West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: bostonboy on June 20, 2003, 08:53:37 AM
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10 bars
5 votes, 3-0 ko
no crew votes
ill drop in a minute
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I flip scripts betta nigga hold your own, tha best gift given to the entire Y-chromosome/
jigga gets ya lips ready to get served like a dairy queen, im tha next gods son so say ya prayers to me/
ill brow beat ya on streets im packin tha heat child, try tha salvation army n get you a freestyle/
timelock left ya in a pinebox but still you keep composing, too many losses got geezy jonesin, tried to step to skills but he beat you hopeless/
a thousand plus posts n still the weakest vet, so step ta bboy but I beat you next/
been drinkin my milk n bboy got strong bones, this is my ring n ima bring heat like roy jones, I go stealth thru no fly zones, ima global hawk atomic bombs dropped on this guys dome/
betta look to tha skys bro/
I gotta peril less brain I laughed at what this joke wrote, stuck heroin needles in ya veins but still couldn’t see dope flows/
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8 bars but long ones
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see man, u gotz the advantage, "if u shoot me u're famous"\
but if I shoot u Im ~shamless~, ~I-don't-know-shit-about -u~\
I watched u noticing my battle record, ~learning-it -through~\
but-I-know-something-about-u, ~there's-no-use-in-denieing~\
tell these people, why u picked me first out of them three players, if it's challange ~u-claim-u-looking-for-than-u'z-lieing~\
(bboy:"well, how ~inspiring~, dude loosing for the ~second-time-now~, Im looking for an easy win, cause ~my- shit-doesn't-rhyme~"\
"plus he got a thousand plus posts so it should~big-up- my- shine~";\
tactical thinkin done failed,u aint ~"Nicolo Machiaveli"~, a youngsta fronting at vets is gon get split through his ~belly~\
without a single ~metaphore~, nock on yo ass like on ~"doorz"~\
expose subliminal motives, ~in-newbe-keystyle-cornballs~\
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8)...votes plz.
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nice drop geezy, may tha better verse win
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nice drop geezy, may tha better verse win
word... :)
yo shit wasn't bad either...
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im giving my vote to Igeezy, cuz his rhyme were more consistent. he tried some multis, but the outcome could have been better. when reading bostonboy's verse, i felt like he've just thrown random bars, here and there, he did have some dope punches here and there, but he needed to work more on the rhyme
vote: igeezy
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I thought boston boys verse flowed better and had harder punches. Neither of you guys really used impressive wordplay or metaphors, and I to Da Geezy, just a little advice, putting a hyphen in between words don't turn them into a multi. All the words have to rhyme so "i don't know shit about you" and "learning it through " wouldn't be a multi whereas you might be able to pull of just "about-you" and "it through" although it wouldn't be that strong. Anyways, my vote goes to BBoy
vote=bboy
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lmao, Im putten' hyphens strictly as a reading sign, it means it should be read as one ....it's not a multi sign....
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im giving my vote to Igeezy, cuz his rhyme were more consistent. he tried some multis, but the outcome could have been better. when reading bostonboy's verse, i felt like he've just thrown random bars, here and there, he did have some dope punches here and there, but he needed to work more on the rhyme
vote: igeezy
yeah i can't really add nothing to that, i feel the same way as I-Bo-Loc ;)
vote: i geezy
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shit i aint sayin this was a good battle or nuthin but come on yall picked Igeezy to win he had more tildas and backslashes than actual rhymes shit looked like
slfjdlfjdslfj~\\ lsdkjfdlskjfdsljfsdljf~~~~
yah real dope
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Bboy - verse was good....good flow and some good punches...some good multi's would have been a good addition tho..still it was good.
Fav Line - I gotta peril less brain I laughed at what this joke wrote, stuck heroin needles in ya veins but still couldn’t see dope flows/
tight shit
I Geezy - good verse but multi's did lack...good attempts tho, if u hit those u woulda been golden...flow was off at parts too...obviously this wasnt ur best but it was still good.
Fav LIne - tactical thinkin done failed,u aint ~"Nicolo Machiaveli"~, a youngsta fronting at vets is gon get split through his ~belly~\
Vote = Bboy
Flowed better, better punches...simple as that
peace