West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: M Dogg™ on June 13, 2003, 12:47:17 AM
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Alright, this is the first round of the WCC Cup. The winner stays, the loser can go home. But there is a wild card spot, so maybe the loser can return, we'll see. But you'll go against a Hall of Famer in TimeLock, so good luck with that. Rules...
bar max - 10 (I ain't reading over 160 bars to judge, trust me, go over and get DQed, sorry)
Due by Tuesday, June 17, 2003
I judge, but if you think that I was unfair, you can ask for a 2nd opinion, and I'll get another vet to make the call. After all, I'm judging 16 verses at once, kind of hard. So good luck.
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BRACE YO SELF FOOL!
check your surroundings, your crowd's like A cup titties, minimal bouncing/
i'm lyrically astounding, ill nat's just a punching bag for a first round pounding/
you dre groupie, keep pause 4 porno on repeat in ur speakers u gay newbie/1
not concentrating on the bitches, but on dude's voice, screamin "jake do me!!"/
ill natural, u couldnt come strong even if your sperm lifted weights/
and u couldnt come on time like premature ejaculators, ask m to shift tha dates/
dont bother posting in this thread... your only ability is to spoil it/
coz i piss on your shit like using unflushed public toilets/
the only thing ill and natural bout u is the amounts of bullshit you speak/
this concludes my boxing session, my gloves remain uncreased/
1- referring to the skit "pause 4 porno" off dre's album chronic 2001. jake steed did that skit.
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I had an hour to kill its only fair i overpower your will /
your not wack as fuck, you just possess powerless skill//
Yo TJ, your "feminine" when you step to men, I'm getting whiffs off your "vaginal scent"/
when rappers say they'll "take you out", you give em your "address" instead!//
you just "came out of the closet", so don't even try to pretend.. /
Homie that explains the wire hanger, and the reason why you're deliverys "dead"//
TJ will be denied his next breath, when i hog tie his "oxygen line"/
and his own "shadow wont even have his back".. when i rip out its fuckin "spine"//
I'll make this loud and clear.. your past your time in here/
Watch you drown in fear, while I start "bronzing" the fuck out your "golden years"!!//
I pound on queers...TJ should change his name to "Mic Unable"/
frail dolt wouldn't be able to spit a "multi" if i force fed him a book of "time tables"!//
but youll never be recognized, steady chillin in last place/
you'll suffocate you ingrate .. for trying to invade my personal space//
or get fucked up with punches...cuz its cheating to strike "below the waist"/
one uppercut is all it takes.. for you head and neck to separate//
your terrible at offense.. and your best defense is dont even start.. /
cuz beatin me is nonsense.. like a "blind man" being "afraid of the dark"//
With hostile moves, I just socked the shit outta you/
Take this LOSS dude, I collapsed your lungs and 'KNOCKED the WIN (wind) OUTTA YOU!"//
The // indicates the end of a bar
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I like both verses, and I think both had great word play and show good skillz. In the end though, I think that Lil' Natural had great word play, and was more consistant.
vote=Lil' Natural
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woooooo! a vote.. keep 'em comin marty
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well done ill natural... nice battle
i can only hope for the wild card entry now... :)