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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: M Dogg™ on June 25, 2003, 12:55:55 AM
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Good luck in round 2, we will see what can take place. I did seed you guys based on round one, so there is some structure, but the seeds will not be released. Oh, and this is the last round that there will be a wild card, so you still have a chance if you lose, but you better come hard. Anyway, hey are the rules...
10-15 bars
We will have a little fun, and force creativity, no sexual punches, or punches about dick size, being a female. Lets see what can be done.
Due by Monday June 30, 2003, at 11:59pm California time
The winner will take on the winner of abstruse vs. Red~Alert
Good Luck
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even darwin's theory of evolution couldnt help you find the solution to my rhyme's execution/
you got bad-breath, another form of pollution, you already had-death from Bez until the resolution/ (1)
even Rob Swift says your goin down..the innuendos-continue, getting a 2.8 battle verse, never knew you had it in you/
let me add one to your-list Kali, Illicit, Xearo, TimeLock, Red Alert and Tone, then my name/
we can play my game, but you'll never make it on your own/
you got elite with the back-up, the underground dont battle, so its Gareefa to deliver the smack-up/
black your eyes and disconnect your retina, your a 'little kid' and i still show disrespect coz you think your betterer/
Infiltrate and try and avoid your fate, to win this battle its obvious yur gonna recriminate/ (2)
Adapt to your surrounding, go back to where smartass found me.. now im a newer profound-me/ (2)
i own you, kick you into the unknown and we're postpone the cup's corination, cause they gotta prepare the throne/ (2)
dont you dare tell me i dont compare to you, just coz of some freestyle i was 'dared' to do
/ (3)
i dont battle through choice, but people will rejoice when they see your carcass and my loud voice/
i BOOM accross the land, i tell you what.. give elite a call.. looks like you need a hand/
Total length: 13 Barz
(1) = He won with a 2.8 against Bez.. Which he even claimed was luck, and he knew he spat poor/
(2) = Each word in bold are the three words that are below his avatar. Also smartass, he posts around here.. hge introduced me to the board.
(3) = There was a topic by a new cat in the keystyle section called drop a keystyle if you dare.. Sin critised my verses i dropped in there sayin he wasnt feelin em.
PS: No beef... jus rhymes man
peace
EDIT: There was a line space in the verse.. Jus took it out to tidy it up.
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checkin in.. i got some time on mah hands so ill might be able to get this up by tonite..
how yall write so fast .. lol damn
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checkin in.. i got some time on mah hands so ill might be able to get this up by tonite..
how yall write so fast .. lol damn
lol.. its cool.. i got in from work.. saw it up and dropped my verse within 10mins... Good Luck Man.. may the best verse win.
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I'm like halfway done with mine, haha :). Just read this like 10mins ago also...
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arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
~Oh God, its Gareefa, the lyrikal queefa, only reason you fell in this rap game is cuz ya got a huge crush on queen latifah//
~I got bad breath? At least I dont spit shit, told ya stop writin but ya still dont get-it, hold up.. ill drop a tid bit//
~You thought you wuz funny until i broke ya humerus (humourus), ya jokes dont make us laugh.. just humor-us//
~I know britain's cold but ill stop by and spit some heat, raise the temperature.. uk still lackin good emcees? i guess thats why you got ya own lines in ya signature//
~Bitch! I wouldnt use your verse to WIPE MY ASS, learned ma lesson against bez but now i wont stop in this cup 'til i swipe-the-last//
~I hope ya have "high velocity poop" cuz muthafucka the shit just hit the fan.. a good verse from sin is in demand and im gonna murder this cat with everything i can//
~You took 5 bars just from my av-and-sig, i guess im just wild.. battlin me is like you tryin to tame a wild maverick, I just smoked this cat.. yeah lemme have-a-cig//
~Just takes one-bar-and-ya-feeble, ma karma dropped 7 points since i argued with bez, fuckit, im still take a dump-on-ya-people.. only time reefa sports a gat is when he stands in front-of-a-steeple//[1]
~13 barz alone, way too long for this pitiful drone, Ill let this lyrikal al capone put 5 in ya dome and listen to this kid moan and groan//
~I dont need mista darwin for victory, just ma bars and ma symphony, you feelin me? Fuck it yo.. you just another kid-to-me//
~Your shit ails me like a weak kidney.. I SWEAR if I hear name and game in a verse again, Ill ignite the flame, stake my claim, sacrifice my fame and extinguish the lame//
~Then take the blame.. without no shame.. 2 Elite in the cup I think Im smellin the reign, my shots will make you levitate, like David Blaine//[2]
~Ill eat up ya brain, save you a part so you can have a piece-of-mind, you will never cease-to-find weak ass punches so spare me if you could be-so-kind//
~Killin this international-man-of-mystery attemptin to subdue Sinister's substantional-plans-of-misery.. this kid actin rational, the man's history//
~Ill destroy the contents of ya frame wit my 12 guage shotta, 4 to ya forehead.. blood stained my prada, someone said 'got vagina'? I said I got alotta..//[3]
[1] - Hold a gun in front of a steeple means.. alot of people hold up churches cuz they know nuthin will come from behind and they will get attention.. just a pussy move.
[2] - David Blaine is a street magician who supposedly can levitate in front of people.
[3] - Last 2 bars I made some Austin Powers jokes.. reefa is from britain.. austin powers is from britain.. yall get it. Alotta Vagina is austin's interest in the first one.
feedback welcome..
lez hop on these votes..
pZ
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if they stressin on me for fuckin "feeding off" why the fuck dont they say shit to Sin...bullshit
peace
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if they stressin on me for fuckin "feeding off" why the fuck dont they say shit to Sin...bullshit
peace
Werd man, fuck them cats who cry bout feeding off when theyre hit with a verse. What the fuck are you gonna do if you're battling and you're opponent throws what you said back at ya? Are you gonna refuse to carry on/ or force the other cat to be disqualified.?
Fuck all that... just battle, stop crying like little girls.
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if they stressin on me for fuckin "feeding off" why the fuck dont they say shit to Sin...bullshit
peace
you were disqualified mainly because uyou postedd to late... "feeding of" the opponents verse didnt help your case if i may put it like that....
even though wcc dont support "feeding of opponents verses", we have never disqualified anybody because of that SPECIFIC reason.. but what we do is to take the fact into consideration when casting the vote
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prophecy shut the fuck up man.. fuckin cry all damn day and you been here like a week..
how bout everyone keeps the bs outta this thread and we get some votes in herre..
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how bout everyone keeps the bs outta this thread and we get some votes in herre..
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yo what the fuck.. all the other battles been voted on.. what up
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yo what the fuck.. all the other battles been voted on.. what up
word... What the fucks happenin
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M Dogg's Elite.... he cant vote on it
wait for another mod to step up n vote
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maestrooooooooooooo
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ok.. ima vote on this within a couple hours....
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ok.. ima vote on this within a couple hours....
props.. thanx man
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Chairman Gareefa
A solid verse with average punches and an average flow, you had had personals you could develop and hit with really hard, like that 2.8 rate I gave him, but you didn’t come hard enough on that occasion. I don’t know how many “Darwin-theories” punches I’ve heard since Political Underground were formed, but it’s starting getting played out by now
•SiNiStEr•
your start is weak, your first 2 bars weren’t that great, but after that, its like you got extra fuel or something, cause you started to deliver nice punches and personals, gareefa's flow is "ok", but yours is horrible, and you need to try to stay on topic and not “jump back & forth”.
Summary: Sinister is loosing some point since he’s partly “feeding off” Gareefa’s verse. I don’t appreciate that cause since this is only a one verse battle, he’s getting an advantage. But even if I would ignore those, I still feel that Sinister have the more solid verse because of the way he flipped the punches and personals.
Vote : Sinister
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lol @ horrible flow
ya my bars are way long and its cuz i try to do 3 step punches and scrunch 'em into a line.. ima shorten them to 2 clause punches soon cuz the 3rd multi/punch always ends up as a filler. Ya i fed off reefa's verse and lookin back i dont think i should have. I think now i have a really good idea of what everyone is lookin for so now i can write a lil better.. thanks alot for the vote maestro.. wasnt as well-explained as the other but a vote is a vote.. peace reefa.. good battle bro, i was wonderin when we would bash heads and i guess it had to go down like this.. good battle.. good luck wit PU. Me vs abstruse i suppose.. hope ya ready bud!
pZ all
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Goood battle, pz
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I don’t know how many “Darwin-theories” punches I’ve heard since Political Underground were formed, but it’s starting getting played out by now
I don't remember any punches like that being used. And it's Poetic.
Good battle y'all.