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Title: "Mister Tongue Twister" Tell me how whack this is?
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on September 12, 2001, 06:42:04 PM

This isn't exactly my type of rhyming, but of course I like to try new things...So today in class I was messsin around, and I started trying to rhyme as many words as possible withput using extra words...I knew it was gunna be whack, but I said, heck, I should give it a try, so I started off and I kept on adding and adding...Now I wasn't gunna post it here, because I usually dont post my whack rhymes here, but I showed it to some people on AIM, and they said it was dope...I know it's whack, and they are just messing around, but I just wanna get some more feedback about this...Check it yo:


Lyrics terrific, scientific, listed as gifted, lifted lyricists insisted, tried to get my wrist slit, risked it and missed it, given missions, collisions from bad vision equal incisions, wishin precision of Major Division, listen, never ass-kissin or dissin, decisions of riskin livin in prison, or found missin. Attention! Never messin perfection, mic testin, blessin, and caressin’ my present, confessin’ depression from tension did I mention aggression, this invention from a 3rd dimension, the end of my session, i'm guessin ya learned a lesson...

Title: Re: "Mister Tongue Twister" Tell me how whack this
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on September 14, 2001, 03:26:01 PM

Thanks for the feedback..

Title: Re: "Mister Tongue Twister" Tell me how whack this
Post by: Doggystylin on September 14, 2001, 04:32:00 PM

LOL

nice! for a new thing

Title: Re: "Mister Tongue Twister" Tell me how whack this
Post by: maxi-padz on September 14, 2001, 05:11:45 PM

my style of rappen didn flow with it
so i wasn feelen it
to me it waz a bunch of big wordz dat rhymed thrown together n i aint feelen it
peace
~1~

Title: Re: "Mister Tongue Twister" Tell me how whack this
Post by: ZILLA THA GOODFELLA on September 14, 2001, 05:35:18 PM

Dat waz aiight.......I alwayz like shit dats different.......

Title: Re: "Mister Tongue Twister" Tell me how whack this
Post by: Ro J. Simpson on September 16, 2001, 02:37:25 PM

dope shit nik.

Title: Re: "Mister Tongue Twister" Tell me how whack this
Post by: bLaDe on September 16, 2001, 07:29:51 PM

i didn't really feel it ... i  dont like rymis liek dat lol .... but it wuz kool

Title: Re: "Mister Tongue Twister" Tell me how whack this
Post by: AlerG on September 17, 2001, 01:46:20 PM

i can't say i like it but i can't say i don't...when peeps need a word to rhyme something with they know who to go to now, peace.

Title: Re: "Mister Tongue Twister" Tell me how whack this
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on September 17, 2001, 04:26:31 PM

What about this one I wrote in 5th period:

When ya get Chin Checked, I select to eject ya head from ya neck, like an insect, or a car wreck effect, Reject, Get No time to protect, Play with ya mind like a tech deck, Heck I want respect from all intellects!


I tend to make my rhymes more simplistic when I wrote rhymes in class, but when I type up my rhymes and shit it comes out doper, maybe because I dont rush, or maybe because it's easier to press backspace, I dont know...

Title: Re: "Mister Tongue Twister" Tell me how whack this
Post by: maxi-padz on September 17, 2001, 06:28:27 PM

im the opposite...