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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Blood$ on October 15, 2011, 10:34:50 AM

Title: Check out my homies' track, leave feedback
Post by: Blood$ on October 15, 2011, 10:34:50 AM
it ain't fully mixed yet but peep this shit... viscous

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SZowY1GHWj8&feature=colike

honest feedback/comments are appreciated!
Title: Re: Check out my homies' track, leave feedback
Post by: Lunatic on October 15, 2011, 10:50:31 AM
this ain't half bad
Title: Re: Check out my homies' track, leave feedback
Post by: Blood$ on October 15, 2011, 10:55:43 AM
this ain't half bad

+1

and just for the record people that ain't my youtube account lol
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Post by: Lil Sleazy on October 15, 2011, 11:00:00 AM
Pretty cool. Sounds a lot like some 90's underground stuff.
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Post by: Blood$ on October 15, 2011, 11:02:48 AM
yeah they got a few songs that are on that kinda vibe and this being one of them... props for the comment  :)
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Post by: Darkwing Duck (The Reincarnation) on October 15, 2011, 11:05:30 AM
i like it
sound is Rawkus-era type of shit, delivery n flow is perfect, lyrics r average

i fux wit stuff like this occasionaly, dependin on my mood
thumbs up
Title: Re: Check out my homies' track, leave feedback
Post by: Blood$ on October 15, 2011, 11:24:30 AM
appreciate it big homie  8)
Title: Re: Check out my homies' track, leave feedback
Post by: Sccit on October 15, 2011, 12:30:09 PM
nice...feelin it. 2nd verse is the dopest.
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Post by: Chamillitary Click on October 15, 2011, 04:23:44 PM
Nice shit.
Title: Re: Check out my homies' track, leave feedback
Post by: Blood$ on October 16, 2011, 12:14:43 AM
round of props for all the feedback... my dudes appreciate it too I sent em the link to this thread, even your PM... RadioTube  ;D
Title: Re: Check out my homies' track, leave feedback
Post by: OG Jaydc on October 16, 2011, 01:15:35 AM
Lol, I need to know what radiotube said  :D

Shits pretty decent. I love the beat and vibe of it. The emcees are decent. They need a little work to polish up their tone and flow but it's not bad at all. The lyrics are ehh to me, seem kinda forced. I think this style the horrorcore, needs either that dark humor or sick wordplay to really work and this song has neither. At least that's me anyway I'm not huge into that type of rap. Someone like hack Wilson would probably love this.
Title: Re: Check out my homies' track, leave feedback
Post by: Blood$ on October 16, 2011, 09:34:15 AM
i thought the lyrics were horrible and it sounded too much like a "mobb deep" record.  *no disrespect

 8)
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Post by: Sikotic™ on October 16, 2011, 10:44:04 AM
Hot track.
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Post by: BOX5 the best poster on this site yell on October 18, 2011, 09:09:52 PM
this joint is cool i fuccs with it, it does have a 90's vibe to it, good joint yell
Title: Re: Check out my homies' track, leave feedback
Post by: Blood$ on October 18, 2011, 09:14:14 PM
good lookin' out BOX  8)
Title: Re: Check out my homies' track, leave feedback
Post by: Triple OG Rapsodie on October 19, 2011, 07:59:05 PM
This is dope, you on it? Both these dudes can flow.

If you wanted any criticism....some of the lines are rhyming for the sake of rhyming instead of making sense. Like "my philosophize is twisted minds until they ill, grinding diamonds on they hymens, now that's what i call fucking chill." I don't even know what that means.
Title: Re: Check out my homies' track, leave feedback
Post by: Blood$ on October 19, 2011, 09:41:05 PM
nah I don't rap lol but good looks on the feedback, Rap... knew you would have some good constructive criticism  8)

I'll be posting up some more tracks with some different vibes soon, whenever they decide to upload more
Title: Re: Check out my homies' track, leave feedback
Post by: Darkwing Duck (The Reincarnation) on June 23, 2012, 06:57:49 PM

If you wanted any criticism....some of the lines are rhyming for the sake of rhyming instead of making sense. Like "my philosophize is twisted minds until they ill, grinding diamonds on they hymens, now that's what i call fucking chill." I don't even know what that means.

cause ur an idiot
Title: Re: Check out my homies' track, leave feedback
Post by: Triple OG Rapsodie on June 23, 2012, 11:08:26 PM

If you wanted any criticism....some of the lines are rhyming for the sake of rhyming instead of making sense. Like "my philosophize is twisted minds until they ill, grinding diamonds on they hymens, now that's what i call fucking chill." I don't even know what that means.

cause ur an idiot

and yet I'm smarter than dubcc's resident nerd. How is someone a nerd and dumb at the same time? Somehow you pull it off.
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Post by: LIGHTS_444 on June 25, 2012, 01:44:46 PM
 8) 8)