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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Reef on June 07, 2003, 03:50:11 PM

Title: First ever attempt at a song
Post by: Reef on June 07, 2003, 03:50:11 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/gareefamusic.htm

Recorded it this mornin... Any feedback, tips n shit would be appriciated..

Title: Re:First ever attempt at a song
Post by: Jim Jones on June 07, 2003, 05:42:57 PM

Not Bad.  I just have a problem hearin u. You should turn up the vol on ur voice. But over all it was good.

Title: Re:First ever attempt at a song
Post by: Reef on June 08, 2003, 08:26:26 AM

thanx for the feedback homie.. Was my voice n shit ok?

Title: Re:First ever attempt at a song
Post by: RonCEO on June 08, 2003, 11:16:28 AM

i agree, not baddd, but TURN that voice up.
holla

Title: Re:First ever attempt at a song
Post by: SCY on June 08, 2003, 11:38:27 AM

nice shit dawg

Title: Re:First ever attempt at a song
Post by: C-Bizz on June 09, 2003, 01:29:54 AM

yeah man its nice, i like it. like they said just turn yo voice up abit.

Title: Re:First ever attempt at a song
Post by: Dj Eskimo on June 09, 2003, 08:02:44 AM

pretty dope.

Title: Re:First ever attempt at a song
Post by: Reef on June 09, 2003, 11:41:53 AM

Thanx for the feedback yo.. Really appriciate it..

Title: Re:First ever attempt at a song
Post by: Skindiana bon3z on June 09, 2003, 01:28:10 PM

Yo dogg, that shit was pretty dope  :o....Just bring the voice volume up a little...

Title: Re:First ever attempt at a song
Post by: Reef on June 12, 2003, 03:04:48 PM

Thats foir the feedback man.. there is anbother track on there now..

Title: Re:First ever attempt at a song
Post by: bez on June 12, 2003, 05:15:49 PM

I aint gunna lie to you man but I didnt like the song at all.  Your voice makes you sound like your from the blazin squad and your basically talking over a beat, trying to fit to many words into 1 bar.  

The off the wall thing isn't to bad, its better than the song but overall truthfully I am going to say that i didnt feel it too much.  Keep trying tho mate I will peep everything u post up.  Practice makes perfect kiddah.

Title: Re:First ever attempt at a song
Post by: .:TimeLock:. on June 13, 2003, 02:40:47 AM

bez is the first one to tell u like it is lol ;D

basically what i told u on msn if how i feel ;)

Title: Re:First ever attempt at a song
Post by: ITW [the irish boy] on June 13, 2003, 04:22:10 AM

I actually thought this was alright, after listening to it for a bit. Sounds a lot like the streets or blazin squad, and the flow is let down at times. I personnally however amnt a fan of that kind of "the streets" rappin so i wasnt hugely feeling this, but keep it up, it needs some work, but your going in the right direction

Title: Re:First ever attempt at a song
Post by: Reef on June 13, 2003, 02:34:05 PM

Quote from: Bez on June 12, 2003, 05:15:49 PM

I aint gunna lie to you man but I didnt like the song at all.  Your voice makes you sound like your from the blazin squad and your basically talking over a beat, trying to fit to many words into 1 bar.  

that must have been the most offensive thing ive heard.. LOL

Nahh its cool people (ITW & Bez).. Thanks for the feedback.. The problem is... I was rappin that slow n quietly to  get feelin into the song... and if i do rap normal speed in my accent im going to soun like blazin squad or the streets coz i am british.. ya feel me?