West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Lost Titan on April 01, 2003, 06:16:29 AM
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no line limit
3 votes =KO
5 votes wins
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yo fuck rules... shit i just rap to rap/
if i didn't, bitches talk shit so wacth yo back/
pussy wanna critize shit u can't even say ya lyrics to a beat/
u'r off beat like white folks doin tha danceing to country beat/
fuckin fag bitch u ain't street/
dick ryda u can combine juvy's 400 degress and lil' wayne 500 and still won't have my heat/
semi auto to chest deseret eagle goin through ya rects/
bitch tha tech .9 will leave blood spillin out ya neck/
these pussies neva blacked out/
run ya block or pulled tha mack out/
faggot wanna step to tha don without clout/
i ain't 50 but shut tha fuck up if u gotta glass mouth/
i'll snap u in 1/2 for fuckin wit my grind/
forget rap style pussy if u measured my jab to ya face is tha onlu way u gon get a punchline/
got'cha puzzled bitch don't u see tha name's lost nigga/
faggot just cuz i rap don't mean i don't pull trigga/
told once these bitches will get clapped man/
tha fuckin ak will put bullets through a fat man/
have u so shook u'll be in a different country lookin ova ya back man/
shit just cuz i rap don't make me soft/
my stray bullets will burn ya afro off/
i grow up by myself, u ain't alone/
and i'll try to get rich until my life gon/
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aight ill write up and hopefully drop tomorrow
and i hate this no line limit shyt but its aight
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haha i dont get why yall so worried about no line limit, just write as much as you were going to in the first place, if u want 15 lines 20 lines do it, i dont know maybe im missing something? ???
peace
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~Dj Lost got me thinking of a popular rhetorical question, if ya yell in a forest does anyone hear~you?//
~Consider me even respondin' to this battle tha Lords blessin, not even 'great dane' would fear~you//
~You like a run of tha mill 'emcee', weak flows gotta 'be' closely examined and inspected similar to 'exhibit~E'//
~Just looking at ya 'material' makes me wonder is this cat 'fo-real?', I seen better shit with a 'serial' numba out of ya 'cereal~box'//
~Countin 'cocks', I guess you good at math cuz you got the twice number needed of 'penis~socks'//[1]
~Sayin you 'lost', maybe cuz you just got 'bossed' in the wrong direction and ya couldn't afford to pay tha 'cost'//
~Fool, you like a dumbass~democrat~'voter' you tryin to "Illiter~rate"//
~You couldn't sail around my lyrikal memory if ya had a 180 horsepower 'motor' equipped with "oxygen~nitrate"//
~Ya dun so much bitin you made a new past tense, 'bate', I make ya swallow them words kid, ingested and 'ate'//
~They call me tha 'masta~of~ceremonies', I hit these pussies like I'm invading 'foreign~territories'//
~Dj lost got spun around internally and resorted to a dismal 'panic', only word to represent my recent performances is 'titanic'//
~Ol' Sinistah came up with this verse in a lil over one 'minute', maybe if ya cut my verse in half, dj lost would have a sliver of a chance to be still 'in it'//[2]
[1] - Penis Socks are condoms
[2] - This verse took me 5:34 to write, off da dome.
nice battle lost, lez get some votes people!
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Yo nice Battle,
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eyo tight battle
but my votes go's to
Lost
yo sinyo were good
.....hollla....
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close battle yall. Both, basically the same in most categories. Punches were bout equal. Metaphors, both had a few..not a ton tho. Wordplay, not that much by either. Sinister, just some advice man...on yur multies, all words have to rhyme in the multi. Keep spittin em tho. Overall, good verses by both...the only thing seperarating the 2, Lost had better flow IMO. This shit was hella close tho yall. But..
vote=Lost
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Damn this battle was close...
Lost:
Lost threw some hard ass punches in the verse. The flow was off at parts, and I didn't see alot of vocab. This was a very decent battle verse.
Sinister:
Sinister also threw some nice punches, along with some nice vocab. The flow was really off in certain parts, but was good throughout.
If I could vote this a draw, I prolly would. But since I can't...
I vote for Sinister. I was feelin his verse more than Lost's...even though Lost's punches were more on.
Great Battle
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1-2
ya my rhymes were a lil offkey but i tried to make up for it in tha next rhyme. that whole verse was basically off da dome so i aint too worried bout it.
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Nice battle, Lost seems to be improving "some" well its about time, and Sinister didnt bring his "A" game but had enough to beat Dj lost w/ some nice metaz and try to get those multies down cuzz.
Vote - Sinister
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2-2
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Sinister took this one... Nice verses from both of ya thou!
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5 votes win? fuck
3-2
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vote=sinister
i felt it more than lost's. sinister could have come a lot harder though.
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4-2
thanks for those who have voted
ya i think i came with what i needed... hopefully.
1 mo' vote at least!
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^bump^
just 1 more vote some contribute
it aint like i dont vote fo yalls shyt
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this one goes to lost, he's right your verses would never flow to a beat, but you got some tight lyrics though.
vote=dj lost
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^bump^
im gonna keep bumpin this shit till one of yall vote
so one o' yaz might as well pick one or tha other
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*sigh*
1 word is all it takes
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vote=sinister
lost tho,you gettin better try incoroparatin a mo complex rhyme style an perhaps some multis an you will improve no end....
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thanks mack and to all the voters
mack's right though lost you are improving just incorporate a few more aspects of keystyle in ya flows and you'll do fine.
peace
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mack thanks