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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: gods saviour on January 25, 2003, 04:51:58 PM

Title: first drop
Post by: gods saviour on January 25, 2003, 04:51:58 PM

i burn you to a crisp wit my "flame thrower"/
i aint no star, but a "game grower"/
ya'll fake niggas be "lame showers"/
im making yall fall down like the twin "towers"/


first rap, what do yall think?

Title: Re:first drop
Post by: gods saviour on January 25, 2003, 05:07:23 PM

any suggestions?

Title: Re:first drop
Post by: Koncept on January 25, 2003, 07:48:13 PM

make your shit longer (more lines/bars) and the middle lines didn't make sence to me

Title: Re:first drop
Post by: Entreri117 on January 25, 2003, 08:29:31 PM

Quote from: gods saviour on January 25, 2003, 05:07:23 PM

any suggestions?

Yeah...don't rap anymore...LOL

Title: Re:first drop
Post by: __kaLipZo__ on January 25, 2003, 08:32:12 PM

Quote from: Xear0 on January 25, 2003, 08:29:31 PM

Quote from: gods saviour on January 25, 2003, 05:07:23 PM

any suggestions?

Yeah...don't rap anymore...LOL

word...

Title: Re:first drop
Post by: Rippa on January 25, 2003, 08:40:02 PM

yo.. keep rappin.. dont listen to'em lolol. its funny but fucked up.. nicca trynna get in da game yall gonna say " dont rap"... he could be wack at TEXT n ILL at spittin in life so dont judge da nicca by his Text skills.. feel me?

Title: Re:first drop
Post by: Entreri117 on January 25, 2003, 08:45:14 PM

Quote from: Rippa AkA da ELITE snipa on January 25, 2003, 08:40:02 PM

yo.. keep rappin.. dont listen to'em lolol. its funny but fucked up.. nicca trynna get in da game yall gonna say " dont rap"... he could be wack at TEXT n ILL at spittin in life so dont judge da nicca by his Text skills.. feel me?

I feel ya...I was just jokin with the man...lighten up ya'll...

Yo GS...drop longer verses with longer bars and bigger words.  If youy wanna come ILL, you gotta throw some complex vocabulary, metaphores, and multis in it.  If you don't know what metaphores or multi's or complex vocab is, then ask someone to "coach" or teach you.  I'm sure they'd be glad to help you out.

Title: Re:first drop
Post by: bez on January 26, 2003, 09:32:20 AM

lol that was shit. lol