West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::.. on July 25, 2003, 01:14:00 PM
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yo....yo.....
pullin out nines like i was tiger woods,
pitchin rocks on the block in middel of da hood/
cash flowin liek it should, but i keep my head level,
hoes? i got several, smooth but evil as if i was the devil/
bitch...my arrival as ya rival makes ya thinkin suicidal,
tribulations and trials, my glock has ya shocked,
and ya fearin my styal(style)/
im from the west where we dont play,
its a death day, cuz ya in my hood,
bound to be a short-stay/
like a sculpta use clay, i mold rhymes to form lines
like bullets out the 9 they spray/
all other cats scatter when they hear Prophs gat clatter,
serve ya remains on a platter,
push ya dome back son n hear ya face splatter,
im fucked up like mad hatter/
make artworks with ya brains n blood stains,
they need dental records to identify ya remains/
makin claims of bein the best rapper ever-tah-live,
neva-ya-give, disresepct or ill level-ya-kid/
to top it all off, im pitchin molitoff,
raid ya tomb like lara-croft/
haha just a little freestyle....feedback would be aight
peace
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yo peeps with all these whack newbies throwin hurtin ass hell shit down...haah Rod locked some clowns shit...i dont know whats goin down around here...
peep this shit n get gimme some feedback, im tryin to tighten up my flow a bit.
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That Had Skillz Fo Real From Point A Ta Z.......
Rate It 8.5
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fuck im just tryin to get some feedback and slim-x man u fillin up the fuckin board man. take it easy bro
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Sorry If You Don't Want Me To Post In Yo Stuff I Keep A Note On That ...........
Peace
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dogg i dont mean in my post...i mean on the whole board...u postin mad shit and people aint seein the other shit..u give me feedback whenever u want man..i appreciate that shit...just slow down on postin all those verses....or post another verse in teh same post as ur last one.
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like a sculpta use clay, i mold rhymes to form lines
like bullets out the 9 they spray/
hottest line
nice peace overall
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thanks for the input dogg, appreciated
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UPPIN FOOLS...just throw down some feedback
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I'm kinda a newbie so i don't know if my imput counts but i thought overall it was pretty tight. Some of it doesnt flow, but most of it does. If you worked on it more you could make it better. Overall though it was nice.
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its all good dogg...any input is good...im tryin to work on my flow so ur input is appreciated.
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Thats some nice shit... keep spittin man.. Dont worry about the sleepers.