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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: da_notorious_mack on June 06, 2003, 04:32:34 AM

Title: .:Militant:.(feedback appreciated)
Post by: da_notorious_mack on June 06, 2003, 04:32:34 AM

Im militant,when i kill an vent,make spastics do backflips~//
when the gat spits,im real intense,last fa hours like tantric~//
dogmatic,an when this dawg had it,ill leave the God's frantic~//
foes like "goddamn it" mack got flowz,the facts exposed~//
of hoes actin pro's,get blowz to their nose,i throw fistz~//
and you know this..plus the flow sick,yall probably noticed~//
M16's lay waste to 10 marinez,i dont know what surrender means~//
i dont sleep well remembered nights of tender dreams~//
but foes got me ina deep hell,so i gotta stay alert like red~//
or spurtz of lead,hit me in the dome,an really hurt my head~//
cant sleep,drop a verse instead,think its over but the worst is yet~//
to come,so i gotta keep two guns,or else a hurse my bed~//
it hard bein amateur goin gainst a soldier,so imma fuckin mold ya~//
first off take the 22 calibre out ya holster~//
now point at ya opponent,off safety,and bus at those who hate me~//
and the most important component,ya gotta make G'z~//
cus otherwize it aint worth the time,cus since the birth of crime~//
you gotta have money to buy bullets so reinburse ya nine~//
gotta make loot offa killin,dont jus shoot wit no feelin~//
to leave ya foes reelin~//
stick the steel in,but when swat teams,squash dreams~//
jump thru windowz,search the house,it not clean~//
find ya stash,you go to jail,watch fa fagz behind dat ass~//
try to resist,get shanked,no breathing,now ya retired at last~//

was in the mood for a bit a story tellin what yall think...

Title: Re:.:Militant:.(feedback appreciated)
Post by: Ignyte on June 06, 2003, 05:19:40 AM

that was dope man, i liked that one.

Title: Re:.:Militant:.(feedback appreciated)
Post by: Inspectah on June 06, 2003, 05:27:54 AM

That was a good piece mack, your flow on this one was tight, and i kept up with the structure.. yea nice lil story.. your doing well mayne!

Peace

Title: Re:.:Militant:.(feedback appreciated)
Post by: Reef on June 06, 2003, 05:38:06 AM

Damn.. tight piece.. Flowed real well.. You defo elevatin man..

Title: Re:.:Militant:.(feedback appreciated)
Post by: Kill on June 06, 2003, 05:51:45 AM

to me the most interesting thing is that I get bored of readin everything by other MC's who drop as much shit as you do. Fa somehow I don't get bored of yours. props

Title: Re:.:Militant:.(feedback appreciated)
Post by: AdamX aka Xplicit on June 06, 2003, 06:03:56 AM

Nice shit bra

Title: Re:.:Militant:.(feedback appreciated)
Post by: Kill on June 06, 2003, 06:19:21 AM

uh, adamx's arrived. sup

Title: Re:.:Militant:.(feedback appreciated)
Post by: Juda on June 06, 2003, 06:41:12 AM

 great lyrics and nice flow...good story too. keep it up guy
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