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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: da_notorious_mack on March 13, 2003, 02:33:31 PM

Title: Tired....
Post by: da_notorious_mack on March 13, 2003, 02:33:31 PM

Im tired-of-this but fa some reason cant retire-fa-shit....
wish someone would hire-a-hit,fa real im tired-of-it....
cant someone fire-the-kid?look into the eyes-a-the-kid....
tell him he not-wanted,i need space like pac-wanted....
yeah Mack-lost-it,i feel like eminem but aint got-no-closet...
Mack-bites,Macks-nice,please im sick a the bull-shit...
if WCC was a room id have a full-clip,then i could prove-it....
Mods see this thread remove-it,i dont no what-im-sayin...
but fuck-i-aint-playin,it aint pac-im-portrayin,spend a day-in....
my-life-my-body,would have you reachin fa my-knife-my-shotti...
causin strife-in-the-lobby,im at the end a my life-like-gotti.....


Make what ya will outta it......out

Title: Re:Tired....
Post by: TiNmaN on March 13, 2003, 05:13:55 PM

That was a nice ass piece, much props.

Title: Re:Tired....
Post by: _That_Cracka_J on March 13, 2003, 09:58:48 PM

Tight

Title: Re:Tired....
Post by: Inspectah on March 14, 2003, 03:54:59 AM

I thought that was a very poetic piece, flowed well, and the multis went well in the ryhme.. no doubt whatever people say bout ya, you have proved ya self to be a dope emcee, just keep ya head up!

~ 1 ~

Title: Re:Tired....
Post by: Kill on March 14, 2003, 04:28:40 AM

*wonders how serious this has to be taken*

however, lyrically it was dope

Title: Re:Tired....
Post by: @Ss@sSiN on March 14, 2003, 06:08:11 AM

ya sound a lil suicidal..

Title: Re:Tired....
Post by: Disceptive AssAssin on March 14, 2003, 08:01:59 AM

dope..

Title: Re:Tired....
Post by: da_notorious_mack on March 16, 2003, 11:09:14 AM

i was drunk lol