. punches is like a very hard uppercut, when the target is open.... currently you only have funny punches, but you also need to write sum hardcore and iller kind of them
3. Vocabulary
like infinite said, you gotta start rhyming with iller vocabs. try to have longer rhyming words and use sum multis too
i hope it helped
Word... and MULTI'S... a great example of that is Eminem's Slim Shady LP, try to rhyme 3 or even 4 words in one sentence, and even try to rhyme the last word in the sentence for like 5 straight bars or more, Kane is a good example of that.
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yo tom187um don't worry about it for real.....its NOT like if you get better at keystyling you get a present..lol....its so funny how people take these keystyling so fucking seriously.....i mean everybody's battling for number one for what??? so what happens if you are #1???? nothing...just cuz you might be in the top 10 DOESN'T make you a better rapper/keystyer in REAL LIFE especially if you can't even rap the shit
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so minority is that the reason you had such a fit over that one little point?I mean geez..........:)
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I gave up on keystylin'. It took a lot out of me after awhile, plus it just got boring. Anyways, I wouldn't know what the best way is to improve. I just make a verse real quik, then think up ANYTHING that could rhyme wit' it. Sometimes it work, sometimes it doesn't.
BL7 is so-mad, trying to improve his vocab/
so I can come back and put some hurt on yo-ass/
^^ Stuff like that. I just thought that up in a few seconds. I ain't never been good with meta's. I've had a couple of multi's in my shit tho'.
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yo tom187um don't worry about it for real.....its NOT like if you get better at keystyling you get a present..lol....its so funny how people take these keystyling so fucking seriously.....i mean everybody's battling for number one for what??? so what happens if you are #1???? nothing...just cuz you might be in the top 10 DOESN'T make you a better rapper/keystyer in REAL LIFE especially if you can't even rap the shit
Yo dogg.... is that why you begged me to text-battle you???? And you wanted to win real bad??? Because it doesn't matter, right.... It's competition dog... I didn't get shit as a kid when I played ball against muthafucka's but I still played and loved the sport.
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every1 thanks for your advice, about using a more advanced vocab that suptin ive been workin on a lot lately. An to infinite that said my best stuff was tha stuff about killin myself, i gotta agree cuz thats me be real wit myself
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Yo dogg.... is that why you begged me to text-battle you???? And you wanted to win real bad??? Because it doesn't matter, right.... It's competition dog... I didn't get shit as a kid when I played ball against muthafucka's but I still played and loved the sport.
yo dogg.... when DID i begged you to "text"-battle me??? so me PM you once to remind you to battle me is called begging???you're more dumber than i thought... and i don't give a fuck about winning.....just cuz you think you beat me with dickriding votes over the net doesn't make you a better emcee than me....if you want to battle me for real (audio battle) i'll fucking kill you anytime anyplace you just tell me when to bring it.....anyways, that might be why you DON'T see me battling peeps that often....i NEVER said this keystyling is gay.....its good practice to write your rhymes better....obiviously i ain't got nothing against it...i just think its funny how peeps are doing tons of battles just to get to #1 for NOTHING i mean you basically misunderstood my whole point cuz you're a dumbfuck and quick to talk shit for no reason
for ruthlesshojah....damn just get a life please....now i'm "BEGGING"....lol