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Lifestyle => Tha G-Spot => Topic started by: Chamillitary Click on April 09, 2013, 04:04:31 PM
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http://www.sharebeast.com/z382jomofyw7
Verse 1 - JQuality
Hook- My boy Abramo
Verse 2 - Me
Spark a blunt with ya boy. 8)
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i was half expecting you to upload a Justin Bieber mp3
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http://www.sharebeast.com/z382jomofyw7
Verse 1 - JQuality
Hook- My boy Abramo
Verse 2 - Me
Spark a blunt with ya boy. 8)
Embed that shit. I ain't clickin no links (yes KAIN)
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No idea how to do that shit lmao. But if someone knows, much appreciated.
Links clean to open though. #NoViruses
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yeah i DL'd it it's legit
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#thisshitgoes
You ripped that shit. Fuck the Wiz sounding shit at the beginning.
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Good lookin'.
What's "the Wiz sounding shit"?
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This is pretty dope. There's a little clipping on the hook and you could probably benefit from a pop filter. Overall good NY rap. A more cohesive sound and feel than the lambs.
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i like the song too - you kinda sound like you got an accent though Jonesy
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I don't know much about the equipment, but I know we got like a $150 Snowball mic hooked into a Macbook. I'm sure there's far better ways to produce a crisper sound.
Good lookin' though, fellas.
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Good lookin'.
What's "the Wiz sounding shit"?
Yeah shit's ill. Wiz sounding is when you raise the inflection at the end of your lines in the beginning of your part like Wiz did in Black and Yellow.
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the first verse was ok but cham's verse was offbeat like crazy nigga was spittin' some faux 8 mile flows. LOL
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Oh, I hear you. I was lookin' for a way to end those first set of bars.
My boy told me he did what he could to master this, so this isn't the final product.
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the first verse was ok but cham's verse was offbeat like crazy nigga was spittin' some faux 8 mile flows. LOL
I know this is exaggerated because you're mad T.I. isn't in the Top 50 all-time, but I agree to a degree with my flaws on here & told my boys when I made this, I felt like towards the end my flow was falling off.
Don't hear any "8 Mile/Eminem" though.
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the first verse was ok but cham's verse was offbeat like crazy nigga was spittin' some faux 8 mile flows. LOL
I know this is exaggerated because you're mad T.I. isn't in the Top 50 all-time, but I agree to a degree with my flaws on here & told my boys when I made this, I felt like towards the end my flow was falling off.
Don't hear any "8 Mile/Eminem" though.
did you not hear your verse ? LOL that makin' the band flow right there. you know t.i. is in your top 10 doggy stop frontin'. definitely not no eminem you're right.
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*Waits for Classic Material audio*
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Sounds pretty solid to me, nice job.
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*Waits for Classic Material audio*
oh you waitin' on some classic material ? i don't rhyme no more homie i let the real emcees do what they do best which is rhyme and i do what i do best which is cop them albums. everybody wanna be a rapper these days....snap out the dream and wake up.
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I don't have the NIK delusion that this is any sort of a career. It's just a small, very part time hobby.
But you scared, it's cool.
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I don't have the NIK delusion that this is any sort of a career. It's just a small, very part time hobby.
But you scared, it's cool.
LOL i no longer have the audio but it was dope for my first time recordin'.
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I'm sure.
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I'm not feeling the guy on the hook. Cham your flow was a little off for the last half of your verse. Sounds promising though.
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dope ass song
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I read the comments and had to see for my slef. not bad cham, a little rough but with more practice and experience, you can tighten up your flow better.
the funny thing about this is your just fucking around with your homies making songs and sounds better than lamb shit! lol
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nikky's scared :o watch out cham hes coming with some fly shit in a minute ::) not too bad of a song cham 8)
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not bad...nowhere near lamb, tho, i'd hold up before tryna compare. first dude has a good flow, sounds a lil monotone, but it went wit the feel of the beat. ur flow is decent, needa improve ur mic presence and rhyme structure, fell off the beat a few times, and sounds like ur reading off a paper, but lyrically it wasnt bad. quality wise, sounds like it was recorded on sound recorder, but like u said, yall doin this as a hobby, so i give u props for that. if u worked on this as more than a hobby, u could become a whole lot better 8)
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I'll let the people decide for themselves.
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I'm not feeling the guy on the hook. Cham your flow was a little off for the last half of your verse. Sounds promising though.
for real the hook's making my ears bleed.
first verse is alright, although the diction needs work.
Cham's verse is cool, the diction is on point, some lyrics are a little corny though, you're a bit offbeat at the end but it still sounds decent.
the beat is catchy but very simplistic, sounds like some mid 90's french rap lol, cool shit.
as Rapsodie said, it's promising.
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Seemed like you wasn't too familiar with your lyrics, being off beat sometimes. But not bad at all. Props!
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We definitely rush too. From the time we stumbled across the beat, we sat down wrote it and recorded it all within a hour and a half.
Good looks though, guys. They'll be more to come.
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Lamb and Cham collabo needs to happen in 2013
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Lamb and Cham collabo needs to happen in 2013
8)
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sounds good man, nice work 8)