West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Kill on October 18, 2002, 03:39:49 AM
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Ok, as I said drop as soon as u want
RULES:
> First to 5 votes (3-0 = KO)
> Only persons with more than 100 posts are allowed to vote
> Those persons must post on these boards regularly
> Bar limit 15 max
> U drop 1st as challenger
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o shit....im bak everybody, lol
haha
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You cant even see me, cuz Im quiker than Bruce Lee//
Rest in Peace, yes, you've reached that degree//
Crashing your anatomy, Ill bury u happily//
Gotta agree, you cant even master me//
Luckily, for me, its all gravy...plus u crazy//
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Get Ready...Im about to slim your lyrikal fat wit my rhyming liposuction//
Exploding worse than a spontaneous combustion eaten at a luncheon//
You've sucked since then, cuz I got better diction than a Literature Junction//
You cant even function and you're worse than itch, irritation//
Lyrikal annihilation is my gas sprayed wit madd radiation//
You the president causing me to create a massive assasination//
You cant even get saved from the Emancipation Proclamation//
And for your information, my rhymes are my own creation//
Not biten or chasen, for other's aggrevation//
And not picked up at every other station//
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FuCk.....Im outta "shape", lol
I gotta add another rule...its a MUST...we need detailed voting!!!!
No detailed vote..the vote doesnt count!!
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Good shit R-E-L...You're improving...Keep listening to your rap CDs and you'll improve even more...PeACe
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LIL INTRO:
effervescent expressions infectin affection, you ain't passin the test of this lesson detectin perfection//
I'm dissectin ya message, wreckin this session, you embarassed like homosexuals in front of hoes expectin erection//
battlin ? I'm suggestin neglection, this is continuation dissuasion, hatefully rapin you ain't takin no patience//
degradin invasion of phrases changin behavior cuz you were blatantly crazed, run the day's come, you'll now be facin disgrace son//
...battle the mothafucka down....
whenever ~writin~ I ~rip mics, leave a mark in ya~, R.E.L. couldn't bring "cool punches" ~bitin~ ~"fistfights in Antarctica"~//
like when you "drunk" after ~sick night's I'm leavin "bars" in ya~, ~scarrin ya~, stop the ~bitch lines, they just harmin ya~//
your only "fan" is ~"spinnin on the ceiling"~, I'm ~winnin and revealin~ that you ~really ain't appealing~//
I'm ~killin when defeatin~, far from ~finished when you leavin~ battlin me is worse than ~stealin shit in Eden~//
punches so ~complex~, tryina ~decipher you look wack~ your shit ain't got no ~context~, you just a ~triflin shook twat~//
I ~snipe you like hood cats~ you need "AID(S)" cause if you get "burnt" you ~might be a good "match"~//
~cook "crack(s)"~, still it's fuckin easy to "rip" you, dirtier than ~slum rats~ you ~dumb wack~, now you ~done trapped~//
I "smoke" you ~numb "fag"~ my only kind of "applause" is ~"gun clap"~, bitch you comin with ~"punk" rap~ ?// {{1}}
that's a ~diss to yaself~, these ~missiles ain't held~, "bitch" don't try to "fuck" with my "dawgs", we'd ~diss ya to hell~//
the ~vicious prevails~ you're stuck cause ~piss can't excell~ I'm spittin "heat" that's gettin ~sissies to "melt"~//
{{1}}: In his signature it says "R.E.L. comin with that punk rap"
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Ok heres the breakdown.
R.E.L
Tight verse man, your improving alot, all i can say is keep spittin like that. It was a good verse, your vocab was pretty ill, apart from in the intro and the rhyme scheme could be improved a little, i got nothing against the old skool style.. But switchin some shit up sometimes would be dope. Your flow was good, the simple rhyme structure helped it flow. There wasn't very many direct disses toward Killuminati, i thought u coulda played on his name and maybe brought the pac dickrider lines in there lol. I think at the end of it all thats what lets your rhyme down, no personal disses in there.
Best Line(s):
Exploding worse than a spontaneous combustion eaten at a luncheon//
You've sucked since then, cuz I got better diction than a Literature Junction//
Killuminati
You had a dope verse homie. Your vocab was sick, and that little intro flowed and rhyme real nicely, didnt make much sense but the flow made up for that. The actual main rhyme you wrote didnt flow properly to me, but the rhymes were real dope and the punchlines in the whole verse were tight. Your wordplay was cool too, disses seemed to hit harder than R.E.L's verse.
Best Line(s):
I'm dissectin ya message, wreckin this session, you embarassed like homosexuals in front of hoes expectin erection//
Overall this was a good battle. But the winner for me has to be Killuminati.. Good battle once again.
Peace.
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K i l l u m i n a t i had some dope ass multis and punches...But what I didn't like is that his bars were too long...If u tried to flow that shit over a beat, it wouldn't flow right...U (and most of the keystylers today) have to shorten your bars...Also, I didn't see too many big words in there...Most words were Elementry level words...The fact that u have dope multis doesn't mean shit when u use small words...But, it still is a dope rhyme overall...
REL's rhyme was on a higher vocabulary level, and flowed better, with shorter bars...However, ure punches and multis need to be improved...None-The-Less...My vote goes to R-E-L...PeACe
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Aight 1-1...I think the intro's vocab was aight but yeah the rest of the verse wasn't based on high vocab but on pun(che)s...whutever...more votes
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and as for the bars...many people don't seem to be able to flow my shit like this so I'll change that even though it flows greatly to me, finally it all depends on whut it's like for others
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rel ya have improved a lot but killuminati took this,i managed ta catch how it flowed,it quite simple,he had better punches and multis as well,rel ya were lackin personals
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2-1 thanx 4 the vote...up
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UP VOTES NEEDED
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nice battle yall, very close actually. i thought REL would have no chance b4 i opend this thread cause i thought he stopped rappin cause he was a so called "EMO" or whtever lol but he almost won this shit. high vobab and nice flow yo, but killum took this battle, nice ass punches, i was feelin that shit. vote=Killuminati
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Killuminati came better on this tha metaz punches and all took this Rel u was good but u gotta come a bit better next time playa.
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Tinman, thanx for the vote
Fatal, thanx for the feedback though I can't count ur vote since u ain't got 100 posts yet...that's the rules to this battle, sorry but thanx anyways
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more votes needed
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aint' that a bitch
all good i'll have 100 post before this battles over shit with the length that it takes for a battle to finish round these parts i'll have like 4 or 5 hundred posts.
one.
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aint' that a bitch
all good i'll have 100 post before this battles over shit with the length that it takes for a battle to finish round these parts i'll have like 4 or 5 hundred posts.
one.
lol word. As I said, thx anyways. If you got 100 posts before this is over u can cum back and vote and it has to be counted lol. REL wanted a vet to judge it and then i suggested lettin people vote but no newbies...but that shit on point, every voter's needed...peace
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Votin can be good for your karma ;D
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REL came out very good. His rhymes were good, but mostly seemed like great line just put together, and didn't really have a feeling of being a verse. Killuminati seemed to flow nicely, and he made sense of were his lines were going. Didn't use as big words, but was more effective.
Vote = Killuminati
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does macks vote count or are his voting priveleges removed?
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does macks vote count or are his voting priveleges removed?
It does count. Only Logic wanted to ban him from voting, none of the other mods agreed and Logic ain't even a mod no more...so the only vote that don't count is fatal's since we said 100 posts min.
4-1 up
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It does count. Only Logic wanted to ban him from voting, none of the other mods agreed and Logic ain't even a mod no more...so the only vote that don't count is fatal's since we said 100 posts min.
4-1 up
what u mean my shit don't count read tha posts playa?
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what u mean my shit don't count read tha posts playa?
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It does count now...5-1, it over good battle REL, peace out
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what u mean my shit don't count read tha posts playa?
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It does count now...5-1, it over good battle REL, peace out
thats the stupidest thing i ever heard....but wtvr!!
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thats the stupidest thing i ever heard....but wtvr!!
Chill homie...he confirmed his vote when he already had 100 posts so why shouldn't it count...he said his vote was still the same when he had 100 posts so it can now be counted...ok?
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thats the stupidest thing i ever heard....but wtvr!!
Chill homie...he confirmed his vote when he already had 100 posts so why shouldn't it count...he said his vote was still the same when he had 100 posts so it can now be counted...ok?
ya..ur rite if u look @ it that way, but the whole point of 100+ posts is to have knowledge about rhyming...i dont think his knowledge went up in the past 2 days for boosting up is posts so quik....but wtvr..good battle, i guess
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ya..ur rite if u look @ it that way, but the whole point of 100+ posts is to have knowledge about rhyming...i dont think his knowledge went up in the past 2 days for boosting up is posts so quik....but wtvr..good battle, i guess
well Fatal's votes are always quite detailed and fair IMO. Also he made all his 100 posts on the keystyle boards far as I know and he's one of the most regular voters on this board...so I think it's fair to count his vote now...good battle, peace