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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Reef on March 19, 2003, 01:44:04 PM

Title: My Outlook On Life
Post by: Reef on March 19, 2003, 01:44:04 PM

beats bang like they made by Dr.Dre, the sun shines on a new day
the possesions around us create the words we say
but life is life an act, cause we're in a play
we try and try to get out of the situations we create
but we're stuck with being fake, for christs sake!
none of us are gangstas, just pawns as a chess board
and we're trying to impess the king and lords
ima break the trend, i aint gonna kill no one
when it comes down to it, im playin football, end to end
i chose what i do, and i will never be led into
a black hole, cause the choices are limited
and i want it all, unlimited
life is a game or so they tell me
that metaphor doesnt fit you see,
i believe that this fits more,

'life is a jigsaw, its all in bits
and the only way to fix it
is to see where the pieces fit'

its a strange outlook on life, im aware
to get my point across, i gotta dare to
talk and share strange points of view
i kno it seems weird, but what about points for you?

Title: Re:My Outlook On Life
Post by: da_notorious_mack on March 19, 2003, 01:49:57 PM

dope shit mayne....flow was tight...nice content

Title: Re:My Outlook On Life
Post by: Inspectah on March 19, 2003, 02:41:17 PM

Nice piece, not sure what message you tryin to get across, but it flowed well..

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Title: Re:My Outlook On Life
Post by: 'Illicit' on March 19, 2003, 03:47:53 PM

yup thats that gareefa shit I'm used to...  nice dawg, keep spittin

Title: Re:My Outlook On Life
Post by: TheSheriff on March 19, 2003, 04:05:40 PM

Dope piece, though it weakened in the middle-however, it did pick up again at the end.

Title: Re:My Outlook On Life
Post by: Entreri117 on March 19, 2003, 04:58:13 PM

Quote from: Mack on March 19, 2003, 01:49:57 PM

dope shit mayne....flow was tight...nice content

Title: Re:My Outlook On Life
Post by: Reef on March 20, 2003, 01:27:09 PM

Thanx 4 the feedback peeps

Title: Re:My Outlook On Life
Post by: Disceptive AssAssin on March 21, 2003, 06:26:15 AM

nice flow.. stayed on topic too

Title: Re:My Outlook On Life
Post by: bez on March 21, 2003, 09:41:17 AM

good shit

Title: Re:My Outlook On Life
Post by: Inspectah on March 21, 2003, 02:41:19 PM

I liked it dawg, thats my homie, keep spitting ya usual dope verses! Nice content, and concept was good!

Peace