West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: ToNe1904 on May 22, 2002, 01:28:18 AM
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aiight man, herez tha rulez...
20 bar max
First to 5 votes, no KO'z
No crewz, No haterz...blah blah...lol
Since u challengin, u spit first. Coo?
peace
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aight cool. i'll my verse up after i get home from school today.
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Aight here's my verse. No beef cuz remeber.."~~Itz Neva Personal~~"... 8)
You a fake banger, a blood then an now a “crip tonite”//
You think you superman well I got tha “kryptonite’’//
I want that title so I’ll bring tha “clip tonite”//
After we’re done I want KVB cuz I’ll “rip that knight”//
I’ll come to Diego and give you a gun or a knife//
Step to ya face, dare you to cut me,then make ya beg for ya life//
You claimin Cali like you tha one that makes it gangsta son//
Yeah I seen a crip-walk but I never seen a gangsta run//
I’ll put ya in a deep sleep like all tha Z’s when ya type ya S’s//*
I guess KINGS got 2 bitches cuz yall both be rockin dresses//
You "steppin thru tha lyrikal darknezz" , I’ll show u tha lyrical light//**
God is now callin ya name so prepare for a spiritual flight//
This’ll be ya last ever title defense isnt that right Tone//
Cuz its impossible to defend a title that you no longer own//
*Check out Tone’s post he types his S’s as Z’s…lol
**Check under his avatar it says “ToNe steppin thru tha lyrikal darknezz....”
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aiight man, ima try to spit tonight after work if i can, too many thingz goin at once lol. cool?
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Damn itz like yah stole mah name, im tha real "Caine" cus u gettin "high-off-my-lines"/
Kali servin NY, iz jussa sign-of-tha-times, challengin ToNe iz "CAPITAL punishment" so u DIE-FOR-YAH-CRIMES/
You fore(4)-see yur death when yah catch 5-from-my-nine/
Psychiatrists crack they headz in "empty pools" when they "dive-in-yah-mind" (ooooh...lol)/
Only gotta name because of a loss-to-I-Bo, couldnt impress us wit yur "hip hop skillz" if u flossed-tha-hydros/
Like Jordan, you comin outta North-Carolina, but im "The Greatest" and yur more like the boards-Harold-Minor/
Nuthin but a "flash-in-tha-pan", threw Kane in tha dumpster cus im trashin-you-man/
Standin in line, u and maxi wit cash-in-yah-hand, cus yah rhymez are retail/
Wanted "beef"? get penile implants but im "slashin-yah-plans" n turn u to a female/
U couldnt be a "country boy on the rise" if u rolled wit "Nappy-Roots"/
But i hearda yur music skillz, they say u can really "blow tha happy-flute" lol/ *
I think i fuked up when i made-tha-rules, no KO's so itll take 5 votes to fade-yah-fool, tried to talk shit but ima play-it-cool/
Losin to ToNe 3 times, damn uve really paid-yur-dues..../ ;)
*flute=dick
aiight...give us sum votes yall!
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well, at first I was struggling cuz Kane brought tremendous heat in this one, he had sum killer lines such as:
I’ll put ya in a deep sleep like all tha Z’s when ya type ya S’s//*
I guess KINGS got 2 bitches cuz yall both be rockin dresses//
This’ll be ya last ever title defense isnt that right Tone//
Cuz its impossible to defend a title that you no longer own//
this was impressive. nice work
but overall I think I have to give it to ToNe,if Kane wouldve stayed in the game and spit more often he mighta beat him I think.
i wont quote tone's shit, too much work lol but he was harder, and a few better punchlines. and that "dive-in-ya-mind" lines was off the heezy fa sheezy
peace
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Kane Review:
Kane may be the most formidable morality critic in this battle. Opening up with a viscious attack seranading Tone's character with a series of lyrical artilery strikes. Kane's artilery consists of kryptonite, clips(gun play) knife, and even his bear hands. Kane rhymes concurrently for six bars, with clever wordplay in between. Perhaps even more pervasively withstanding, is the savage irony and a profound deadpan humor consist throughout the middle of his verse. Sleepin (S's) (darkness) (light). This verse was deeply rooted in comedic fiction, however the comedy was dark enough to make the hardest wanna be thug tuck his tail.
Rating: 4.4
Tone Review:
The centralized theme of this verse, is Tone's conscious attempt to poke wholes in Kane's argument. The gashes open up wide after the opening bar. Tone disrespects Kane's name and thus disrespects Kane's history. Tone continues posturing as a cultural critic, speaking to the rise in crack in the 80's in the first bar, and then on to capital punishment with the next. Tone is a depraved sadists from ancient times, when prisons and probation never existed only capital punishment. As the verse develops Tone's psyche becomes exposed, and the vignette is this, Tone is spittin clever bars unconnected in theme. Callin him and Maxi retail does little in the way of strengthening Tone's left hook, and since boxing is the virility symbol of American masses, Tone's masculinity is still squandered. Tone is clever with his metaphors and wordplay like Chino XL and Juice, but fails to sell wood with his themes and concepts.
rating: 4.2
Vote- Kane
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Too late to post up paragraphs.. but I'ma give it to Tone..
That "High Off My Lines" line was crazy... lol.. so was that 4,5,9 thing.. that shit just did it for me.
Props to Kane too though.. he came heated. That Cripwalk/Gangsta Run line was tight. Also attacked Tone's OG CALIFORNIA image... and his KINGS Crew.. That was all good. Just felt Tone's more.
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Damn itz like yah stole mah name, im tha real "Caine" cus u gettin "high-off-my-lines"/
Damn... that line was hot... great opener. Kane, you can gangsta with it, and had a nice flow, but was missing something. ToNe, you came good, but some lines lacked that great killer instink. But over all, I think Kane came more considant. Kane, which makes things interesting...LOL
vote = Kane
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hmmm...
2-2
keep votin yall...
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Kane...
According to me, the 7 first bars are to horrible... you punches to simplistic
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Kane...
According to me,most of the 7 first bars are to horrible... you punches to simplistic... .. overall i think you're instable... you're mixing tight bars with less tight bars...'
tight bars:
Yeah I seen a crip-walk but I never seen a gangsta run//
You "steppin thru tha lyrikal darknezz" , I’ll show u tha lyrical light//**
God is now callin ya name so prepare for a spiritual flight//
Tone:
Not the best shit ive seen from you, but still tight, you're multis were aight, and your punches were strong enough... u also had some decent metha's...
Damn itz like yah stole mah name, im tha real "Caine" cus u gettin "high-off-my-lines"/
Kali servin NY, iz jussa sign-of-tha-times, challengin ToNe iz "CAPITAL punishment" so u DIE-FOR-YAH-CRIMES/
My vote goes to Tone..
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Come On its 3-2 we need more votes
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imma hav 2 go wit kane,tone i no u can cum betta than dat,if ud came wit summat like u came at me wit,u wud of had dis,but i gotta go wit kane
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3 to 3....we need sum more votes yall
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Yo, tight battle, pretty close too...imma make it short, kane had sum good lines, and a lotta potential....good flow too....but tone had sum ill lines, good multies, a lil more "advanced" kinda, i was feelin it more...but close battle, props 2 both of u
vote - ToNe
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aight itz 4-3, im up. More votes yall.
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i gotta give it tah TONE he had more mutlis and rhymes.....
Kane....u only rhymed the end of tha bars most of the time
vote- tone
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aiight, good shit Kane. U had me sweatin on thiz one. Thankz for votin yall. peace....