West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Reef on April 03, 2003, 12:43:22 PM
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thugz lock down blocks with shot-guns
they get high and shoot at kids who aint got-guns
sell E's to them outside the school cause they aint got-funds
kids get high and joy-ride but it all goes quiet when they collide with the wall
the silence can be heard worldwide its like
four kids in a car jusr died and the dealers go the nerve to say they aint cried
they just side with the hypocrits saying they parents should look after them
its like a roar of lauhgter in the face of the childless parents
and think how the kids feels in heaven
hes a parentless child, and orphan livin in the sky on his own
scared, knowin that he's part of the unknown
knowin that his Mum is all alone trying to cope without her baby boy
he used to hate it when she called him that,
now all he wants if for her to straighten his hat
but the fact is he's alone.. and hes hatin' that
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Like I said on AIM...damn nice piece.
PROPS!
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Yo I Likin' the Vocab, Multis And Flow, Luvin' It Bruv..
Peace, 1
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Wasn't your best piece man. I read it and it didnt seem to flow very well. Your shit is dope tho man, don' take this the wrong way, I am just stating my honest opinion.
Keep droppin kiddah!
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Shits hot, damn... Keep em comin reefa i always like ya pieces
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props boi, i'd like to see a full song outta that, now that would be mad tight
keep yo style up playa, i like that shizz
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yeh it didnt flow throughout the whole verse but shiiit thats some deep dope shit man... loved it
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yo that was thight