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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Inspectah on March 14, 2003, 04:13:34 AM

Title: Anxious...
Post by: Inspectah on March 14, 2003, 04:13:34 AM

Breathing heavily, steadily tredding my path of mental exctasy, know how im feeling?//
These emotions gots meanings, heres some empathy, trying to relax, im breaking down//
So i need the facts, coz thoughts got a head of me, its got to me, look my gaping frown//
Showing fear, nerves, tears, im disturbed, releaving myself through humorous jokes//
Count down 2 the day, when walkways, croud with a surgery bed and numerous clokes//
Hit me in reality mode, goose bumps appear, like i react to the cold, no relaxation//
Whats the outcome gone be?, NOW has come for me, ima accept my situation//
I just gotta lotta thoughts that krept a head of me, take one final breath with me//
Coz im out cold til i awake, shivering as im gassed, start to shake, brb, be patient//


...Can i have some feedback please!

Peace ~ 1 ~
Title: Re:Anxious...
Post by: Inspectah on March 15, 2003, 03:45:38 AM
can i have sum feedack plz!

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Title: Re:Anxious...
Post by: Reef on March 15, 2003, 04:05:23 AM
Nice shit
Title: Re:Anxious...
Post by: TiNmaN on March 15, 2003, 02:58:29 PM
shit was dope and original, i liked it, props....
Title: Re:Anxious...
Post by: TheSheriff on March 15, 2003, 03:16:32 PM
Very nice.
Title: Re:Anxious...
Post by: Inspectah on March 16, 2003, 03:35:11 AM
Aite peepz thanx for the feedback.. its over now.. that an old key.. lol thnx now.. its all in the past now.. hehe..

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Title: Re:Anxious...
Post by: gyrl1da on March 19, 2003, 11:25:39 AM
i liked it!!  ;D
Title: Re:Anxious...
Post by: __kaLipZo__ on March 19, 2003, 11:43:06 AM
Nice key, flowed well and was creatively complex at the same time, keep em comin
Title: Re:Anxious...
Post by: Disceptive AssAssin on March 21, 2003, 06:19:55 AM
flowed nice... got lost at times though
Title: Re:Anxious...
Post by: Inspectah on March 21, 2003, 02:49:17 PM
Sup. thnx for the feedback people..