West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Inspectah on February 27, 2003, 08:51:00 AM
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Ayo.. ima jus' experiment with the barz filled with pure multis, and see if it works and makes sense..
"words~ta~snatch" like when "cats~dispatch" looking for "birds~to~catch"//
Shitting n "turds~ta~hatch" "birth~of~fresh~beats" never "heard~this~batch"//
Suck this "gurth~of~flesh~n~meat" gotcha "biting~like~a~hobbie"//
...ya "play~groud~legend" coz ya "fighting~with~noddie"//
So "stay~around~instead~n" fuck around "siking~out~my~buddies"//
Thats all for now folks.. lol jus thought i would post this up.. coz some of it funny.. .lol feedback on this ^^ Real Shit.. lol.
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some of em didnt fit, but a nice short lil story there homie lol. but i aint the multi expert so you may disregard my opinion.
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Thnx for the comments Illicit, some of em were a lil whack coz i was so bored, i was jus sorta freetyling these multis as quick as i can, and then lastly looking if it all makes sense! But ya'll know i better than that lil key! lol
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I agree with Illicit
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shit was not bad man... im pretty good at multis... so i can help you out... first off, you always want to have the number of syllables match... if your rhyming 4 syllables, make sure your next rhyme has 4 syllables, throwing one extra syllable in can throw the flow off. and on another tip, you dont want to like force your multis... i see some heads around here, and on other sites, just fighting to make their rhymes have multis, but they are done sloppily with too many words to fit into a short multi... just try to keep your multis smooth, and just let em flow out your mouth hella clean... shit was pretty good tho homie... keep it up
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Ayo thnx dawg, well this shit was jus a lil quick spit, to see how fast i could think of multis... lol hoping it would make sense too! Thanx for the advice tho! :)
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