West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: :-:Mistah Menace:-: on March 29, 2003, 06:41:55 AM
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I'm Doin' A Track Wiv A Gal From Skool, These My Verses, She Writin' Hers, I'ma Help Her..
She Gunna Sing The Chorus & Her Verses, Nah Mean?
Well, It's For Audio, See If You Picture The Message I'm Tryin' To Get Across..
When Your Little, You Imagine Many Things
Such As Being Rich, Ownin' Every Thing
Life May Give You The Blues At Times
But Love Will Prevail....
When You Come Between People, It May Leave You Confused
As Long As You Believe In Yourself, You'll Neva Be Bruised
Even During The Hard Times, You Gotta Keep Your Head Up
We All Got Feelings, But You Gotta Keep Up
No Lookin' Back, Life Is A Journey.
Walking The Path, Each And Every Day
Love Is Hard To Find, But Harder To Keep
You Think About That Someone, Even When You Sleep
Starts With A Smile, Grows With A Kiss
Love Is Like A Fight, You Hit Or You Miss...
No Matter How Rough, You Gotta Keep It Together
Stand On Your Own, Falling Is A Never
Forever, Love Can Last, Love Can Die
But A True Love, Will Last A Life Time..
The Path Is Intense, The Journey Ov Love
Not Like A Simple Test, You Go Through It, And See To The Best
You Go Through It, Wiv Your Eyes Wide Open
It's Comes And It Goes..
But Not Everyone Has Felt It, Or Even Knows
Like Sitting On The Sidelines,
Lyin' On The Bench, Lookin' Up At The Sky...
Wonderin' If You'll Get A Chance, Can't Break Down And Cry
We've All Hit The Ball
We've All Got Struck Out...Keep One Thing In Mind
You'll Be Back Out...
Tell Me What You Think Plz, All Feed Back Is Great...
Peace, 1
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nice piece, for real... post it up when its done, liked ta hear it
Forever, Love Can Last, Love Can Die
But A True Love, Will Last A Life Time..
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Will Do, No Doubt
Thanks For Peepin'
Peace ~1~
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Nice shit man, liked it... Like Illicit said post it up wen u done it..
peace
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nice shit... deep for real...
make sure to record and upload that shit
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real shit man, i was feelin it...keep spittin
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Off the hook dawg, keep it up, and gimme the link to it on audio when you done, i felt the message!
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Yo, Thanks For Checkin' This Out, I'll Post It Up Wen It's Dun In Audio... ;D
Peace ;)
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mad props man, that shit was tight i wanna hear your audio, for real
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/mistahmenacemusic.htm (http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/mistahmenacemusic.htm)
Theres The Link, There Jus' My Parts, Baby Jordan's Will Be Put In It When She Records Them.. ;D
Please Check And Leave FeedBack, Thank You..
Peace ~1~
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well to be perfectly honest wit ya, the flows good, nice delivery but you sounded bored, shoulda put some enthusiasm in recordin, some voice, momentum etc. the beat is decent imo, but other than that, if you get ya girls shit on there, redo your shit this oughta sound good as a result, I aint tryin to put you or your work down homie, keep doin ya thing, and I aint claimin I could do it way better than you jus givin you my honest opinion.
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i'm feelin' the beat and all but im'a have to go with what Illicit said, you gotta try something with tha voice, my suggestion would be to try flowing the song out a few different ways and just see which flow has ur voice groovin'
peace
keep that shit tight mayne
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Yo, thanks for the feedback, i'm very greatful, i've re-recorded it, i've dun what you'd sed wud make it more "up"...so now ya'll jus sit back and wait for the track ;D lol
thanks, peace, 1
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