West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Phiasko on May 31, 2001, 05:30:55 PM
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cursid is the worst person / the first person to start cursin' on this next verse-and / dispersin' hot shit without rehearsin' / leavin' emcee's hurtin' / worse-than a virgin her first time with another person / lurkin' under the curtain', workin' it / jerkin' quick / now i'm just blurtin' shit / turnin' hits / turnin' as spinnin' like a dj / sportin' enyce (pronounced "enichay" for those that dont' know) / runnin' from 5 O like a muthafuckin' relay!!!
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NICE rhyme structure that shit flows great but could use some deeper wodplay still very nice,when you rap it just flows of the tip of your tongue so easily,those are the kind of lyrics that as long as you have some kind of flow it'll come out tight.
all of my shit s only of form of full songs so i'm not sure that would fit this category of forums and i don wanna risk getting jacked a whole song at a time. i'll show peeps my lyrics individually but hell no am i postin awhole song of mine ina forum hehe,peace-Tanjint
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you must be KRAZY, them rhymes was lazy/
never phase me, up in ya face P ready to displace thee/
you can't be coming like me with them fuckin thunder flows/
or i'm a diss you like JAY did on chronic underload/
fuck ya wackk sound, better back down, where you at now/
slapped blaow, all up in ya grill with a chapped smile/
ya rhymes was only ok like ya beats was only ok/
with lyricists like me in the room punk there's no way/
flow to flow, toe to toe why you fuckin wit it/
go back and study my rhymes, or buy a copy of shiznit/
you wanna BE HEARD well hear this, i'm fearless/
and near this point where i explode you'd better fear fists/
ah fuck it i gotta go, peace
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ay tanjint
if u copywrite ur shit before u show it on the forums
then they cant steal shit
thas wha my niggaz from the states do
ight im out
peace n
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you weren't implying that in my direction were you?