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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: NollA_HollA_Boy on February 03, 2002, 03:33:56 AM

Title: the first
Post by: NollA_HollA_Boy on February 03, 2002, 03:33:56 AM

Im the new guy
I ain't said much yet
but soon I will
after I get use to this
you can call me a newbie
but thats aight to me
cause I'm going to earn my way up
and get respect from u MC's

I'm tellin all u this
you aint seen nuttin like me
but soon all y'all will get to know me
and u will be like damn he's crazy
all the women will be like how did u get to be like this baby?
I would explain to them
that my damn ex girlfriend
pissed me off
enough said
she's already out of my head
and thats the end
i gots ta go for now
but when i get back
I'm gunna make you jump up and down

Title: Re: the first
Post by: 'Illicit' on February 03, 2002, 08:51:46 AM

not bad for a freestyle but overall its corny and has no message,  but yeh, the rhymes aint bad.  

keep it up

Title: Re: the first
Post by: NollA_HollA_Boy on February 03, 2002, 11:20:12 AM

well thats just like my opening, my introductions, its really not ment to diss nobody or anything, just saying that I arrived.

Title: Re: the first
Post by: Doggystylin on February 03, 2002, 11:48:26 AM

the red text hurts my eyez so i didnt read it....blah!

but welcome

Title: Re: the first
Post by: NollA_HollA_Boy on February 03, 2002, 12:05:41 PM

I fixed it, its black now...sorry about dat, i thought red looked pretty good with the picture i have.

Title: Re: the first
Post by: Flowmatic on February 03, 2002, 12:05:57 PM

ya the red was kinda bright  ::)

but it was a cool rhyme for the first keep tryin.....

Title: Re: the first
Post by: doggmastah on February 04, 2002, 12:01:52 AM

Kepp it goin' you'll go better next time: We must battle some day! Peace!