West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: I TO DA GEEZY on February 21, 2003, 07:51:38 AM
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This is a freestyle, clearing up some shit for an artist I do admire as a rapper, yet whose political views concerning Israel(where I live, for those who don't know) are being used as a gimmick in his raps, and a false analogy gets drawn plus to the false acusations and speculations. not ya typical diss...but I hope ya digg it....
links:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/igalmusic.htm
play "The Truth".
Lyrics:
Lota dirty Talk in ya mouth\
Just to shake up the crowd\
spits dat political shit\
not knowing whaz it about\
thrown in a preacher complex\
public opinion vortex\
think dat yo words cost us more than a dimond rolex\
see u ain't liven' here homie\
not knowing whaz going on and\
the situation is hard, and u tryna sell on it\
but if u Gonna, I will dawg\
I promiss u this\
mothafuckaz not knowing how fast the clock tickz\
how fast I'll dismiss\
misinformed lil' prickz\
came to a point dat I heared "we got tanks they got stickz"\
a speculative comparison\
innstead of spitten the truth u just bluring shit\
sparing on them shit\
tanks are made to protect, stones to fire shit up\
just like them cave man\
the brave women and man\
never be forgoten\
blown up on buses\
your analogies iz rotten\
this ain't the usa\
ain' revolutionaries\
they aint black panthers\
and Im just getting started\
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Well well... out of all things... I Geezy dissing Talib Kweli? I must admit, it was not something I had expected to ever see you do, LOL but anyway, I'll give you some feedback on the song...
Beat sounded too cheap and simplistic, could definitely have been better.
Your lyrics were good, So was your flow. But the most distinct improvement was in the clarity of your voice, I can now for the first say you pronouce words clealy. Good work. It wasn't a hard diss track, but good for what it is, like you said you're just letting him know that his political views are false... not the type of shit that ends careers, but good.
Props.
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btw....this freestyle is prolly gon be extended to a full length track, so verses is gon be added.
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Nice shit man, like KVB said I never really thought you would diss Talib Kweli lol. But nice lyrics, good flow, horrible beat but you make it sound good. Your claraty has improved so props on it overall, peace
-{bLaDe}
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dope shit...the beat isnt mine tho...peace
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coo shit geezy i remember when u first told me u was going to dis kweli...and i wonder why right away but u explained it to me a i understood where u was coming from but these cats go be just as surprised as i was lol
anyway good shit... kweli would kill any mc on here i feel though lol
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Yo Geezy I know you're my boy and everything but how you gone go and diss Kweli man? Nah, only kidding, you explained that shit well on that freestyle. Oh and BTW the beat is mine, if you y'all don't like it then you can suck my dick.
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the beat was aight, on a 4 minute track it'd have been annoying, but it didn't suck actually. As for the content, I won't start arguing, but you delivered your message clearly. The flow was pretty good
lookin forward to Kweli's response ;D