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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Reef on March 08, 2003, 03:24:19 PM

Title: Fill Them Shoes..
Post by: Reef on March 08, 2003, 03:24:19 PM

ya know most times in this life i just think everythin is pointless/
im always in distress, always dialing 999/
everything in everyone else's life is fine, so why does god always fuck wit mine?/
im tryin to live, not harming anyone/
so to repay that you take the one thing away from me that makes me my grandad's grandson/
you take him when he didnt do anything wrong/
what i wouldnt give, to bring him back, back to where he belongs/
the funeral was the hardest man, watchin you being lowered into the earth/
from death to birth, you'll never know how much you meant to any of us/
we loved you with all our hearts, how did it start? now this may not be smart/
but im gettin a tattoo, its an eagle.. to represent you/
so i will never forget your face and your laugh/
when this life changes pace, i'll look at my arm and relaise where my roots start/
cause im a younger version of you/
but im clueless.. how can i fill them shoes?/

Title: Re:Fill Them Shoes..
Post by: Inspectah on March 08, 2003, 03:30:12 PM

Quote from: Gareefa on March 08, 2003, 03:24:19 PM

ya know most times in this life i just think everythin is pointless/
im always in distress, always dialing 999/
everything in everyone else's life is fine, so why does god always fuck wit mine?/
im tryin to live, not harming anyone/
so to repay that you take the one thing away from me that makes me my grandad's grandson/
you take him when he didnt do anything wrong/
what i wouldnt give, to bring him back, back to where he belongs/
the funeral was the hardest man, watchin you being lowered into the earth/
from death to birth, you'll never know how much you meant to any of us/
we loved you with all our hearts, how did it start? now this may not be smart/
but im gettin a tattoo, its an eagle.. to represent you/
so i will never forget your face and your laugh/
when this life changes pace, i'll look at my arm and relaise where my roots start/
cause im a younger version of you/
but im clueless.. how can i fill them shoes?/

^^ Deep.. i thought this was the most indepth feeling/emotion filled keystyle i seen from you!

The lines i liked the most, and touched me were:

so to repay that you take the one thing away from me that makes me my grandad's grandson/
you take him when he didnt do anything wrong/

^^ man, i know how you feel, my grandad pulled us all together, when they gone, you realise how much you loved, cared, and adored them! :D

from death to birth, you'll never know how much you meant to any of us/

^^ That was very creative, and went well with the hole scheme, well thought! :D

Overall.. your key was tight, in terms of you showed your feelings, and i understood them!

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Title: Re:Fill Them Shoes..
Post by: e_gyp on March 09, 2003, 03:50:46 AM

step one
step two
step..

nothing's lost

Title: Re:Fill Them Shoes..
Post by: Reef on March 10, 2003, 01:21:25 PM

Uppin 4 feedback

Title: Re:Fill Them Shoes..
Post by: Entreri117 on March 10, 2003, 01:37:56 PM

Real nice piece here.  Was deep as hell, and I was feelin all of it...

PROPS Reef

Title: Re:Fill Them Shoes..
Post by: da_notorious_mack on March 10, 2003, 01:48:31 PM

damn holmes that was deep as hell....when im readin ya shit...it sounds like eminems flow...and thats a big compliment right there....

Title: Re:Fill Them Shoes..
Post by: TheSheriff on March 10, 2003, 01:51:52 PM

Beautiful

Title: Re:Fill Them Shoes..
Post by: __kaLipZo__ on March 10, 2003, 01:53:05 PM

Word, this shit was mad deep, flow was real dope, one of your finer pieces i must say.