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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: BL7 on December 31, 2001, 05:46:25 AM

Title: Hey, somebody rate this rhyme for me.
Post by: BL7 on December 31, 2001, 05:46:25 AM

I'm new at doing this, so be easy on me....lol..  ;D

Yo I'm BL7, and I'm steppin' on tha scene/
if ya wanna lyrically test me, a dead emcee you're gonna be/
do you still wanna piece of me?/
don't say yes, ya best say no/
you better show some respect, or ya best lay low/
if you wanna be the best, than just say so/
but you'll never be better than me/
go ask the crowd, they know/
just keystylin' and freestylin' in this bitch/
it'd be better if I could have a mic an' rip ya quick/
cuz I'm tha shit!/
I'll rip your main emcee/
these lyrics is hittin so hard, givin' niggaz a brain disease/
I'm the nigga they came to see/


Remember, I'm still a beginner.  ;D

Title: Re: Hey, somebody rate this rhyme for me.
Post by: 'Illicit' on December 31, 2001, 07:59:40 AM

yeah for a beginner its not bad, kinda cool actually. few fill in ines but i was feelin it.  since i rated this lol would u mind voting on  the ITW vs. CeeRyde battle?  thanks   ;)

peace

Title: Re: Hey, somebody rate this rhyme for me.
Post by: ToNe1904 on December 31, 2001, 08:38:42 AM

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yeah for a beginner its not bad, kinda cool actually. few fill in ines but i was feelin it.  since i rated this lol would u mind voting on  the ITW vs. CeeRyde battle?  thanks   ;)

peace

LMAO@askin to vote on yur battle. its a shame we gotta do that lol

Title: Re: Hey, somebody rate this rhyme for me.
Post by: ToNe1904 on December 31, 2001, 08:42:41 AM

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like ceeride said, it was good for a beginner. maybe find another word besidez "best" over n over again tho.
don't say yes, ya best say no/
you better show some respect, or ya best lay low/
if you wanna be the best, than just say so/
this was a tight line righ hea tho...
just keystylin' and freestylin' in this bitch/
it'd be better if I could have a mic an' rip ya quick/

jus keep at it, u get betta wit practice...

Title: Re: Hey, somebody rate this rhyme for me.
Post by: BL7 on December 31, 2001, 07:25:56 PM

Thanks for the responses ya'll. I'm glad I'm okay for a beginner, so when I get good at it, I'ma be rippin' niggaz.  ;D

Title: Re: Hey, somebody rate this rhyme for me.
Post by: 'Illicit' on December 31, 2001, 11:43:23 PM

fo sho lol.  start with ToNe, he's a easy newbie  :P    
sorry dawg,  "but its neva personal"     ;D

peace

Title: Re: Hey, somebody rate this rhyme for me.
Post by: ToNe1904 on January 01, 2002, 12:25:59 AM

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fo sho lol.  start with ToNe, he's a easy newbie  :P    
sorry dawg,  "but its neva personal"     ;D

peace

lolol yah....go head n start wit me homie. ima make up a quote fah ceeride...."Id rather be LUCKY then GOOD"  ;D
Dont trip tho lil homie...ima see yur ass in that royal rumble shit  8)

Title: Re: Hey, somebody rate this rhyme for me.
Post by: DeaDSouLjaH on January 01, 2002, 09:12:12 AM

where u from BL7?

Title: Re: Hey, somebody rate this rhyme for me.
Post by: BL7 on January 01, 2002, 09:21:13 AM

Phoenix, Az.

Title: Re: Hey, somebody rate this rhyme for me.
Post by: BL7 on January 01, 2002, 09:24:34 AM

Phoenix, Az. Why you ask?