West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: da_notorious_mack on July 07, 2003, 03:28:32 PM
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rules blah blah,both grown ass men well sort out any problems when we get to um...no beef of course..
You want beef jus say-it-homie,cus you always been gay-an-phony..
goin against VDK,youll need a fuckin "bodyguard" like Dre-an-Obie..
im goin out like pace-won,cus in "rap music" people can be fake-son..
an im suprised how many claim they my homie but they aint-one!..
my berreta-supplies,any cat that stretchs the truth or theorectically-lies..
motherfucka you 16 years old..how you poetically-wize..
i aint got time to get-at-these-flies,but seriously who-is-this-tight?..
Gareefa readin poetry aint he got better things to do-wit-his-life?..
you couldnt present a case aggainst be if you was a proud-attorney..
not jus a bitch who got beat in the 1st round-a-tha-tourney!..
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I';ll get at this 2nite homie.. nahh no beef.. lol
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aight Mr Mack, lets get this shit crackin, a battle to the death, or jus till i finish this jackin'/
lets get bitch smackin.. see whats left of Da Notorious, prolly rip him down to the 'D'/
its funny to me beacuse i always see you reppin the D, but it all seems fake when you see what i see/
when you hear what the reef hears its hard to belive what mack says he sees/
its clear that somethin' fishey is goin down right here, so i jus sit here and finish my beer/
i aint gonna expose you man, that would be a bitch move, but heres a warnin/
fuck wit me and i will make sure your fake ass is perminatly removed from this place/
that shit is worse than bitin i hit ya hood like lightning, but you never been there/
you see what im sayin now dogg? fuck wit me.. i know some shit.. so dont you dare/
and i dont care who i hurt or how hard you come at me/
throw dope and wack shit at me, just remember what hood you reppin and actually/
when i next spit factually you could be the victim/
cause i dont need no crew to scream at 'YOO GET HIM'/
i roll solo with PU contradiction but i fizz up like cola/
i finished, my shit is soft, my rhymes ae wack and i fallen off/
lemme jus finish shit, im coolin off, remember the warnin'/
and when your alarm clock goes off.. remember theres been no gun shots this mornin/
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Aight ladiez..
Mack - Mack you have no idea how much better your more advaced multis sound as opposed to your weak ones.. you should really just keep ya rhyme scheme more advanced and harder hitting cuz the weak multis keep the flow goin but they ruin some good lookin punches. A very average verse from ya.. who knows maybe you could be burned out from so many keystyles? Fuckit.. decent verse.. nuthin special, ok personals.
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my berreta-supplies,any cat that stretchs the truth or theorectically-lies..
motherfucka you 16 years old..how you poetically-wize..
Gareefa - Your shit if soft true.. but humor can make good punches too and I think you have accidentally triggered somethin worth using, lol. No fancy stuff like multis or nuthin but ya flow is still rectifiable, even though in a few parts it fell off dramatically.. e.g.
i aint gonna expose you man, that would be a bitch move, but heres a warnin/
fuck wit me and i will make sure your fake ass is perminatly removed from this place/
that shit is worse than bitin i hit ya hood like lightning, but you never been there - i dont see one rhyming set of lines :-\ ..
anyway i liked some of ya lines, some were average..
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when i next spit factually you could be the victim/
cause i dont need no crew to scream at 'YOO GET HIM'/
Numbaz..
Mack - 3.25 / 5
Gareefa - 3 / 5
Im gonna give this one to mack cuz his verse was decent enough, I woulda voted gareefa but damn man.. ya flow fell of horribly in some points, i like your creativity and some raw lines but the flow was the deciding factor..
Vote - Mack
the pink just for you mack.. lol
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Thanks for the breakdown homie.. im luvin the pink text homegirl lol :-*
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Not voting, but both nice verses. BTW, Reefa got through to the second round, and I really don't see anything wrong with reading poetry. Those were really weak punches. On Reefa's part, his flow was bad sometimes.
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Vote= Mack
I agree with it bein an average verse for him, nothing like I've seen in the past. Good flow, decent multis, didn't seem like you cared that much about this battle..shit you didn't even make rules (lol)
Reefa, your flow was sporadic, liked the first line, didn't like the second, and so on. Also, a couple rhymes didn't rhyme at all. Ya gotta come hard to take mack out, and you didn't really do that. Anyways, there's my vote.
Pz
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GANGSTA GANGSTA...PINK PANTHER
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Vote- Mack...
Explanaition= Iller verse...