West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::.. on June 08, 2003, 02:30:18 PM
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aight dogg...this is how we do
ima go for a longer verse this time so..
15-20 bars
first to 5 wins
4-0 is a KO
explain votes
peace.......one
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ayo....
lyrics like this should be put on a pedestal, ur battle wounds should be traeted with medical/
assistance, and in an instant, ur rhyme attack will be smacked to non-existance/
C-Bizzle who? Fuck C-Bizzles crew, and anyone else who hangs out wit you,
beat u till ur face is blue, then maybe ill put u six feet under too/
now, if i switched it up would u duck and tuck ur tail betwen ur 2, or would you, come at me with ur rhymes that are far and few/
Ur shit is just reg-u-lar like metamucil shots to the jug-u-lar and ur bitch she just ug-li-er then a 500 pound jug-ga-ler(juggler)/
that last line was a little long but i dont give a fuck like cheech n chong hittin the bong listenin to ThaProphecy's song/
bitch come on, place ur lips upon my shlong/
Just like edward Furlong in american history X, he took a few to tha chest, a few days later, laid to rest/
Picture me like Jesus in Bethlehem, everyone tryin to hear what i got to say, ALL of them!/
My rhyme scheme explodes on contact, my brain reacts like im on-track, ur lyrics lack and i give life back to a fiend ODing on crack/
i lock, my glock, u dome, that cock, its you, i mock, ill rule ur block, so fuck you and fuck anything u talk......bitch
haah sorry i just got aggressive there...no hard feelins
aigh homie u drop ASAP
peace..............one
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fuckit, ill put it down now
Now listen here TP aka The-1-and-own-ly, you dont even know-me, I'll play the fuck outta your station just like a so-ny/ [1]
Leave me 6 feet under? Hah don't even mention that you phonie, think your smoking like cheech n chong but where the fuck is your homies?/
To me all I see you as a clown in-a-circus, but when your battlin' with me you'll get more halloween then Jamie-Lee-Curtis/ [2]
Imma tell you this straight coz this is on purpose, I place one phone threat n hear "Please man! Don't hurt-us!"/
Like Biggie I'm big dangerous and your just a little vicous, think you rock-a-glock but I bet you pose for pictures/ [3]
And stay tha fuck outta my bizness, like popp-a-doc I'll leave you chokin' like fake-bitches/
"Picture me like Jesus in Bethlehem", but explain how 10 dayz ago you lost to a woman/ [4]
Don't worry you can cry, we all know that you're fem-in-em/ (feminine)
Don't mess with C-Bizzle I wanna be a chef, I'll mince your man-hood in a blender/
To me you're white in gender, you just another Elvis imma return this battle back to the sender/ [5]
My condition is medical but boi you need surgery, you're lying through your teeth like you're in court charged for perjury/
From what I've read it doesn't really hurt me, because after this I'll take a bow and let you take a curtsy/
I know this is a battle but I'm just having fun, I think I'll end this shit to say fuck you and make sure I say "peace..............one"/ [6]
hehe, my first battle, no beef man
explanations
[1] TP = The Prophecy, I'm calling him Teachers Pet
[2] You know those halloween films where her bro comes back heaps...
[3] If someone came up to him with a camera he'd probly pose ::)
[4] 10 days ago (June 1st) he lost to Jayduwa (female). Not meaning to be disrespectful to Jayduwa.
[5] There is an Elvis song called Return to Sender
[6] He says it after every post ;D
time to vote yo
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nice battle guys, both had good punches, but i was feeling the flow of C-Bizzle more. so im'a give it to him.
vote=C-Bizzle
Ez
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"Ur shit is just reg-u-lar like metamucil shots to the jug-u-lar and ur bitch she just ug-li-er then a 500 pound jug-ga-ler(juggler)/"
"i lock, my glock, u dome, that cock, its you, i mock, ill rule ur block, so fuck you and fuck anything u talk......bitch"
a bit simplistic at parts but dude i love when u flow that aggression
your rhyme was good an all you just need a battle style to it, some raw aggressive yo, some hard punches, tear some mutha fuckin' faces off, thats why i'm going to have to vote for thaprophecy, he's got some raw shit right thurr
i did like these lines tho
"Imma tell you this straight coz this is on purpose, I place one phone threat n hear "Please man! Don't hurt-us!"
""Picture me like Jesus in Bethlehem", but explain how 10 dayz ago you lost to a woman/ [4]"
vote=ThaProphecy
by the way, i voted on this battle by choosing my 2 favourite lines from it and seeing which was better
good battle yall
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2 new battlers shapin up to be a hot battle..
Tha Prophecy - Ya flow was on point.. i liked it. Content was aight but ya rhymed alot of simplistic words together which can get repetitive. Try throwin some more complicated multis and a few metas in there.
Fav Line -
now, if i switched it up would u duck and tuck ur tail betwen ur 2, or would you, come at me with ur rhymes that are far and few/
C-Bizzle - Hot to def rhyme for a beginner man.. i liked it alot. Dope metas. You had a good mixture of all the keystyle elements which is always nice to see. Hot verse.
Fav Line -
Now listen here TP aka The-1-and-own-ly, you dont even know-me, I'll play the fuck outta your station just like a so-ny/
Leave me 6 feet under? Hah don't even mention that you phonie, think your smoking like cheech n chong but where the fuck is your homies?/
Both tight verses but lets let the numbers do the talkin.
ThaProphecy - 3.9 / 5
C-Bizzle - 4.25 / 5
Vote - C-Bizzle
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i think C-Bizzle used too much off of ThaProphecy's post, and I was feeling ThaProphecy's alot more , vote : ThaProphecy , nice battle both of yall came hard
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aight....2-2....kepp them votes comin yall
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Vote= C bizzle, better wordplay and metas, good punches. Prophesy, your flow was better, and bizzle wrote off your verse a lot, but still, had a more complex rhyme and had some multis...
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dang, this is a pretty close battle. more votes yo
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Both had good punches, but i have to agree with Concrete I was feeling the flow of C-Bizzle. vote= C-Bizzle
Nice battle yall.
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Have to go with C Bizzle
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C Bizzle gets my vote. i enjoyed reading his/her verse more, goof flow and metas. Prophesy had a good verse too but i think c bizzle takes this
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yeah both verses were good,
c-bizzle gets my vote, he used better punches and more metaphors, actually made it a battle
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thanks for the vote y'all, nice battle TP. Lets do it again sometime 8)
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yeah dogg...next week maybe
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good battle peepz- if i would have voted it would have been 4 c-bizzle cuz he hit hard without swearin 2 much and had a nice flow.nuthin personal thaprophecy.-ya had sum pretty hard punchez 2. well peesh out!!!!!!!!!
~jay~