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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: BOX5 the best poster on this site yell on September 17, 2010, 06:28:25 PM
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this the unrefined version of this song yell
N.A.S. (Not Anotha Succa) produced by tut
http://www.zshare.net/audio/805196142452df8c/
met a girl pipe'd her raw wife'd her had kids and all
she got spoiled, yet still she wasn't loyal/
now even if i fall outta love i'm forced to stay
leave and abort pay i'm facing a short stay,in jail
even tho overall i think i'll prevail
i hate spending time in court rooms or siting in a cell/
so i give my best effort,to make it work
but no matter what i get jerked & left feeling hurt/
can't believe the woman i was honoring & swore was the greatest
was more concerned with only garnisheeing my wages/
& a lifestyle of luxury that i made possible
a good guy yet i'm parting with lots of doe/
cause the government said i owe what she want
yeah i made it yet they tell me how much i'll spend a month/
agree to the initial terms,then her greedy friend whore's
get her ears convince her she deserves more/
I'm like WHAT? i put you on a pedestal
hit you with chipper jones & moved you out the ghetto/
& the gifts that i gave her that she favor's
is the plastic surg'd D-CUPS,babies, and no pre nup/
yeah i married without a pre nup i know yall think'n not anotha succa
who didn't learn from all the trials & trib's of others/
but i was in love truly,like them old blacc & white movies
where folks took a chance on romance (but i got burnt)
this parting comes,
without welcome
well I'd assume, you and i would be together, OH!
what a fool!
hurt but not dead i move on with life
work for my bread tho poccets are now light/
er,then they were,with her
gold digging ass,spending my cash/
plus the IRS straight put me on blast
letting the public know that my income is trash/
and all props over the years i amassed
i lost,and now part of my distant past/
going from being one of the best to laughing stocc
has got me on 24/7 suicide watch/
fam views me as a failure i feel the same
then out da blue meet a dame who helps my fortunes change/
bacc on my feet and outta debt once more
& doubling the income i made before/
get the word i'm having twins out on tour
couple of months pass they passed now my heart's sore/
come home, grieve over my seeds with my lady
ex wants doe it's no! so it's fucc my babies!!!/
enraged! hit up her spot & soon as i'm let in
i go for her throat & begin TO CHOKE!!/
as she stops breathing,someone creeps in
i hear a pistol cocc,turn around and get shot!/
FUCC! i caught one to the gut,i look up
and suddenly my eyes shut.../
this parting comes,
without welcome
well I'd assume, you and i would be together, OH!
what a fool!
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nice.
you sound similiar to King Tipsy at times...
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props my equal yell
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props my equal yell
oh you posted it here too, nice
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loved the beat, not the rapping though.
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This is pretty dope IMO. I'm not feelin' the hook though.
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This is dope! Co-sign the soulful hook!
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thanks for the feedback people
box sent me the original song that i sampled the hook from , i played some guitar and bass on it and tried to make it sound like the original .
i sent every version to box for approval so i can´t really say i produced this all by myself
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good looking out tut much respect for that, and thanks for all that took time to checc it out yell
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The beat is fucking fire. Lyrics are dope but imo your flow needs a little work. Some of the words aren't fully pronounced. Dope though.
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That beat is off the chain! Good good Tut, shit.
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thanks guys, appreciate the feedback . good to hear you liked it , i guess i could upload some more of my beats.
i´ve done some with Petey too but it´s up to him if we´re going to upload those old beats here. and i´m working on some more material with both Box and Petey ( as soon as i get my work out of the way )
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Yo can you hook me up with the instrumental of this?
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Yo can you hook me up with the instrumental of this?
i´ll have to ask box if he´s cool with it, don´t know about his plans for this song