West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96' on June 23, 2011, 05:12:37 PM
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built up a tolerance to the ganja
my conscience wants no part of it
cover up conscience by proppin up ganja on top of it
the trees covering up roots
I have to uproot and cut my ego
Lose conscience and never will we grow
scared of self then I'll lose my health
alot of unconscious walking amongst us dont help
and every year I get older more I have to do for self
new experiences can help, adding languages to produce new expressions of self
no question as my vocabulary is expanding I enterin new dimensions
less indecision seeing things clearly as a cloudless night
but I might get lost in this decaying culture
they want you to be unselfish so they can eat you up like a vulture
but I stay counter-culture and just keep it moving forward
ganja makes me think deep and sleep in peace
but I think I also need to cleanse myself with meditations
and writings of the inner-soul
all told Im scared of growing old
striving to keep the spirit fresh
sometimes its hard to rest
tried for years to make a safe nest
but its not much more than nuetral
but nuetral i still a step up I guess
nevertheless, yo, Im gonna shine and glow
like that cloudless night moon
I see it shining off my girls black skin
and a million diamonds off the ocean
life is coastin as long as I stay empty dont overfill my boat
just enough to get to the other side of the road and maintain knowledge of self
I keep a light system light stomach empty hand then full
open and closed cause if it was always open Id be crippled
starve myself fast friday straight meditate and biuld hunger
then focus on the days and times that approach us
fill up and touch the city of the matrix
it takes patience
but I'll make it
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I swear your shit is free association that doesn't even rhyme half the time. You need to give this up.
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hes better than lil wayne
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no way.
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Na, even Wayne wouldn't attempt rhyming "conscience" three times in the first four bars lol.
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u sure?
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lil wayne bodied Nas on My Generation
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lil wayne bodied Nas on My Generation
Yeah, that was straight disrespectful.
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My verses do have a lot of free-association. A lot of times when I am posting here it is because of something I am ruminating over internally. And it isn't necassarily a verse I made to prove myself to others or show off my skills.
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looks like you made a outline for this poem/f.a.w...
How to Write an Outline
What is it?
An outline is a general plan of the material that is to be presented in a speech or a paper. The outline shows the order of the various topics, the relative importance of each, and the relationship between the various parts.
Rules for Outlining
1. Subdivide topics by a system of numbers and letters, followed by a period.
Example:
I.
A.
B.
1.
2.
a.
b.
II.
A.
B.
2. Each heading and subheading must have at least two parts.
3. Headings for parts of the paper of speech such as, Introduction and Conclusion, should not be used.
4. Be consistent. Do not mix up the two types of outlines. Use either whole sentences of brief phrases, but not both.
LMAO scan your shit let us see your real pen work. 8)
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good wordplay... one of your best verses yet