West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Pillow on May 22, 2002, 11:35:24 PM
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hey yo Tanjibility i am calling you out kid, i aint got no beef with you or noting, just wanna battle you. so if you except here are the rules...........
1.) 1st to 5 votes wins 3-0 = K-O
2.) Nik (now i know) can not vote because he is a hater and hates me
3.) crews are aloud to vote, but no hatin shit, be fair
4.) must contain at least 25 bars and can have no more then 30.
thats it, just except and we can get this shit rolling
peace out,
..::Pillow::..
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Yo fuck the bar limits/standards etcetera,i accept if we can forget those/
and if you don't these "punch"lines will leave you witha red wet nose/
so i'll start this one off,no beef, just battlin'/
MC's just prattlin/while my words is like gatlins/
and you i don't wanna put the homey NIk to silence/
but we'll exclude his vote becaus to you he has a bias/
i take MC's brains like yourselves and contort/
now who's controllin comport?/i don't consort/
with other MC's,i have higher standard/
you rappers/is aincient mexico,my raps the spaniards/
damn nerds,thinking they know what the fuck is hip-hop/
on your stereos only top 40 hits rock/please make the bullshit stop!/
Pillow?cuz peeps is sleeping on you? well you deserve to slept and stepped on/you got the skill to try tanjint,your dead wrong/
not to brag but it's the muthafuckin hardcore champ/
while you're boring like a nerd on a star wars rant/
while you're so whack it's depressing more mcs minds i'm vexing/
blast ya like with x wings/now on to the next thing/
rap wrestling/got ya in a headlock/you the police,i'm 2pac:we got a dead cop/
so give up now and i'll ignore your whackness's/
many aspects its/ me that's fuckin up ya teeth with raps like a bad dentist/God meant it when he said "have no gods before me"/
so you goin to hell cuz when this shit's done youll have to adore T/
peace-Tanjint
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yo man i know i said about 30 bar limit and shit, but is it coo if i go over, i got my shit all done, i just wanna get permission from u if i go over
..::Pillow::..
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i don't like bar limits anyway cuz i have crazy bars sometimes so i confuse myself LOL so i won't enforce it on you if you don't enforce it on me,peace-Tanjint
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aiight then homie thanks. here is my verse
un inside, grab the glock and my cash\\
jump in homeboys car thats still runnin and hit the gas\\
dial up the homies from the crew and rold em how homeboy got-rolled\\
and to have thier glocks-in-hold, cuz i was commin ands shots-were-to-blow\\
ready and willing to pop tanjibility//
cause i got the ability to beat any MC//
cause i part my lyrics in half like moses and the red sea//
pick up the crew, but still aint enough-heads\\
we need to dubl up, like bunk beds\\
i got an idea that might help us from dyin\\
even tho we hate the Lusty Brothers, we culd form an alliance\\
we both hate them fucks thunder-clips\\
so maybe Lustys will help us put it under-n-shit\\
i get on the cell and call em to discuss\\
they said that they will murder wit-us\\
said he will send 20 men, loaded with weapons\\
and thunder clips wuld get rained on fer reppin'\\
we all get out at the don and spread-apart\\
rush in, ready to put bullets thru thier head-and-heart\\
me leadin the pack, we head in to attack\\
fools spot one half, of our staff, fire and we bust back\\
the cats at the gate get blasted and we un-harmed\\
these faggots aint shit, we culda came un-armed\\
send half my team to forum a distraction\\
we sneek in the back, the guard's body starts crackin\\
from the hollow tips that begin to happ'n\\
as we walked in more i saw the faggot who shot my dun\\
so i stepped up and aimed my gun\\
'THIS SHELL RIGHT HERE IS FO DONNY'\\
i screamed as i cocked my sawed off shotie\\
now was the real task, like 100 men\\
and bullets starting to go airborn agian\\
manuver swiftly, aim bust twice and reload\\
yellin 'ROT IN HELL U FUCKIN HOS!'\\
when we bust them all i scam whos left\\
about ten total heads payed a visit to death\\
about 4 of em where my clique\\
now aint that a fuckin bitch?\\
o well we must continue and proceed\\
no one said this would come to this//
go to the back to find the don and make him pay\\
becuz all the men are holdin gages\\
kick down the door and shots ring loose\\
aint got security worth shit, just 3 dudes\\
they get wasted and we stop the cease\\
i tell em i want this dude and say, 'this is fo donnie, rest in peace'\\
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yo tanjint ur my homie..and so is pillow..but im gonna vote honestly and give my vote to the person I felt more..
okay Tanjint..u droped ill...Might of mest up in some parts..but over all aiight I like ur stle
pillow..I loved ur shit man..good style..but also fell off at times..but u started okay and went better and beter and better...but fell of in sum parts..but my vote goes to u for having a tite style..and good rhymes..but still u gotta improve on ur shit..fall off too much peace
VOTE= PILLOW
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you know what i dont understad? ppl view threads and dont say shit. i mean when its a battle you should at least post ur vote. just a little something to thinka bout, now, can we PLEASE get some votes? ;)
..::Pillow::..
P.S. thanks for the vote roccy
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Hey thanks Roccy,yeah we need more votes...or am i supposed to do a reply verse? i was gonna do one but then i saw roccy already voted...anway....was this supposed to be a dissing battle or just putting out verses to see whos was better? because his verse was tight but it wasn't really battling me,so i'm kinda confused,pillow or roccy can you clarify? PEACE everybody-Tanjint
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yo, sup man. when i battle ppl i dont really diss them unless they diss me a GRIP. but u didnt really diss me a grip so i threw ur name in there a couple of times, but its whtever u want it to be. so u are allowed to change it if u want. but my 1 vote still stands.
peace
..::Pillow::..
P.S. yo tanjit, i will be lookin forward to havin u as a partner in our group, u drop tight shit.
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My vote goes to Tanjint.
His shit was aimed at Pillow.. it wasn't just a bunch of disses. And it's coo' tha way he replied to challenge with his rhyme.. lets you know he made that shit up straight off tha dome.. freestyled it... Keystyled it.
Pillow's rhyme was more on that Gangsta, Fuck Tha World, Word To My Nine type of shit.. I just wasn't feelin' it as much.
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I read the rhymes and I think Pillow took it...I woulda definently voted for pillow, but than I looked up, and saw that I cant vote, so i guess its 1-1 still...
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yo, sup man. when i battle ppl i dont really diss them unless they diss me a GRIP. but u didnt really diss me a grip so i threw ur name in there a couple of times, but its whtever u want it to be. so u are allowed to change it if u want. but my 1 vote still stands.
peace
..::Pillow::..
P.S. yo tanjit, i will be lookin forward to havin u as a partner in our group, u drop tight shit.
u shouldnt even read tha other personz verse first anywayz. I try to blind post as much as possible, i hate when peoply write off of anothers verse. But ay, yall would get more votes on this...if u changed tha title to Pillow vs Tanjint...and have a mod move it to the battle forum...
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yo tone why didnT U vote? :-/
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yo tone why didny vote? :-/
cuz hes scared of me
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PEOPLE WE STILL NEED VOTES,anyway Tone why do you hate it when peeps write off anothers verse? just curious,,vOTE PEOPLE.peace-Tanjint
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PEOPLE WE STILL NEED VOTES,anyway Tone why do you hate it when peeps write off anothers verse? just curious,,vOTE PEOPLE.peace-Tanjint
because the second rhymer will have opportunity to base his rhyme on the other rhymer, neutralise all his disses and add sum own ones, witch will make him look much better...
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he have the opportunity to read the other verse and know what he must accomplish to win the battle, (ask people over aim to judge, rate whatever)
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REVIEW:
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no disrespect, but both rhymers really sucked ass on this battle..
Tanjibility's level on the vocab/grammar was to low, and the punches was avreage, he lacked in metha's
i would say the same thing about pillow exept that he had one good metha.. and the punches were litle harder...
Tanjibility : 3.1
Pillow : 3.2
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well i personally think it's better when people rhyme off eachother because otherwise it's just 2 people postin rhymes with a little "fuck so and so" in between here and there.
man,the one time the great shadow kicks reads one of my rhymes it's a whack one,damnit i'ma practice for a minute and prove myself to this MC.
WE STILL NEED MORE VOTES.
peace-Tanjint
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man,the one time the great shadow kicks reads one of my rhymes it's a whack one,damnit i'ma practice for a minute and prove myself to this MC.
lol.. no need .... ive been here longer than u think... even longer than my "profile" says
ive seen you spitten before... so it's all good... ;)
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aiight i up 2-1 but we still need more votes! come ppl. lets us please get some votes, thanks
peace
..::Pillow::..
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and can a moderator please move this to the battle boared?
peace
..::Pillow::..
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man this is fuckin sad,what's so hard about voting people? shit,i guess titles do count for nothing when it comes down to it....this is the result of having like 76430976043 belts because this is a match for the hardcore championship but people are just waiting for the next heavyweight,middle,lite and watusi or whatever the hell its called....also,pillow,your rhyme is long as hell LOL so i think that may be scarin voters away(not saying anything bad about your verse but it is noticeably long LOL) man people for the 960986875764 time PLEASE VOTE!!! peace-Tanjint
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Lmao..Yeah..I dont wanna read pillows shit thats why I cant vote haha..
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^^ wtf? you allready voted? :::::scratches his head::::::::
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mah bad i took so long to get on this shit. i know itz fuked up waiting for votes...
Tanjint, u had a pretty tight verse. Ive seen better from u, but tha shit was still good. Good punches, good flow, sum decent metaphors like the star wars shit, and i liked the 2pac "we gotta dead cop" line. Wasnt quite as creative as ive seen in other verses from u, but u still came wit sum heat.
4.1
Pillow, yur verse was pretty hot man. It flowed real nice from top to bottom. Woulda made a good verse tah record. Coulda came witta lil more creativity and metaphors. I think what hurt u the most is, this was a battle...and i can only remember counting 1 punchline in yur whole verse. Tha verse itself was good, but u didnt attack Tanjint at all. Good shit tho man.
3.9
vote=Tanjint
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^^ wtf? you allready voted? :::::scratches his head::::::::
Shit lol..:::::::::::::::::feels stupid:::::::::::::::: (Pillow style)
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again.....wtf ^^^ to pillow style?
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still ^^ for votes........tied 2-2
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aiight this shit is tied up 2-2 can we please get some more votes........we need em.........some lets go..........