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DUBCC - Tha Connection => West Coast Classics => Topic started by: LOCO5150 on June 05, 2009, 01:03:35 PM
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YO WEST UP! THIS LEFT DOGG...I JUST WANT TO HEAR FROM YALL AND TELL ME WHAT YALL THINK...NO RACIST REMARKS PLEASE....IM JUST GRINDIN LIKE EVERYBODY ELSE...RESPECTS!
L-DOG
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Well theres my info I wanted to know on Diamonique like I was asking in my other thread hahaha
Slamming beat. Good club song. Good guest in Diamonique. Lyrics can use some working on, but really, you rocking with Fingazz, you can't go wrong. Your in good hands!
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ORA,
LET ME C WHASAPO
DPGC23
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Well theres my info I wanted to know on Diamonique like I was asking in my other thread hahaha
Slamming beat. Good club song. Good guest in Diamonique. Lyrics can use some working on, but really, you rocking with Fingazz, you can't go wrong. Your in good hands!
SO DO YOU THINK THE LYRICS IS TOO SIMPLE...I WAS TRYIN TO GO FOR LESS IZ MORE...YOU NOW...NIQUE KILLED IT..AND YOU RIGHT FINGAZZ IZ A MONSTER GENIUS .GIVE ME MORE FEED BACK G ON WHAT I SAID JUST KNOW?.ORA,
LET ME C WHASAPO
DPGC23
DID YOU GET AROUND TO IT DOGGY? LET ME KNOW....ANYBODY ELSE BE REAL..I TAKE CRITICSM SO ITS ALL HOOD. IF YOU FEELIN IT..THEN STR8...IF NOT TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK IT NEEDS.
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wasn't feeling it...sounded too much like lil wayne...at least the beat part...
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THE BEAT SOUNDED LIKE LIL WAYNE? WHIXCH SONG? I THOUGHT IT SOUNDS A LIL ON THE LIL JOHN TIP BUT ALRIGHT...THATS COOL THANKS FOR COMMENTING G.
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:o-OHH! LOL.
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Well theres my info I wanted to know on Diamonique like I was asking in my other thread hahaha
Slamming beat. Good club song. Good guest in Diamonique. Lyrics can use some working on, but really, you rocking with Fingazz, you can't go wrong. Your in good hands!
SO DO YOU THINK THE LYRICS IS TOO SIMPLE...I WAS TRYIN TO GO FOR LESS IZ MORE...YOU NOW...NIQUE KILLED IT..AND YOU RIGHT FINGAZZ IZ A MONSTER GENIUS .GIVE ME MORE FEED BACK G ON WHAT I SAID JUST KNOW?.ORA,
LET ME C WHASAPO
DPGC23
DID YOU GET AROUND TO IT DOGGY? LET ME KNOW....ANYBODY ELSE BE REAL..I TAKE CRITICSM SO ITS ALL HOOD. IF YOU FEELIN IT..THEN STR8...IF NOT TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK IT NEEDS.
I just gave the track another listen.
You kinda sounding like a hardcore version of Joel Ortiz, without the lyrical content.
Ok, so I see where you going, less is more, I getcha. Simplyifying the track. Its ok to dumb down the lyrics for singles and that 'cause it seems to make for better listening, and mainstream appeal is 'dumbed down' so Lyrics is ok. Its the delivery, like fits well with this club track, but shouting and sounding all hardcore and that, personally I don't know If I could listen to a whole album like this.
So this track is good.
In other words, track is cool, but delivery for the rest of your project? Are other songs you working on gonna use more word play? Do you have different flow/delivery methods to switch it up? Personally for me I like creativness and thinking outside the square, you know something different and fresh.
Hope that makes sense, and can help out?
By the way who gonna do the 3rd verse? See if you can get a Mr Criminal or someone like this if you looking for another guest.
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I GOT YOU...THANKS FOR ALL THAT.....THE ALBUM IS BANGING BUT I WOULD LIKE FOR YOU TO BE THE JUDGES OF COURSE....ITS WELL WRITTEN BUT LIKE I SAID IVE HEARD PLENTY OF SINGLES THAT DUMBED DOWN THE LYRICS AND THEY CAME OUT HARD....ITS WHAT YOU GOTTA DO SOMETIMES AND I DONT FEEL LIKE IM CHANGING MYSELF...ITS STILL ME...STREET WISE....AND I DONT SCREAM IN EVERY SONG...LOL...BUT I UNDERSTAND THAT WOULD GET ANNOYING....WHEN THE SONGS FINALLY DONE I'LL POST IT UP WITH A GOOD MIX AND ASK FOR THE TRUTH...
OVERALL I STILL WOULD LIKE MORE FEEDBACK...BUT SLIKK J THANKS FOR YOUR HONEST OPINION....AND KAYOTTIC FROM OUR GROUP THE SUSPECTS WAS GONNA BE THE 3RD VERSE...YOU CAN NEVER GO WRONG WITH FEATURES EVERYBODY KNOWS THAT. I JUST DONT KNOW IF I WANNA GO THERE....I WOULD LIKE EVERYBODY TO REALLY HEAR US AND SEE IF WE WILL STAND OUT. PERSONALLY I THINK WE WILL.
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EY SLIKK_J YOU CAN CHECK OUT MORE MUSICK HERE ON MY PAGE... HTTP://WWW.MYSPACE.COM/LEFTYKNUCKLES....AND HERES SOMETHING ELSE WE TRYIN FOR RADIO. LET ME KNOW.
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:o-OHH! LOL.
you got my drift, playa? ;D
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I GOT YOU...THANKS FOR ALL THAT.....THE ALBUM IS BANGING BUT I WOULD LIKE FOR YOU TO BE THE JUDGES OF COURSE....ITS WELL WRITTEN BUT LIKE I SAID IVE HEARD PLENTY OF SINGLES THAT DUMBED DOWN THE LYRICS AND THEY CAME OUT HARD....ITS WHAT YOU GOTTA DO SOMETIMES AND I DONT FEEL LIKE IM CHANGING MYSELF...ITS STILL ME...STREET WISE....AND I DONT SCREAM IN EVERY SONG...LOL...BUT I UNDERSTAND THAT WOULD GET ANNOYING....WHEN THE SONGS FINALLY DONE I'LL POST IT UP WITH A GOOD MIX AND ASK FOR THE TRUTH...
OVERALL I STILL WOULD LIKE MORE FEEDBACK...BUT SLIKK J THANKS FOR YOUR HONEST OPINION....AND KAYOTTIC FROM OUR GROUP THE SUSPECTS WAS GONNA BE THE 3RD VERSE...YOU CAN NEVER GO WRONG WITH FEATURES EVERYBODY KNOWS THAT. I JUST DONT KNOW IF I WANNA GO THERE....I WOULD LIKE EVERYBODY TO REALLY HEAR US AND SEE IF WE WILL STAND OUT. PERSONALLY I THINK WE WILL.
well, you just be you..and all is gravy.
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HELL YAH...I GOT YOU G. NO DOUBT.
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wut up lefty...kool track ..catchy hook knockn beat
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dude this slaps. U dont want racist comments but i have to tell u man i like to hear Mexican rappers on different type of beats and this is it. Fingazz.... u really cant lose with dude. Glad to see Diamonique still doin it. I swear i was just wonderin whats up with her and he homeless nation
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YO WEST UP! THIS LEFT DOGG...I JUST WANT TO HEAR FROM YALL AND TELL ME WHAT YALL THINK...NO RACIST REMARKS PLEASE....IM JUST GRINDIN LIKE EVERYBODY ELSE...RESPECTS!
L-DOG
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decent club tune, diamonique's got a good flow and wordplay, the other rapper represents too, he's got a good flow
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Sup man, I would suggest that you work more on your multi-syllable rhyming to give your lyrics a more professional and dope sound. Obviously your aren't going to be writing Illmatic or Relapse or anything like that but putting a bit more work in to that side of the game would have everything sounding crisper overall I think.
Keep grindin and keep us posted.
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FIRST I'D LIKE TO SAY THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT AND POSITIVE FEEDBACK...IT FEELS GOOD TO HEAR YOUR OPINIONS AND I WILL WORK ON THE THINGS I WAS TOLD TO DO BETTER. I KNOW I STILL GO A LOT TO WORK ON...I WILL DEFINATELY KEEP YALL UP TO DATE WITH NEW MUSIC, EVENTS AND PROJECTS THAT THE SUSPECTS ARE DOING. 8)
P.S. NEED MORE FEEDBACK ON THE CUT PLEASE. LOL.
ROBBS WEST UP AND I KNOW KAIZER SOSE FROM MYSPACE,,WEST IT DO? KEEP IT 100 FAMILY!
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MACADOMUSIC THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT...WE MAKIN SHIT CRACK DOGGY...CHECK OUT THE VIDEO PERFORMANCE ON THE THREADS.
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EY SLIKK_J YOU CAN CHECK OUT MORE MUSICK HERE ON MY PAGE... HTTP://WWW.MYSPACE.COM/LEFTYKNUCKLES....AND HERES SOMETHING ELSE WE TRYIN FOR RADIO. LET ME KNOW.
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Love 2 love u - I like this. Got that dope old school bass guitar unplugged beat, wih the singing hook, female background vocals, Talkbox (Is that Fingazz once more :D), good street sounding verses (without sounding over the top)...
Icy Flows And Whips - Nice grimey sounding track....this song fits your style to a T. Good street track!
Raised in the hood - I like the samples in the hook, but apart from that, doesn't appeal much to me....kinda doesn't stand out from the rest of the hood tracks...
Gangstas Menatl - Same as Raised in the hood except with a not so flash hook...is that Spider Loc in the track? But yeah not feeling it
Been so long - Apart from the singing, I like this track...unfortunately majority is singing. verse cool. Beat cool.
Westcoast Warlords - Hard gangsta posse cut. Not my taste no more, back in the days I would though, but thats just me. Def not knocking the track. It does what its suppose to do....Its Gangsta, it's hard, it represents....Everyone comes off hard.
Suspects 'Til Proven Innocent - Another street track....not bad...message is clear in the track. beat cool. Not too flash, but not bad.
Love 2 love u and Icey Flows And Whips are dope. Like them two. This dierction along with the Diamonique track means your in the right track. But overall, like 'KaiserSoze said, like to hear you working on more multi-syllable rhymes to take your game to a new level.
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ALRIGHT IMMA GET CRACKED ON...LMAO...BUT WHAT THE FUCK IZ MULTI-SYLLABLE G? LOL......I WAS SITTIN HERE LIKE THESE FORUM PEOPLES IZ GONNA CLOWN MY ASS...YAH I LIKES THE ONE YOU LIKED AS WELL...TALKBOX WAS DONE BY KILLA-CAL AS WELL AS PRODUCTION ON THE TRACK...EDDIE CANE AND BETTY BOO DOING VOCALS ALONG WITH ME. RAISED N THE HOOD IZ TIGHT BUT I UNDERSTAND IF YOU AINT FEELING IT..
GANGSTAHS MENTAEL HAS BEEN CHANGED SLIGHTLY WITH KAYOTTIC ROCKIN THE 2ND VERSE AND NOT THE OTHER DUDE...AND YAH THATS SPIDER-LOC ON IT... ITHOUGHT YOU WOULD OF FELT THIS ONE FOR SURE...BUT ITS COOL...PRODUCTION BY KILA CAL AS WELL..
BEEN SO LONG IS ACTUALLY A NICE SONG. ANYWAYS WEST COAST WARLORDS IS REVAMPED AS WELL. BUT I APPRECIATE YOU TAKEN THE TIME TO CHECK OUT THE PAGE.