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Title: Dissing Many Top Players !!!!!
Post by: .:N-Imy:. on July 02, 2001, 01:24:15 PM
Verse 1:

Fred Durst you know you straight whack  /  You ain't got no balls and you got no sac
Your just a piece of shit  /  Tearing you up, limb by limb  /  Bit by bit  /  Fuck Limpbizkit
Ya'll motherfucka's don't know wot fit ya  /  Ya'll motherfucka's don't know wot hit ya
But this is more about that fucked up Fred Durst  /  The pussy fucker with the "shit rapper" curse
Your anarexic flows make you a starving artist  /  Your veins flowing with viagra couldn't make you spit the hardest
You scared, looking out for protection  /  But nobody wanna touch a gang green infection
C'mon, be a man, admit you got no class  /  Only thing you've got is the whole of Limpbizkit fucking you in the ass
Did your mom and dad ever decide to send you to skool  /  Cause your rhymes are so whack that you seem a fool
Making an idiot of yourself, trying to rap, don't remain  /  Your like one of those things on my bed, oh yeah a cum stain
I bet getting fooled by Eminem made you annoyed  /  But please you alien freak go back to your android
Cause from me or any true rapper you'll get no credibility  /  Cause frankly you just got no sense of ability

Chorus:

Fred and Limpbizkit you ain't no demonstrators  /  Just a bunch of gay, ass fucking devastaters
Up on stage crying cause people hate you, it's extreme  /  Please motherfuckers wake up from your dream
Like P.Diddy you can't do jack shit on your own  /  The last thing we need is a bunch of P.Diddy clones
Please crap rappers don't keep me going in pain  /  I'm on the verge of going fucking insane
Craig T you should be done with manslaughter  /  Cause Fred he took her home and fucked your daughter
Ya'll stupid motherfuckers must have a fascination with leather  /  Cause ya'll in your sleep couldn't take out a feather

Verse 2:

Missy E you know you a motherfucking ho  /  Your fat ass has really just got to get up and go
You eat everything in site, you like a cannibal  /  You'd probably eat people if starving, hello Hannibal
And Lil' Kim don't forget you used to be a prostitute  /  A $2 one. bitch you just isn't and can't be cute
Girl you've been fucked so many times your pussy is like a third leg
When you suck your nipples you get a bit of knee  /  How many men you had, 100, 200 gee?
Wyclef Jean why you gone all soft saying not to put on women a price
Damn being with The Rock has really made you go all nice
No chance of you re-uniting the Fugee's  /  Who want a past group when you got me, I mean please
Vanilla Ice why you trying to mess with Eminem
You know you ain't good enough to mess with him  /  You fucking pussy, I wouldn't dare go talking about Kim
You've been damaged once and it can happen more  /  You sad bastard just go and get your porno mag from the store
Are you really that much of a circus clown  /  You've been so embarrassed you may aswell go and drown
Sisque you really bi? Man that's just the same as being gay
I ain't cool with that shit not out in the open on the floor  /  And not even in the privacy of behind closed doors

Chorus:

Fred and Limpbizkit you ain't no demonstrators  /  Just a bunch of gay, ass fucking devastaters
Up on stage crying cause people hate you, it's extreme  /  Please motherfuckers wake up from your dream
Like P.Diddy you can't do jack shit on your own  /  The last thing we need is a bunch of P.Diddy clones
Please crap rappers don't keep me going in pain  /  I'm on the verge of going fucking insane
Craig T you should be done with manslaughter  /  Cause Fred he took her home and fucked your daughter
Ya'll stupid motherfuckers must have a fascination with leather  /  Cause ya'll in your sleep couldn't take out a feather

Verse 3:

Craig Tracey you quick in taking applauds when you achieve  /  Quick to turn your back and on me decieve
You know deep down you a motherfucking fag  /  Got beat down from your gran with her 25p hand bag
So ugly you couldn't get any woman to suck dick  /  Even if you had a hundred, you still couldn't get lick
Following little boys around places like a stalker  /  But that's nuttin new, been doing that since your walker
My dawg, don't think so but that's what you reckoned  /  But to me you will always be the best at second
You a fucking pimp-wannabe, you sissy scrubber  /  Dick so small that you can't use a fucking rubber
And then there'sTony McGuire, that fat bitch  /  Couldn't do shit except run to the cops and snitch
You can't run two minutes without stopping for a brake  /  Mom & Dad never locked up the fridge, big mistake
I know you ain't ever fronting cause you from Dundee-East  /  Watching little girls on the internet, you pedo beast
OYu think you cool cause you in your house jacking off  /  But after a minute you so tired you set the panic-attacking off
Both of you at my skool were only after riches  /  No longer in my program, at last rid of the glitches

Chorus:

Fred and Limpbizkit you ain't no demonstrators  /  Just a bunch of gay, ass fucking devastaters
Up on stage crying cause people hate you, it's extreme  /  Please motherfuckers wake up from your dream
Like P.Diddy you can't do jack shit on your own  /  The last thing we need is a bunch of P.Diddy clones
Please crap rappers don't keep me going in pain  /  I'm on the verge of going fucking insane
Craig T you should be done with manslaughter  /  Cause Fred he took her home and fucked your daughter
Ya'll stupid motherfuckers must have a fascination with leather  /  Cause ya'll in your sleep couldn't take out a feather


Yeah this is a song I wrote and if ya wondering who i dissed in the song then they are as follows:

Fred Durst, Limpbizkit (As A Group), Lil' Kim, Missy Elliot, Wyclef Jean, P.Diddy (a.k.a Puff Daddy), Sisque, Vanilla Ice, Craig Tracey (Just a dwag I know. I fucking hate him but he hangs around wit me and my dawgs) & Tony McGuire (Another one who thinks he's one of my dawgs but he just a fat bastard who think he funny but ain't).

I meant to diss Nelly in this song but I obviously forgot about him. Ach well. Some people just aren't important/good enough to feature in my shit.
Title: Re: Dissing Many Top Players !!!!!
Post by: .:N-Imy:. on July 02, 2001, 04:17:09 PM
C'mon ya'll. Show sizzome brother of this bizzoard love and reply to my shiznit even if it is a bit lizzong. Out
Title: Re: Dissing Many Top Players !!!!!
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on July 02, 2001, 04:56:28 PM
It was ok..
Title: Re: Dissing Many Top Players !!!!!
Post by: .:N-Imy:. on July 03, 2001, 02:55:48 AM
Thanx for the feedback NIK. C'mon ya'll are sleeping or is this shit too long for your intelgence to cope with.
Title: Re: Dissing Many Top Players !!!!!
Post by: maxi-padz on July 03, 2001, 03:08:47 AM
i wasn feelen dat but ur skillz are getten better i can see u spittin dope shit real soon
keep it up
i give it a 2.5 outa 5 coulda gone 3
either way
peace
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Title: Re: Dissing Many Top Players !!!!!
Post by: So Much Style on July 03, 2001, 08:47:43 AM
2.3 outta 5
Title: Re: Dissing Many Top Players !!!!!
Post by: Ro J. Simpson on July 19, 2001, 05:07:46 PM
i give it 1...just...better luck next time homie
Title: Re: Dissing Many Top Players !!!!!
Post by: .:N-Imy:. on July 19, 2001, 11:55:30 PM
Yeah I done this a while ago as you can see and that was my first attempt at this. I never even checked it over to see if I could improve it. I just threw it on here to see wot people thought but I've changed it quite a bit now and myabe I'll post the second version of it at a l8r date
Title: Re: Dissing Many Top Players !!!!!
Post by: Sikotic™ on July 20, 2001, 11:56:47 AM
It was okay. Needs work but so do I. I'll just shut my mouth. :-X
Title: Re: Dissing Many Top Players !!!!!
Post by: .:N-Imy:. on July 20, 2001, 01:58:29 PM

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It was okay. Needs work but so do I. I'll just shut my mouth. :-X


Nah you don't need to shut up because Criticism is the best feedback you can get for a song cause it only makes you go back and try harder to improve the rhyme. Anyway I have worked on the rhmye quite a lot and I have changed it drastically and I may post the newer version on here sometime.