West Coast Connection Forum
DUBCC - Tha Connection => Outbound Connection => Topic started by: MoodMuzik on May 19, 2012, 02:20:49 PM
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L0UHFX_YS2U
feedback would be appreciated!! thank you
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Dope.
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Dope.
good looks!
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bump
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I thought the hook was kinda wack but good effort. Beat is dope. First dude has a nice delivery, but flow needs a little work. Second dude has a nice flow. Third dude kinda sounds like Slug.
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First dude has a nice delivery, but flow needs a little work.
Yeah, word.
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I thought the hook was kinda wack but good effort. Beat is dope. First dude has a nice delivery, but flow needs a little work. Second dude has a nice flow. Third dude kinda sounds like Slug.
thanks for the feedback +1
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I thought the hook was kinda wack but good effort. Beat is dope. First dude has a nice delivery, but flow needs a little work. Second dude has a nice flow. Third dude kinda sounds like Slug.
thanks for the feedback +1
which one are you?
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I thought the hook was kinda wack but good effort. Beat is dope. First dude has a nice delivery, but flow needs a little work. Second dude has a nice flow. Third dude kinda sounds like Slug.
thanks for the feedback +1
which one are you?
i'm first verse
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Nice one. Hook is dope.
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Nice one. Hook is dope.
thanks! preciate the feedback +1
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I thought the hook was kinda wack but good effort. Beat is dope. First dude has a nice delivery, but flow needs a little work. Second dude has a nice flow. Third dude kinda sounds like Slug.
thanks for the feedback +1
which one are you?
i'm first verse
Cool. You've gotten a decent rap voice. Flow just needs tightening up.
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werd im gonna work on it!
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I thought the hook was kinda wack but good effort. Beat is dope. First dude has a nice delivery, but flow needs a little work. Second dude has a nice flow. Third dude kinda sounds like Slug.
thanks for the feedback +1
which one are you?
i'm first verse
Cool. You've gotten a decent rap voice. Flow just needs tightening up.
+1 to you again tho for giving this a listen, since almost all on this board wont even give it a shot.. thanks again!
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Got any other shit?
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i'm really feelin the production, the bass line, the piano loop, and the whiney erratic synth. the hook needs improvement, a bit half hearted but it got potential. i like the third verse the most, i agree with what spice 2 said.
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i'm really feelin the production, the bass line, the piano loop, and the whiney erratic synth. the hook needs improvement, a bit half hearted but it got potential. i like the third verse the most, i agree with what spice 2 said.
thanks for the feedback and honesty, def gonna work on thing. +1
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Not feelin the hook at all, your verse is solid though, but still sounds like you could work on the the flow a bit.
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Not feelin the hook at all, your verse is solid though, but still sounds like you could work on the the flow a bit.
thanks +1.. def gonna work on the flow
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sorry, my dude, but not feelin this 1 at all... u have potential, but u need to learn mic control. u gotta work on catchin the beat and rappin with more confidence.
cham...u still sound like u reading off a paper. for someone who says "swag" all the time, u have none behind the mic. lyrics are alright, but u mumble a lot of ur words. the biggest criticism is that u rap in one tone the whole way through. no ups and downs, just straight monotone flows
the last verse is the best..still sounds a bit forced and dude sounds like he strugglin 2 catch the beat, but it's better than the others
hook is pretty awful
overall, i'd say it was a good effort, but every rapper on this tracks has areas they need to work on...first rapper=flow.. second rapper=tone/swagger.. third rapper=flow
xzibit444 and cham...yall know each other in real life?
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I appreciate it. Considering I know it's outrageously biased to begin with, it's actually pretty much a compliment. So thanks.
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sorry, my dude, but not feelin this 1 at all... u have potential, but u need to learn mic control. u gotta work on catchin the beat and rappin with more confidence.
cham...u still sound like u reading off a paper. for someone who says "swag" all the time, u have none behind the mic. lyrics are alright, but u mumble a lot of ur words. the biggest criticism is that u rap in one tone the whole way through. no ups and downs, just straight monotone flows
the last verse is the best..still sounds a bit forced and dude sounds like he strugglin 2 catch the beat, but it's better than the others
hook is pretty awful
overall, i'd say it was a good effort, but every rapper on this tracks has areas they need to work on...first rapper=flow.. second rapper=tone/swagger.. third rapper=flow
xzibit444 and cham...yall know each other in real life?
+1