West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: SkillZ on April 08, 2003, 11:08:35 PM
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This kid like "virgins" beg'n me to switch up styles, cause he cant 'take it all at one time'/-
Its like throwing 'bait less hooks' trying to 'fish' with this retard or maybe hes to dumb to 'catch lines'/- (Catch on)
I'm 'Open'n yur flesh' an 'injecting my words', so i know i'm "getting under yur skin" an your 'feel'n' these ryhmes/-
So ill i cause this kid ah loss of hair, than throw yur words back in your face, only time your 'spit' - 'shines'/- (spit shine his head)
Forever never winnin, like hes playing chess an can 'never make the right move' cause the bitch 'blind'/-
We could never have 'equal verses", you'll get DQ'd but you'd STILL have better luck if you use'd mine/- (cant win)
I'll kill this bitch and pull every other 'vertebrate', you aint got 'half' the 'back to hold in' and 'miss'n yur spine'/-
You posted wanting to battle so here it is ...
You have 48 hours to replie back with a 7 bar verse or more, than the voting takes place
No crew no hate dick riding votes
3-0 tko or first to 5 wins
Good luck
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yo skills that was good
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Thanks dawg
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Limited time ....... POST YOUR VERSE
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so wen is he gon reply or spit his part? ???
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If you wanna drop your verse PLEASE DO but i will keep it in my wins as a DQ untill you drop ... fair enough
HIT ME BACK wit 7 barz soon!
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Since he posted in the wrong place i'll put his verse here
Mickey aka Micaveli
You front stand fraudulent, expecting fatalities off the keys, no illistrations shown off these, I tease like a constant and stable beatch regularly giving eye contact, its accepted I customeraly have verbal confronatations so I stay vocally packed, to react to dialect uneducated fat cats shoved in the sack, no vengeance spoken, you die choken, swallow your pride with the water I inahle, Spit so extenly with so much technique to drown a blue whale, apporach to me with methods to overcome and defeat, reply to conquer or get beat on the street
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votes please
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No Votes :-[
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i would vote honestly but yall said no crew votes.
sooo..
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vote: skillz- better flow, metaphors, more personals and harder punches. Makaveli didn't seem to throw anything personals, the rhyme sounded more like a keystyle. Flow was nice though. Gotta give it to skillz though, just a little more complexity in his rhyme and good methaphors
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skills overall was better harder hit and more mutis
vote skills
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Now, when I was here before a lot of people accused me of being hyper-critical of other people's shit so take this as you will and please, please don't let yourself get offended by something that someone on the internet says because a) it would mean you have mad emotional issues and b) it's nothing personal. I just need to say this because sometimes people take criticism the wrong way. ;)
skillZ - Honestly, after reading some of your other shit this wasn't up-to-par for you. Don't get me wrong, it was still by no means a bad verse, but you can do better. I don't really have any suggestions because it seems like you understand the basic principles of keystyling (a verse that's easy to flow with, easy to read, and packed with good punches/wordplay and well-used multies). Not bad, but not good either.
Mickaveli - URGH! I hate when verses are one paragraph stringed together, but rest assured that I'm not going to let it affect the way I vote. I like a lot of the multies and it was easy to flow with the whole way through, but the punches were evasive and while some of them were kind of "artsy" (like the blue whale one) I wasn't really feeling them all that much to be honest.
Conclusion - I thought this battle was relatively even but I thought SkillZ had better punches overall. So my vote goes to him.
Alright, now that I've set myself up for mad hate could either of you please vote on my battle here (http://www.dubcnn.com/connect/index.php?board=11;action=display;threadid=32774)? Thanks.
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dope vote.. NoT
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yeah Not, no one really even gives that kind of feedback on battles, so I'm sure that both of these dudes appreciate it. Shit, I know I would if people gave me more than "good flow, or not enough personals" Props man.