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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: 3-l33t on December 14, 2002, 05:50:35 AM

Title: My first drop.. (feedback plz)
Post by: 3-l33t on December 14, 2002, 05:50:35 AM

(im new to this so :) be nice)


It's all like a game of chess piece by piece ill rise above the rest::
When y'all desceased ima still be here, dropin rhymes till the end of time::
Dis shit is hotter than Oj trial::
Im new, AND better you, Ima let it show, It'll shine on threw like the bright sun over the morning dew::
"illicit"(illest) should be my name, Mah dawgs know spittin lyrics is mah game::
Respect or no respect iz all the same, if you believe not you iz insane::
3-l33t droppin his first line, don't get happy soon ill be takin y0 fame::
Ya broke ass should apply for food stamps, cause ya babys momma getting mad crampz::
Imda champ with the big name 3-l33t blowing ya spot-n-takin ya fame.

Title: Re:My first drop.. (feedback plz)
Post by: 'Illicit' on December 14, 2002, 07:01:34 AM

if you call yourself illicit, we'll have a problem. cant be 2 of em lol.

not bad for your first drop btw, keep workin on it.

Title: Re:My first drop.. (feedback plz)
Post by: 3-l33t on December 14, 2002, 08:06:38 AM

it was a joke to you :)

Title: Re:My first drop.. (feedback plz)
Post by: 'Illicit' on December 14, 2002, 08:20:00 AM

 8) itz coo

Title: Re:My first drop.. (feedback plz)
Post by: ~|~PimpFemcee~|~ on December 14, 2002, 12:05:45 PM

right.. :D Tight spit..I see you taken my way with tha little :: instead of bars  ;D lol anyways...nice spit fah sho..

Title: Re:My first drop.. (feedback plz)
Post by: Reef on December 15, 2002, 12:43:13 PM

nice shit.. Keep spittin and improve man..