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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Suga Foot on November 13, 2002, 07:55:58 PM

Title: <<<<Brand New Verse>>>>
Post by: Suga Foot on November 13, 2002, 07:55:58 PM

aight this is like my 3rd ever attempt at writing rhymes.  This is just some shit i've been going through.  It's short but sweet.  It's kind of good therapy.  Here it is:


With all this pain inside/
it's wonder how i survive/
everyday i strive to push the pain deeper inside/
and turn it into love for the people i'm beside/
Don't let noone in this life of yours tell you different/
life is too short, don't sweat the little things, or else you'll miss it/
and just when things are starting to look up/
please believe someone will be there tryin to fuck it up/
that's why you gotta look past the bad and find the good in things/
if you don't, you'll just be drunk and that ain't solvin anything/
The moral of my story you see is quite simple/
enjoy life, the good, the bad,  the happy, sad, just find a person in you.

Title: Re:<<<<Brand New Verse>>>>
Post by: 'Illicit' on November 14, 2002, 09:30:36 AM

i liked it,  should keep it comin man

Title: Re:<<<<Brand New Verse>>>>
Post by: Reef on November 14, 2002, 10:59:47 AM

that was pretty tight man!! Conciderin it was your 3rd rhyme ever.

Its real.. and your right.. alotta the time its thearapy.. keep it up homie

Title: Re:<<<<Brand New Verse>>>>
Post by: @Ss@sSiN on November 15, 2002, 07:44:45 AM

nice, felt it, keep it comming

Title: Re:<<<<Brand New Verse>>>>
Post by: bez on November 15, 2002, 01:55:33 PM

If I am hones ti was ok, simple but effective but too short.