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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Storm on July 23, 2003, 09:26:14 PM

Title: My First Write Up
Post by: Storm on July 23, 2003, 09:26:14 PM

Give me some feedback please...

Lyrical tactics make my rhymes classic, jurassic/
I stay on top like an attic/
I’ve had it…of whack niggaz who try to start static/
don’t know im more dangerous than acrobatics with this automatic (BANG!)/
shit I do drugs but I aint no motherfuckin addict/
I’m an alcoholic, call it what you wanna call it/
I got a gun slut, Empty out your wallet, all of it/
Now let me back it up now and introduce my name/
I’m that motherfucker Storm takin over this game/
I’m not in it for the cash, im in it for the fame/
Getting tired of all yall rappin bout the same thangs/
shits lame, but I don’t blame/
I just claim…that im the best…so don’t contest/
Or else you’ll need to wear a vest/
So I suggest…yall settle for less, admit that im blessed/
And let your motherfuckin mouth rest…

Title: Re:My First Write Up
Post by: abstruse on July 23, 2003, 10:21:27 PM

Good Job if its your first write up. Keep dropping.

Title: Re:My First Write Up
Post by: T.J. on July 24, 2003, 01:20:31 AM

Quote from: Storm on July 23, 2003, 09:26:14 PM

I’m an alcoholic, call it what you wanna call it/

heehee..... xzibit
besides that, not bad for a first spit.

Title: Re:My First Write Up
Post by: Slim-x on July 26, 2003, 02:59:28 PM

It Was Cool But Ta Me It Sounded Like Eminem.........

Title: Re:My First Write Up
Post by: Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::.. on July 26, 2003, 03:04:11 PM

aight shit dogg keep droppin