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Title: this pain
Post by: IslamInevitable on September 12, 2009, 01:13:51 AM
imma speak on this pain right here man..

its like puttin a knife to ya flesh/ puttin ya life to a test/ my eyes have wept over the lives that've left/
its hard to accept and even harder to forget.../
this pain and agony/ i keep myself occupied with play & vanity/
every days' insanity/ ppl say they mad at me/
cuz i had potential/ now im sad & vengeaful, resentful for all the shit my fams been through/
i gotta pound of hate and a pint of luv/ niggaz say hope, i might have once/ at the sight of the duns/
the little ones, im supposed to safeguard/ but the playground got turned to a graveyard/
so i pray to God/ to make me vanish/ this pain and anguish is eatin me away, my brain is damaged/
docs give me prozac, but its too late for that shit/
im that uprooted tree, that used to be, viewed as green, but now my hue is seen by the true and keen as a casualty lyin at lucifers knee/
oozin from a bleed cuz he broke a truce that we agreed, so i had make moves that seemed crude and extreme, a million dead & countin thats news for ya B...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NOFkPypOcgk

Title: Re: this pain
Post by: Roccy on September 12, 2009, 02:51:22 AM
imma speak on this pain right here man..

im that uprooted tree, that used to be, viewed as green, but now my hue is seen by the true and keen as a casualty lyin at lucifers knee/
oozin from a bleed cuz he broke a truce that we agreed, so i had make moves that seemed crude and extreme, a million dead & countin thats news for ya B...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NOFkPypOcgk



good shit.
Title: Re: this pain
Post by: IslamInevitable on September 12, 2009, 06:34:19 AM
Good looks brah' but that last part needed a lot of work on the flow...
Title: Re: this pain
Post by: .:DaYg0sTyLz:. on September 12, 2009, 12:09:05 PM
Good shit. The flow wasnt bad man, u can make it work...just switch the beat up halfway through lol. Naw, but I was feelin it.
Title: Re: this pain
Post by: QuietTruth on September 12, 2009, 01:30:44 PM
Your fuckin' lyrics mennnnnnnnnnnn.

HEATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!

Honestly.

Crazy.
Title: Re: this pain
Post by: IslamInevitable on September 12, 2009, 03:58:12 PM

Crazy.

yea it came from my heart, so i just let it out
Title: Re: this pain
Post by: TraceOneInfinite on September 12, 2009, 06:12:54 PM

im that uprooted tree, that used to be, viewed as green, but now my hue is seen by the true and keen as a casualty lyin at lucifers knee/
oozin from a bleed cuz he broke a truce that we agreed, so i had make moves that seemed crude and extreme


That's sick man.. you took it to another level with this one.  Probably the best I've heard from you
Title: Re: this pain
Post by: Nutty on September 12, 2009, 06:55:28 PM

im that uprooted tree, that used to be, viewed as green, but now my hue is seen by the true and keen as a casualty lyin at lucifers knee/
oozin from a bleed cuz he broke a truce that we agreed, so i had make moves that seemed crude and extreme


That's sick man.. you took it to another level with this one.  Probably the best I've heard from you

That line is super nice.
Title: Re: this pain
Post by: LAXCENTRAL on September 12, 2009, 11:37:22 PM
imma speak on this pain right here man..

its like puttin a knife to ya flesh/ puttin ya life to a test/ my eyes have wept over the lives that've left/
its hard to accept and even harder to forget.../
this pain and agony/ i keep myself occupied with play & vanity/
every days' insanity/ ppl say they mad at me/
cuz i had potential/ now im sad & vengeaful, resentful for all the shit my fams been through/
i gotta pound of hate and a pint of luv/ niggaz say hope, i might have once/ at the sight of the duns/
the little ones, im supposed to safeguard/ but the playground got turned to a graveyard/
so i pray to God/ to make me vanish/ this pain and anguish is eatin me away, my brain is damaged/
docs give me prozac, but its too late for that shit/
im that uprooted tree, that used to be, viewed as green, but now my hue is seen by the true and keen as a casualty lyin at lucifers knee/
oozin from a bleed cuz he broke a truce that we agreed, so i had make moves that seemed crude and extreme, a million dead & countin thats news for ya B...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NOFkPypOcgk


good shit nah man not even fuck that


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this is some fuckin great shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: this pain
Post by: LAXCENTRAL on September 12, 2009, 11:38:03 PM
Your fuckin' lyrics mennnnnnnnnnnn.

HEATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!

Honestly.

Crazy.
yeah i know what u mean...
Title: Re: this pain
Post by: The Phoenix on September 14, 2009, 04:44:55 AM
Your fuckin' lyrics mennnnnnnnnnnn.

HEATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!

Honestly.

Crazy.
yeah i know what u mean...
Good shit.
Title: Re: this pain
Post by: Nigga_With_An_Additude on September 14, 2009, 12:49:05 PM
nice man nice put it to a beat............