West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Lost Titan on April 04, 2003, 06:46:09 AM
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Dj Lost
What do you think your a sex symbol, showing your face everywhere I bet your condom is the size of a thimble/
Your rhymes are like what you do every night before you go to sleep, WHACK, you think you can rhyme just cuz your black/
you threaten me ima make you take it back jack, im just gonna crush you then snort you like crack/
You thuggin it, you fakin, your dick you tuggin it, your doin some ass rapin, you see a guy you fuckin it/
babies you makin, I'll knock you out and when you awaken, your manhood is taken, your shits an abomination/
Wen u picked a fight wit me ur outta of ur weight class, Im Lennox Lewis nd ur the towel boy Ill shatter ur ass/
im gonna drop yu n smash yu jus like glass, while your laying in your coffin I'll be pickin your mom up after the mass/
This rhyme, gonna teach you to stick with your own kind, learn how to rhyme, you can't teach me to write a punchline/
Kalipzo researched ur humerous-rhymes, doin repetitive 'wordplay' numerous-times, U don't "Hip'n Hop" lines/
U "Repeat Circles unwanted" like "SIGNS" put more bloody Gore, 'stead of doin' Bush on Iraq,'PUN'-ishment wit no CRIME!
A ton of puns aint clever, "101 Silly Jokes" had a Readin Level of Grade5, So Im gonna switch METHOD nd get dis flow DIRTY 2 keep it ALIVE/
Gareefa
Gareefa and DJ lost, a DJ so cold/
he could kill jack-frost, im jackin emcees like 50cent/
how to rob a W-C-C playa -- heres the case i present/
study thesethree chapters..
number one, kidnap BlAdE and become a captor/
shock him in the ass with a mains adaptor/
now you got the attention, sneak up on Mack, and take his pesntion/
onto lesson two, its really important not to be you/
be as fake as you can and sign up as a girl when you really a man!/
lesson three is a hard one, just keep your guard up son/
you gotta flow like i do.. so hot it will scar ya tounge/
and take shit seriously, you cant regurd as fun/
the rhyme game is a contradictive name/
take it seriously or you'll put fame to shame/
while i stand on the dead emcee's chest and proclaim../
he's tame, he's tame... This muthafucah is tame!!/
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I'll knock you out and when you awaken, your manhood is taken,
i dont do that gay shit...
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Kalipzo researched ur humerous-rhymes, doin repetitive 'wordplay' numerous-times, U don't "Hip'n Hop" lines/
yo dont take it in a bad way Kalipzo
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Kalipzo researched ur humerous-rhymes, doin repetitive 'wordplay' numerous-times, U don't "Hip'n Hop" lines/
yo dont take it in a bad way Kalipzo
huh????????
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less shit talk, more feedback
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Lost your whole verse was dope, flowed well and was cool to read.
Reefa yours started really well but when you got to lesson 2 the lines started becoming to big for the rhyme, therefore when I was rappin it out in my head it didnt flow all to well.
Never the less a good piece you 2.
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Lost your whole verse was dope, flowed well and was cool to read.
Reefa yours started really well but when you got to lesson 2 the lines started becoming to big for the rhyme, therefore when I was rappin it out in my head it didnt flow all to well.
Never the less a good piece you 2.