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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Hittman on June 05, 2002, 06:09:25 AM
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Verses Must Be In Within The Next 4 Days. 10-15 Bars Each. Winner Goes To The Next Round. Judging Will Be Done By Me & Notorious Mack.
You Must Use These Words (Please Bold Them So I Know Where They Are):
Multiple
Carcuss
Black
Audio
Satellite
Bitch
Homosexual
Horse
Big
Brother
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Carcuss
Do u mean carcass?
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Tounge tied muthafucker, you know everyone had wished u died at birth//
we could say it was a virgin birth, but the shit i can unearth//
i know everythin about u and ur bitch ass of a family//
i see the look on ur face wen i mention that horse you fucked//
accept it wasnt a fuck was it? u stuck ur head up its ass, thats some sick shit//
dayum man you need some fuckin help maybe me beatin u black an blue an hear u yelp//
scream in pain wit mutiple stab wounds, take u to the hospital, i eat a few wombs//
while your hopin that the doctor is homosexual, ur rectum flexible?//
ass up for rent, broadcast it on Satellite//the weather forcast: Harmany is a hermaphrodite//
after you been burried i come dig up ur carcass, im the G that can claim im the smartest//
now i would record this diss on auido but u aint woth my breath//
and Big Brother is watchin you an like JD u gon be so-so death//
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I'm leavin your carcass diminished with multiple schraloasis/
Interceptin your kinectic waves similar to a satellite in Jones, Osmosis*//
My nuclear fussion chemistry from my vocal cords are turning charred/
Like an atomic bomb explosion, leaving you black, burned, and scarred//
Your audio spits are like a homosexual horse...never been seen/
You similar to a bitch needin for a shot cus she's a thorazine fiend//
Gareefa is tight, but I'ma make him visualize exactly why I'm the co-leader/
Gareefa couldn't get a job as a janitorial assistant...he's got too many misdemeanors//
You wanna roll with the big boys of the block, but you only four foot nine/
Gareefa so tiny, he tripped on freshly-mowed grass and fractured his entire spine//
You tryin to throw punches, but I got your hands tied behind your back/
All you can do is sit back, take smacks, because proper verbal ability is what Gareefa lacks//
Yo Gareefa...ain't no beef cuz...just tryin to get a belt...
Jones, Osmosis* = Name of the movie "Osmosis Jones"...just backwards...
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PS: The end of the first line should be Schlaroasis, not "Schraloasis"...
I fucked up...oops
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Gareefa: Your Bars Hit Hard And Hurt Harmony. Take No Offence When I Say That Your More Of A Raw Emcee Then A Skillfull Thought Provoking One. Only A Few Punches, None Of Real Impact. I Still Liked The Verse Though. 3.9/5
Harmany: Nice Use Of A Tight Vocabulary. Great Flow Pretty Much All The Way Through This One. Your Lines Hit Harder Then Gareefas Aswell, With Pretty Tight Punches Every Now And Again. I Think You Slightly Edged This One. 4.2/5
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Gareefa:nice verse,used all the words we said you had to,your shit had a good start but you tended to fall off at times.4.3
Harmany:I was really feeling this verse but im goin 2 have to deduct points from u 4 not usin all the words u were supposed 2. 4.1
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What do you mean, Mack? Big and Brother were two separate words we had to use...not one...even look at Logic's list...
Big and Brother were two separate ones...
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yeh i know but you never used the word brother in your whole ryme.if u did use it,quote tha bit of the ryme and ill adjust your score
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Oh yeah...fuck...I forgot to put it in there...
My bad...sorry...
So, who wins and moves on?
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Gareefa:3.9/5 +4.3= 8.2/5
Harmany:4.2/5+4.1=8.3/5
Well i aint brilliant at maths but i thinks thats right.Harmany goes through to the next round
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Well Done Harmany. You Move Onto The Next Round.