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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Entreri117 on February 28, 2003, 11:29:33 AM

Title: Xearo - Can't Be Stopped
Post by: Entreri117 on February 28, 2003, 11:29:33 AM: Heres a new track I finished (bout an hour ago) and I'd like some feedback on it.

The beat has a nice piano melody, strings assisting, good bassline, and a hard hittin drums to top it off.

The lyrics are not complex, elevated, or any of that. The track has a "can't hold me down" feel to it.

Anyways...peep it and gimme some feedback.

Link= http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/xearomusic.htm
Title: Re:Xearo - Can't Be Stopped
Post by: .:TimeLock:. on February 28, 2003, 10:38:31 PM: the beat is dope.... the flow a delivery is nice the hook is ok i think u could make it sound better though with some sound efx on your voice or something aleast on the hook...

but overally dope track homie keep it up 8)
Title: Re:Xearo - Can't Be Stopped
Post by: GrewSum on March 01, 2003, 12:50:44 AM: i liked that hook homie..........hit me up on a collab sumtime......u just inspired me to finish up mah club track......i like this though man, no bullshit......u got mad potential......
Title: Re:Xearo - Can't Be Stopped
Post by: Entreri117 on March 01, 2003, 01:26:05 PM: Thanks for the feedback ya'll...

^UPPIN^

PS: Grew hit me up on AIM at Xearo117...
Title: Re:Xearo - Can't Be Stopped
Post by: Gangstauu on March 01, 2003, 01:27:38 PM: Good shit
Did you made the beat yourself 2
Title: Re:Xearo - Can't Be Stopped
Post by: Entreri117 on March 01, 2003, 04:01:50 PM: Nah, I got it from this guy named Auditory on MP3.com
Title: Re:Xearo - Can't Be Stopped
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on March 01, 2003, 04:13:10 PM: Ill peep it when I get a chance...PeACe
Title: Re:Xearo - Can't Be Stopped
Post by: Suga Foot on March 01, 2003, 05:25:07 PM: For real that was dope. I'll prolly get at you for my album.
Title: Re:Xearo - Can't Be Stopped
Post by: Maestro Minded on March 01, 2003, 07:02:04 PM: nice track....nice beat with dope flow from you--- prtty good lyrics too,,, props
Title: Re:Xearo - Can't Be Stopped
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on March 02, 2003, 02:01:37 PM: First off, lemme start by saying the beat is really dope...I like it...gotta battle feel to it...Your rapping is better than most of the people who drop shit on this board...The only complaint I have is that u sound too monotone and your quality is bad...I bet if you recorded in a studio with a professional mixer, your shit would sound dope as fuck...Overall, this is pretty good for something you did on your computer...PeACe
Title: Re:Xearo - Can't Be Stopped
Post by: KVB on March 02, 2003, 11:23:04 PM: Excellent beat... good rapping overall, you sound kinda annoying on the hook though, LOL, but it's all good. This shit is tight, one of the best tracks I've heard from WCC rappers lately... props.
Title: Re:Xearo - Can't Be Stopped
Post by: Jankiest on March 03, 2003, 04:19:39 AM: yeah that beat is dope
your rapping is good too, I didn't mind the hook that much, but it is a little annoying
Title: Re:Xearo - Can't Be Stopped
Post by: Entreri117 on March 03, 2003, 11:18:55 AM: Thanks to all for postin up and givin some feedback...

I thought the hook was good...except it is a lil annoying. I'm good for writin verses, but I come up empty for the chorus...
Title: Re:Xearo - Can't Be Stopped
Post by: Quakaveli on March 31, 2003, 12:53:04 PM: Quote from: Xearo on March 03, 2003, 11:18:55 AM
Thanks to all for postin up and givin some feedback...

I thought the hook was good...except it is a lil annoying. I'm good for writin verses, but I come up empty for the chorus...

Yeah I used to have the same problem...pretty good shit though
Title: Re:Xearo - Can't Be Stopped
Post by: AlerG on March 31, 2003, 03:12:29 PM: the beat was pretty blazin...the song all together was alright, i don't really want to judge on suck poor quality but a good effort was made so props on that...i could picture canibus spitten on that beat for real though, peace.