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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: da_notorious_mack on April 17, 2003, 02:34:12 PM
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kru votes explained
let me get this straight,you illest of a chosen few?..
im killing hoes....and dude,i know its you...
i smell pussy,it wafts thru elite ranks..
so like 50 "dont push me",or the flowll put u in a deep trance
let me guess anuvva newbie who aint spittin facts
so when he calls me a biter it aint hitting mack
im kicking back cus i really hate hypocrites
and is it me or does ya mums have great hippo hips
damn i key off top,it the D i rock,skillz comes from where
skillz come from the heart,and elite?tone ripped out theres
damn....imma call you blanket,maxi or my very own clone
and jus like E.T dawg youd better "phooooone hooooome"
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i hope to god that shit was off da dome mack
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I'm come'n and 'ripp'n the flesh-from-ya-skull', "de'face'n" ah mack ... you wasnt ready-to-brawl/-
You never 'elevate'n' I'm watch'n em steadily-'fall', verse's always 'go over his head' ... on the count-that-hes-small/-
I'll bring the "bare truth" strip'n em to his 'skeleton', expose'n the "true bitch" in this battle ... cause mack got-no-balls/-
Mack 'unwanted' like angery mother-in-laws, you "thinking you could rap" was only one-of-your-flaws/-
Throwing macks body threw-stone-walls, ... whos make'd-the-calls/-
Breaking ya ankles like and1 mixtakes with the shakes-n-the-falls 'cuffing nuts' the only time mack 'playing with balls'/-
::)
Another happily serve'd emcee
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Please vote ... no crew hate d/r stupid votes ... use struture fav lines ... all of the above thank you ;D
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damn i key off top,it the D i rock,skillz comes from where
answer ya question...tryin to spit off the dome hrd when you drunk
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lmfao mack...
ill vote on this battle, yall said no kru votes, but i will probably be the only one whos votin on this shit.
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VOTE=SKILLZ
neither of you used many personals... (putting in the guys name into a sentence which u could use against anybody doesnt count)
skillz, i wasnt really feelin the flow of your verse, but your overall rhyming scheme wasnt bad.
mack, i recommend writing verses while youre sober, LOL
the flow wasnt bad, but some of those lines were kinda whack. some OK punches from both of you.
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1-0 up'n for votes
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my above reply was a question ^^
and you two it is O.K. to vote for other people's battles, im gettin tired of all these peeps beggin for votes but they dont do any votin of they own.
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Aight i did alot of voting
Upp'n for some votes
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fuck it..
Both yall had some good pieces but each had a style of its own.
Mack - its obvious you were drunk when you wrote this but tha intention was there, not much unity but a lil decent wordplay.
Skillz - dope verse for the most part, the extended rhyme though got kinda played out and some weak personals but the punches were there.
vote - skillz
Mack maybe you should write ya shit sober?
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2-0 up'n for some votes
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more votes please
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Can we get some more votes! :o
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you get what you give my friend.
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mack, i recommend writing verses while youre sober, LOL
lol yeah, considerin that it was quite nice but I can't let it influence the voting, so i gotta say skillz was a bit better, flow was aight and the punches seemed, unsurprisingly, way more well thought about. some multies were good, some needed some work...nice verse, mack was below average, actually i think he could've beaten that shit
VOTE = SKILLZ
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I was lookin' forward to readin' mack's verse, but I was a little dissapointed. He usually comes way tighter than this. I thought Skillz had more flow and the multis were tighter too...
vote=skillz