West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: bez on August 04, 2003, 02:22:16 PM
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Deadline, 6th Aug
Maximum 20 bars!
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Want me to lend ya a hand-tramp, bet ya masturbate so much I swear you was a pros-ti-tute//
I heard ya left band-camp early when ya came across-the-flute//
The only time ya could "cum sick" is if ya threw up all of last-nights-evenin//
It consisted of a meal, a drink and then a blast-fulla-siemen//
If ya talkin about an eatin-disorder then I will-call-ya-ill//
Fingers stuck down ya throat, halfway to bein choaked like ya got a kill-ta-forfil//
Ya suck so much I've been confusin your shit for lypo//
Everything ya say is a mistake mite aswell be a typo//
Its alrite doh, cos my lyrics can cause a stampede like you were on safari//
Have your whole body shakin like ya name was Ali//
I ain't into playin-games, I'll put holes in ya like draculas fang-can//
Ya might be tough sayin-names, but swayin from a tree is the only way ya can hang-man//
Lyrics to snap ya back-in-to-place, leavin ya finally standin straight//
I'm harder than a slap-in-the-face off a pregnant bitch complain about her weight//
Causin an uproar on the streets like an nigerian peacekeeper//
To beat me ya got your work cut out for ya like an liberian grim reaper//
Leave ya feelin shamed, you'll go back to hidin, we'll see ya in a while//
Ya gettin fucked up like a named peodefile//
Leave ya feelin fucked as if ya a member from Hanson and its hurtin//
Make ya feel physically sick everytime ya see Richard Branson and virgin!//
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checkin in, i'll post tonight
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peep game
Please, dog, your rhymes are slap stick, get off mack’s dick, your fake like plastic, I can’t stand it//
It’s the return, you get burned when served with this hotness, I leave my mark, I leave you branded//
I believe you landed from planet fagot, in your space ship with little boys and butt bandits//
I know your type, someone who hangs around playgrounds looking at the “sights”//
You spend your nights beating off to tiger beat under a single light//
You’re a pathetic pedophile playing pussy on the net//
Koncept said it, you can bet I’ma vet when it comes to rippin’ necks//
Compare your self to me, then you will see who’s the better MC//
Cuz, cousin, I write nice rhymes nightly, I’m what you never can be//
Keep telling your self you can get better, but never better then me cuz I switch like the weather//
I got many styles for you to ingest//
If words are weapons then I got techs for your chest//
Watch your step, where ya steppin’ cuz Koncepts the best, fuck the rest//
Your about as good a jem in an ass kicking contest//
You got a battle record with no wins only losses, you’re an errand boy fucking around with mob bosses//
The cost is to much for your pockets, this battle you lost it//
Just remember I rule you, even after maxi tried to school you//
Fuck this battle, I’ve wasted enough time, I’m through, fools//
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Nice drop mayyyyyyne, so your ARE KONCEPT. lol
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Allright, I'll get my vote on
Bez: Pretty good verse homie, your multis were actually refreshingly on point. I think all of them were actually multis which is an improvement for ya. Your punches and flow were a little uneven at times, for instance, the whole masterbation/prostitute punch didn't really make a lot of sense, but I liked the cum sick punch. Flow was off/on in parts. Overall, the one thing I would say is focus less on multis and more on punches, if you have dope punches, it'll go a long way to win battles. Still, pretty good. I'd give ya like a 3.9/5
Ill Logical- I have to say that I wasn't really feelin' ya verse that much. Your flow was off and I only saw like one personal in ya verse. Also, I didn't think the punches really hit that hard. i.e. Watch your step, where ya steppin’ cuz Koncepts the best, fuck the rest//, I mean, rhymin' best with rest is a little played. Liked the line about Jem in an ass kickin' contest, lol. Overall, give it a 3.5/5
Vote-BEZ
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nah nah nah..
ill logical ripped it... simple.. bez try again..ill.. holla at me for a battle
vote= koncept
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Close battle.
Both verses were good, both had good multis and flow, punches were nice from both but the fact that koncept used a lot of faggot punches turned me off his verse.
vote-bez
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you gotta use fag punches against bez its a must
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you gotta use fag punches against bez its a must
lol, if thats all ya can cum up with mate then ya weak. Thnere not 1 thing fag about me.
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COME ON MORE VOTES PLEASE. Even tho assasins explination of the verse was pure bullshit, basically cos I didnt allow him to drop his verse in the TT he voted against me in this battle, plain to see.
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hears a tissue... hears a pistol..... you still wont do shit dood....
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and get nas out ya banner.... dickrider
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assasin, this isnt even your battle, so why are you responding like it is?
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Dickrider, how can you be a dickrider if you like somebody music. YOur a real idiot.
VOTES PLEASE!!!!!
2-1 to me currently, thats if assasins vote actually counts.
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'nuff beefin yall..
Bez - came pretty hard.. damn that sounds sick lol but yall know what i mean. you had some creativity in there which was nice and you did have some unity in the bars. Im not a huge fan of the..
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but ya shit wasnt that bad..
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Lyrics to snap ya back-in-to-place, leavin ya finally standin straight//
I'm harder than a slap-in-the-face off a pregnant bitch complain about her weight//
Koncept - Your flow was dope, that content was aight. A lil too much time reppin yaself and your 'personals' were bez bein a pedophile which no one has a clue or not if its true so that dont really make much sense. But the flow was good even tho you were reppin yaself most of the time.
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I got many styles for you to ingest//
If words are weapons then I got techs for your chest//
Numbaz..
Bez - 3.5 / 5
Koncept - 3.4 / 5
Bez took this one by a hair cuz he wasnt reppin himself the whole time and came with a few creative lines, koncept you came creative but not much unity and ya flow did fall off a few times so im gonna have to hand this one to bez..
Vote - B
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hmmm... you and bez dating sin?
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Stop hatin homie ... damn man settle ya beef out side his battle
Bez come pretty soild with his punches n' flow steady through the verse Koncept came well too but threw less punches .... both nice verses tho
Vote - Bez
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I think Bez just took this because he had more punches than ill did.
Vote = Bez
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Thanks to everyone who dropped votes. Sin and Vito dropped some nice detail. Cheers!
Well looks like I have won.
5-1 homie.
Nice battle. Peacccccce!