West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: vitodeluca on July 08, 2003, 11:57:53 AM
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I go by the moniker of hates rats for my fans,
thought I'd give an heavenly insight into my lyrical plans,
blessed man akin to poets heavin' death at my hands,
had to take a stand against CSN, they degrading my style
can't post in the battle board because I only keystyle,
all the while elite reppin for real, burnin CSN skin like a chemical peel,
exposin the true faces of my crew, getting debased while
I abstain from the battle ground, standing chaste,
a battle virgin, can't get my hand worsened by the mud of the warfield,
taking shields in intellectual manicures while I endure,
the peons and maxi pads
with their fiendishly wack raps,
must stay in my ivory tower cause my constitution is too weak for that,
just take the pen in my hand, write lyrical spam,
crew members to dumb to understand what I pen so they say "you the man"
don't know if I can stand this much more, I deplore
what elite has in store for us, I must
stay safe here on the keystyle board, drop weak metaphors
and long winded nonsensical, whymsical rhymes,
with uneven lines,
and no bar count,
wait for my homies to shout, you the man hates rats, but I know its not fact,
Oh, when will my suffering end? Shakespear never had it this bad,
why me then?
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You fukin serious? VITO IS A HACKER!!
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Nah man, just talkin' shit, wrote this as if hates-rats wrote it, jacked his style, ya know? Just though it'd be funny...
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No beef y'all, just playin around... ;D
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Nah man, just talkin' shit, wrote this as if hates-rats wrote it, jacked his style, ya know? Just though it'd be funny...
".....why they bitin me mama?!"
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Nah man, just talkin' shit, wrote this as if hates-rats wrote it, jacked his style, ya know? Just though it'd be funny...
".....why they bitin me mama?!"
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".....why they bitin me mama?!"
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Oh shit, I just read "the high jack" my bad daygo. That shit was before my time on the board. So yeah, I guess I bit your idea. BTW, you still live with ya mama? ;)
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hehe i liked that.. Not a bad idea daygo.. i mean vitodeluca... lmao ;)
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Hall of shame here I come!!!
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...oy...shame shame shame...
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OK, I'm KIDDING...I thought it'd be funny to post as if I found a verse on hatesrats computer dissin CSN, daygo's shit was written in other people's styles dissin' them, so it's a little different. And if I would known he had wrote that verse I might not a posted this for this exact reason. Some ACTUAL feedback might be appreciated though..I thought this shit was pretty clever.
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lol@if u think thats hates style kid den u aint much of a keystyler... hates has the most imagery ive seen in a keystyler boy if u read his shit poperly den u would see whats up but i see whatchu tryen to do here this was aight..
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lol@if u think thats hates style kid den u aint much of a keystyler... hates has the most imagery ive seen in a keystyler boy if u read his shit poperly den u would see whats up but i see whatchu tryen to do here this was aight..
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well, I just tried to copy the way he rhymes, I thought I was pretty good with some of the shit and the metas..I can keystyle in my own style pretty decent, IMO
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i know this man u pretty tight i was jst sayin it looked like u was clownen on hates coz hes styles wack or sumshit but its far from dat
holla
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Nah, wasn't tryin' to diss his style, I like his style..I was just bored ;D I thought it might be a challenge to try an write like em. Thanks for the feedback.