West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: HBKid_Jr on December 03, 2002, 07:06:50 PM
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ight imma drop first, i'll drop in a lil while, first 2 5 wins right. make it 25-35 bars instead
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Time for the Dawn, turn the pages to the second to last Surah in the Qur'an/
As I seek refuge with Allah at daybreak, and spit flames aimed directly at Tom/
Gaurd me against those who biuld, create, and attribute to you things manmade/
Gaurd me against the break of the day, Restrain me against those thou lead astray
I prepare for the day of judgement, and send out my prayer for peace/
Ameen.............
continued...
Bismillah Al-Rakman Al-Raheem, Qol Al Oozoo Bilrapal Falaq/
Allah strengthen me, against those who snake me behind my back/
Those whispering words of envy, and throwing obstructions in my path/
Those who practice jealousy, and forget where they are at/
Time for Tom to be put in his place, he wants to make this battle about race/
But truth moves past mere profiling, and after death we see the eyes of the unseen/
The one true God who has knowledge of all things, Allah keep me clean/
Purify my soul, against this man who has made my destruction his only goal/
Allah my only goal is to you, your promise is true, your deen is true/
Allah restrain me from taking this man to Nigeria and enforcing the Shariah/
And stoning him to death, I won't be militant if that is what pleases ya/
He loves me but doesn't like himself enough, I can't figure out what he wants/
He's obliterated himself, self-effaced his own soul, it's hard to show restraint/
I must take him out and seal his fate, he hates me cause I'm everything he ain't/
This kid only stays in one place, I try to move forward, he invades my space/
So Allah please erase this hate in my heart I want to kill him with kindness/
Please guide these wicked mischief makers livin with blinders on their eyelids!!!
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fuck i aint reading your rhyme an it aint worth it//
aint waisting my time 2 read one line an that hurts kid//
cuz i used to consider you a close homie//
but now im bitter, punk wigger can blow me//
this aint no childs game u now my rival//
an exposing you is vital to my survival like a priest needs his bible//
now i aint hatin but imma expose you like a actor wit bad character//
you caucasian that would kill 2 be an african in america//
sayin worshippin christ is damn near homosexual//
you gotta be kidding right, some intellectual//
it was you tha white osama makin a religion based around 2pac in reality//
an u dissed tha homie trauma but its u that needs to check his sexuality//
but rhymin bout how u gay played out like your anti american judgement an thoughts//
an im lovin it cuz u fuckin wit a ghostface killah like tony starks//
an what im about 2 say will shake tha ground from missouri to tha african safari//
its goin leave infinite well dont like fried calamari an i aint goin say sorry//
atleast i didnt turn my dad into an alacholic//
when times got bad my dad was able to control it//
in 7th grade my family was poor an chistmas missed me//
but i didnt have to turn to whiskey//
blaming others is your motto but atleast i now try to confront my problems//
i didnt have to resort to a 40 oz bottle//
you try to act all pure but ur jus a pompous asshole//
but i kno ur insecure, a self conscience soul//
i may be a moron an i kno i far from perfect//
but atleast i dont hide behind a quran an worship rappers that glorify murder//
you a joke to tha world of muslims//
sayin white girls r devils an u look up to druggies that be thuggin//
tha shit i drop be tha truest, word is bond//
im almost done jus in time for u to worship your louis farankanh//
now when it comes to multis an ill metaphors//
im guilty, infinite got tha skill to get better scores//
an believe it or not writing jus shit hurt yo//
but it was infinite that said lets get personal//
an if infinte tries to expose my life in his rhyme//
remember i never held back an laid it all on tha line for yall to look into my eyes an analyze//
so vote for who u feel//
but also take into consideration who dropped tha real
yo infinite, im sorry it had to come 2 this
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Tom murdered him. Anybody that doesn't think so must be blind,... Hold up, just got an email... be right back....
Oh, that was Muhammad. he said Tom smashed brian. Anyways, Tom's was doper we can all see why. While Brian's better than his orignal record setting wackability, this time he at least had a coherant structure to his ...um... 'flows'. Tom's was pretty good, hitting brian hard where he needed it, and basically smashing him in all of the areas (well, not all, we'd be here all day) that Brian can be clowned in... it's the equivalent of clowning me about elvis and michael jackson, you know stuff like that. Brian left himself wide open talking so much about god, but then used to worship Tupac; so I say tom by a mile, everything he said was the best type of diss, personal and the straight up truth.
Vote = Tom
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Aight, I ain't into Hall Of Mirrors / Train Of Thought beef about race, religion or whatever, so I'ma try to neutrally judge these verses; Infinite you got a dope and very unique style, only I think your shit wasn't that much of a battle verse; of course you attacked Tom and you might've hit him but Tom did this differently cuz, even though I can only assume what your beef is about, he threw direct punches at you and seemed to hit harder. It might have been kinda simple at times but Tom took this because of his way of dissin IMO
VOTE = WHITE AND PROUD
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Aight, I ain't into Hall Of Mirrors / Train Of Thought beef about race, religion or whatever, so I'ma try to neutrally judge these verses; Infinite you got a dope and very unique style, only I think your shit wasn't that much of a battle verse; of course you attacked Tom and you might've hit him but Tom did this differently cuz, even though I can only assume what your beef is about, he threw direct punches at you and seemed to hit harder. It might have been kinda simple at times but Tom took this because of his way of dissin IMO
VOTE = WHITE AND PROUD
I respect your vote and everything but that's not fair to say mine wasn't much of a battle verse. Did you read it? It's the Ramadaan, I can't be cussing, using abusive, foul-mouthed invective... I had to spit like this... and if you read it I don't see how it isn't a battle verse man. I think ya'll have a limited imagination as to what a battle verse should be. That's what holds back this board and that's why everybodies rhymes look the same at the forum.
Anyway, I respect your vote, just had to explain why I came the way I did.
1. It's the Ramadaan, so I can't be cussing, using foul-mouthed invective
2. To try to show everyone that I can write a battle verse that doesn't look the same as anyone elses.
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I respect your vote and everything but that's not fair to say mine wasn't much of a battle verse. Did you read it? It's the Ramadaan, I can't be cussing, using abusive, foul-mouthed invective... I had to spit like this... and if you read it I don't see how it isn't a battle verse man. I think ya'll have a limited imagination as to what a battle verse should be. That's what holds back this board and that's why everybodies rhymes look the same at the forum.
Anyway, I respect your vote, just had to explain why I came the way I did.
1. It's the Ramadaan, so I can't be cussing, using foul-mouthed invective
2. To try to show everyone that I can write a battle verse that doesn't look the same as anyone elses.
Infinite, you do have a point and I might not have explained my vote well. I got no time now but I will comment later...until then you don't have to count my vote so you don't get KO'd in case Tom gets a 3rd one
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I respect your vote and everything but that's not fair to say mine wasn't much of a battle verse. Did you read it? It's the Ramadaan, I can't be cussing, using abusive, foul-mouthed invective... I had to spit like this... and if you read it I don't see how it isn't a battle verse man. I think ya'll have a limited imagination as to what a battle verse should be. That's what holds back this board and that's why everybodies rhymes look the same at the forum.
Anyway, I respect your vote, just had to explain why I came the way I did.
1. It's the Ramadaan, so I can't be cussing, using foul-mouthed invective
2. To try to show everyone that I can write a battle verse that doesn't look the same as anyone elses.
Infinite, you do have a point and I might not have explained my vote well. I got no time now but I will comment later...until then you don't have to count my vote so you don't get KO'd in case Tom gets a 3rd one
Fair enough.
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I think ya'll have a limited imagination as to what a battle verse should be. That's what holds back this board and that's why everybodies rhymes look the same at the forum
If I was to attack you now I could say that you insinuated that I'm a narrow-minded person, makin a narrow-minded comment yourself; it's not that I keep stickin to my 'limited imagination', and neither 'everybody's rhymes look the same'. I don't think you can say that
1. It's the Ramadaan, so I can't be cussing, using foul-mouthed invective
Ok, I admit that I didn't think about that. On the other hand, net-thuggin doesn't equal droppin a dope verse...see:
Mothafuckin bitch I'ma fuckin kill your shitty bitch ass click//
then I rape your mothafuckin mother and get ya fuckin neck slit//
this is full of cussin, but it's wack as fuck. The fact you didn't cuss at all might have lead me to sayin it wasn't too much of a battle verse, but there's another point: Tom's verse wouldn't have been too impressive if he had thrown the foulest language he knows at you, he did use cuss words but that wasn't what made the difference - the personal attacks did. See, I don't know much about your beef, but it's obvious this ain't a fun battles and IMO Tom hit you harder than you hit him and he did by writin disses directly aimed at you
ou caucasian that would kill 2 be an african in america//
sayin worshippin christ is damn near homosexual//
you gotta be kidding right, some intellectual//
it was you tha white osama makin a religion based around 2pac in reality//
an u dissed tha homie trauma but its u that needs to check his sexuality//
...know what I mean ?
2. To try to show everyone that I can write a battle verse that doesn't look the same as anyone elses.
I said it was dope and unique. Don't overlook that
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CLose battle ya'll, infinite, your verse was nice, deep, i respect the style, but tom you hit him harder, and a lot personal, if it was a poetic battle or sumting, infinite woulda got it, peace
vote - tom
-{bLaDe}
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I'ma definitly give this one to Tom...
Infinite came with some good shit, but I saw no real direct punches.
Infinite...I understand the Ramadaan N shit, but does that mean you can't hit the man with some ill punches? To me, and I'ma be real here...I wouldn't even consider that a battle verse at all. You're in a battle with a dude, and all you're talkin about is your religion and shit...
Tom came out hungry, and pretty much ate up Infinite's rhyme and shit it out...
My vote goes to Tom...
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it's wack that you have to cuss and act hard to win these days. There's no such thing as beating someone intellectually anymore. F this whole keystyle forum. For real!!
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it's wack that you have to cuss and act hard to win these days. There's no such thing as beating someone intellectually anymore. F this whole keystyle forum. For real!!
didn't I get my point across ? Short version: It's not the cuss words or newt-thuggin it's the attacks and they don't need to be based upon "actin hard"
You do need to hit sumbody in sum way. What do you understand by "beatin sumone intellectually" ? Punches don't need to include cash, guns & bitches, they can definitely be intellectual. But if you write a complicated essay about stoichiometry then of course you can't win a battle. It's still called battle for a reason. That's my point and I think it's pretty much what the other voters thought
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it's wack that you have to cuss and act hard to win these days. There's no such thing as beating someone intellectually anymore. F this whole keystyle forum. For real!!
Apparently you didn't hear Kill-you-minati....
Listen to him...dude knows what he's talkin about...
I don't win battles because I act like a thug(which I never do), or because I cuss all the time(which I don't)...I win battles because I use complex vocabulary, intellectual stuff you don't hear everyday, and I throw hard punches...
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it's wack that you have to cuss and act hard to win these days. There's no such thing as beating someone intellectually anymore. F this whole keystyle forum. For real!!
Homie, peep a few bars from my battle against Pr1mo ..
I erase-n-chop-up-yo-fame, bLaDe;-the-illest-in-this-game like playin scrabble-n-spellin A-I-D-S; the day u'll beat me, is when straights start-walkin in gay-parades ~/
Feel this-in-ya-frame, you waz on the top-of-the-game, but your fallin like the tower of babel-compellin the dark-symbolizem of ace-of-spades~/
Leavin mankind confined in the perils of my mind; Primo couldnt bust-a-rhyme if he was a chiropractor who broke-necks~/
I soak-techs in deep rhymes so I can spray liqued linguiestics, which rusts-ya-mind bouncin ya head harder than bad checks~/
I bust-caps like cops exposing-illegal-production-of-hats, deep impact like Téa Leoni, pack lethal heat like burnin fedex packs filled-with-anthrax~/
The Earths crust-collapse, causin quakes with murderious-raps, radiatin paradoxial blows-of-destruction-with-ill-syntax~/
Digital scripts burn like cds; whoever labeled you an MC, was as confused as columbus namin america the west-indies~/
Ballistic-hits hyper-text connects likes fiber optical cable, lyrics thurst and rise like blood pressure due to Craigs supressed-artiries~/
In None of those bars, did I swear, peace
-{bLaDe}
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it's wack that you have to cuss and act hard to win these days. There's no such thing as beating someone intellectually anymore. F this whole keystyle forum. For real!!
Homie, peep a few bars from my battle against Pr1mo ..
I erase-n-chop-up-yo-fame, bLaDe;-the-illest-in-this-game like playin scrabble-n-spellin A-I-D-S; the day u'll beat me, is when straights start-walkin in gay-parades ~/
Feel this-in-ya-frame, you waz on the top-of-the-game, but your fallin like the tower of babel-compellin the dark-symbolizem of ace-of-spades~/
Leavin mankind confined in the perils of my mind; Primo couldnt bust-a-rhyme if he was a chiropractor who broke-necks~/
I soak-techs in deep rhymes so I can spray liqued linguiestics, which rusts-ya-mind bouncin ya head harder than bad checks~/
I bust-caps like cops exposing-illegal-production-of-hats, deep impact like Téa Leoni, pack lethal heat like burnin fedex packs filled-with-anthrax~/
The Earths crust-collapse, causin quakes with murderious-raps, radiatin paradoxial blows-of-destruction-with-ill-syntax~/
Digital scripts burn like cds; whoever labeled you an MC, was as confused as columbus namin america the west-indies~/
Ballistic-hits hyper-text connects likes fiber optical cable, lyrics thurst and rise like blood pressure due to Craigs supressed-artiries~/
In None of those bars, did I swear, peace
-{bLaDe}
Your still trying to act hard, talking about bustin caps, and spittin the same old I'm a better mc because of this, you can't be an mc if you did a 360 degree, blah, blah blah..... Like I said.... I love everyone that posted on this thread except Tom... but as far as the keystyle forum goes.... F the whole FORUM!!!!!!
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don't be bitter man be sports man about it and just rematch him and spit more intense battle shit...tom only won cuz he had alot of personal matieral on u in general he usally got ripped...ifinate i know u can step it up come on now
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infinite...LOL...crying like a little bitch...LOL...tom mashed on you...allah didnt help you much there....and quit trying to act like you're some philosopher intellect type...where did you get your degree???....
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Your still trying to act hard, talking about bustin caps, and spittin the same old I'm a better mc because of this, you can't be an mc if you did a 360 degree, blah, blah blah..... Like I said.... I love everyone that posted on this thread except Tom... but as far as the keystyle forum goes.... F the whole FORUM!!!!!!
Man, spittin with "Intellect" is cool. But like everybody said, it IS a battle verse. Not a religious debate homie. Not to mention, theres plenty of people who spit with "Intellect" without using big words or speaking on religion to do so. To me, metaphors and wordplay demonstrate some of the biggest displayz of "Intellect" and u HATE mine, I-Bo and othas styles that are the same (lol that Pr1mo spits wit the same style and he's in yur crew). U lost dogg. It aint a big deal. Ive lost, just like everyone else on here. Even if u feel hated on, u still gotta deal with it. I feel youve hated on me before HARD, on votes. But oh well, i dealt with it. I didnt vote on this shit, but i woulda gave it to Tom as well. If u wanna quit wit keystyle, thas up to u. You aint been active really anywayz. But, u were the #1 advocate about this being a place to elevate...not just compete. And now u lose, and u just say..."FUck the forum!". Im coo wit u for tha most part on thiz board. But u needa check yahself wit this keystyle shit. Yurra vet here, so if u aint gonna help make it better, then yur only makin it worse. Peace...