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DUBCC - Tha Connection => West Coast Connection => Topic started by: ItzCartier on January 15, 2023, 05:17:03 PM
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Another 🔥 Drop From @ItzCartier With His Lastest Single
“DON” Prod any Jay P Bangz
https://youtu.be/1hebPOT76M8
Stream On All Streaming Platforms
https://open.spotify.com/album/1gaKFQYnVpc9JxTKRcZgQL?si=cPN5QNsHRwSTOh7TurcQvA
You can buy the single for $1 On
https://www.ItzCartier.com/music
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Definitely putting me to sleep.
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Definitely putting me to sleep.
Bro stop hating , you don’t like keep moving but Ima promote my shit
Rather you like it or not , get some motion
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Definitely putting me to sleep.
Give real honest criticism I’ll respect it more
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Give real honest criticism I’ll respect it more
Honest criticism, you need to work on your lyrics and subject matter. A dude coming on here rapping about their money, and women, never heard that before. To be successful in this day and age, you need some originality, something to set you apart from everyone else. Your bars and rhyme structure are very simplistic. And sounds like you are mashing your words together trying to fit too many words into your bars to make it fit. You are mumbling and slurring your words at certain points. Comes off poorly.
Positive aspects? Whoever doing your beats isn't too bad. Just a shame the rapper can't hold up his end of the song.
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Honest criticism, you need to work on your lyrics and subject matter. A dude coming on here rapping about their money, and women, never heard that before. To be successful in this day and age, you need some originality, something to set you apart from everyone else. Your bars and rhyme structure are very simplistic. And sounds like you are mashing your words together trying to fit too many words into your bars to make it fit. You are mumbling and slurring your words at certain points. Comes off poorly.
Positive aspects? Whoever doing your beats isn't too bad. Just a shame the rapper can't hold up his end of the song.
Ok I respect that 💯 but like I said you just one person , your opinion don’t matter sir
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Honest criticism, you need to work on your lyrics and subject matter. A dude coming on here rapping about their money, and women, never heard that before. To be successful in this day and age, you need some originality, something to set you apart from everyone else. Your bars and rhyme structure are very simplistic. And sounds like you are mashing your words together trying to fit too many words into your bars to make it fit. You are mumbling and slurring your words at certain points. Comes off poorly.
Positive aspects? Whoever doing your beats isn't too bad. Just a shame the rapper can't hold up his end of the song.
Here go something else u can sleep on to
https://youtu.be/0MGAf3xC_Bk
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Ok I respect that 💯 but like I said you just one person , your opinion don’t matter sir
To be successful, you need to take a step back and take into account what people are telling you. You think DOC never told Dre he needs to work on stuff? And guess what, he listens. Every rapper has things he needs to work and improve on. You coming on here thinking you're the shit and you don't need to listen to anyone's feedback is going to be your downfall.
The correct response to my criticism should've been "Thanks homie, i'm still grinding, honing my craft, appreciate the feedback and the time you took to listen to my song". That would have earned you so much more respect from the community here than coming off as this desperate cocky youtube rapper that you are now coming off as.
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To be successful, you need to take a step back and take into account what people are telling you. You think DOC never told Dre he needs to work on stuff? And guess what, he listens. Every rapper has things he needs to work and improve on. You coming on here thinking you're the shit and you don't need to listen to anyone's feedback is going to be your downfall.
The correct response to my criticism should've been "Thanks homie, i'm still grinding, honing my craft, appreciate the feedback and the time you took to listen to my song". That would have earned you so much more respect from the community here than coming off as this desperate cocky youtube rapper that you are now coming off as.
Tbh your opinion is not making me or breaking me , you ain’t gonna make me feel a way for posting my music , when all I see on here is you dudes promoting major artist that’s already big , ima continue to promote
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Your mumbling rap and music is trash. Deal with it 8)
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Your mumbling rap and music is trash. Deal with it 8)
Sound stupid asf it’s definitely not mumble or trash rap, u weirdos stuck in the past I guaranteed u ain’t even from California or the Westcoast in general to know shit changed homie , Niggas ain’t rapping like pac, ice cube , snoop, or the rest of em old niggas no more
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If you feel we aren't your target audience, then quit posting all your trash songs here. Go post them on some other board where you feel like your audience is.
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If you feel we aren't your target audience, then quit posting all your trash songs here. Go post them on some other board where you feel like your audience is.
Lmao ima keep promoting my shit now to make u mad and post a comment , you 🤡 living in the past , u don’t support the new artist coming out the west because you a dick riding OLD HEAD
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Perfect. First you tell everyone only black people from Cali will understand your music. And now you’re going to have everyone associating your music with annoyance. You sir are a marketing genius.
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Perfect. First you tell everyone only black people from Cali will understand your music. And now you’re going to have everyone associating your music with annoyance. You sir are a marketing genius.
Lol I didn’t say nothing bout you have to be black from Cali to understand my music , I said I guaranteed you not from California or the Westcoast in general to understand, I got hella white supporters that from Cali , you just a OLD HEAD stuck in the past , I bet you don’t like no new west artist like savii 3rd , drakeo the ruler rip, mozzy, Larry June , jay worthy , 03 greedo, g perico , etc that’s the new west
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Perfect. First you tell everyone only black people from Cali will understand your music. And now you’re going to have everyone associating your music with annoyance. You sir are a marketing genius.
Let’s point out who the fuck have soopafly on their profile pic 😂😂😂 you definitely stuck in the past lmao OLD HEAD
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keep doin ya thang
criticism is great bro .. some people pay for criticism. just use it to your advantage.
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keep doin ya thang
criticism is great bro .. some people pay for criticism. just use it to your advantage.
Take your own advice:
https://www.dubcnn.com/connect/index.php/topic,339896.0.html
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Take your own advice:
https://www.dubcnn.com/connect/index.php/topic,339896.0.html
how if you didn’t give any constructive criticism right there..
you were just talking shit because i called your beats whack
that’s a little bit different
but i’m sure you already knew that
:sas:
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how if you didn’t give any constructive criticism right there..
you were just talking shit because i called your beats whack
that’s a little bit different
but i’m sure you already knew that
:sas:
Put the gmo et down mayne. Seriously! You attacked my beats after i gave my honest opinion of your song. You can't take criticism but want to lecture him on it.
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Hot.
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Put the gmo et down mayne. Seriously! You attacked my beats after i gave my honest opinion of your song. You can't take criticism but want to lecture him on it.
stop deflecting from my point.. im clearly talking about constructive criticism
i know you’re nuts, but you’re not this dumb