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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: LP on September 06, 2003, 11:03:16 AM

Title: ~BlaDeZ OF IllneSs (10 Bar of SicCneSs) ~
Post by: LP on September 06, 2003, 11:03:16 AM
…Swordsman Fast-wit-Knives..Slashin and Swingin till they Gash-ya-Side..
It’s a Fact-of-Life..if u don’t Posses the Talent! than don’t Smash-wit-Knights!!
…We Retract-ya-Rights..wit Strapped Grenades..that’ll Crack-ya-Frame..
One man Tried to Slap-the-Canes..so I Flashed-his-Brains..wit the Dash-of-Blades!!
…I’m Not Concerned-wit-Guns..i’ll Rather Earn-mah-Fun..wit Tips-of-Swords..
Cliques-get-Gorged..Might get Split-in-Fours..why’ll ‘Swipin-ya-Faith’! Lp can ‘Hit-ya-Lord’!!
…Guns Kill! But mah Duns Will! Send-ya-Grievin..just Look me in the Eyes and Give-a-Reason..
for Lp to Manage ya ‘Breath Control’! and have ya *Lungs*! ‘Wish-for-Breathin’!!
…Fist-is-Bleedin! From Grippin the Sword Handle-to-Hard! Get ya Crew!! I’ll Dismantle-ya-Gaurds..
and the ‘Friction-of-the-Blade’! will leave ya ‘Blood-on-Fire’! like Puttin ‘Candles-on-Heats’!!
…Despite Reactions!! I’m Bringin Twice-the-Action!! Wit Swords-that-Puncture! But the Nines-a-Clashin..
Fight-for-Passion..Mah Knives-will-Gash’em!! and make u Use ur ‘Speech-on-Paper! Like I put his ‘Life-in-Captions’!!
...Brains Smacked-and-Chewed...Sword is the Biggest 'Guy Swatter'! and they leave u 'Splat-and-Spewed'..
Wrap-u-Dudes..when i Snap-the-Tools..give u a 'Break-for-Next'(Necks)! when i'm leavin 'Throats Cracked-in-Two'..
...Make an Ass-of-You! as i'm Liftin-the-Sword..Blade So Deep 'Under-ya-Flesh'! i'm 'Rippin-ya-Pores'!!
'Breakin-thru-Skin'! Lp's Shiftin-Ya-Sores'..Enemies Neva 'Feelin-the-Pain'! til they 'Hittin-the-Floor'!!
...Put Minds-in-Submission!! Take some Advice-and-Listen..when the Wise-is-Spittin...Rise-at-Attention..
Now that Knives-is-Grippen’d...i’m Slicin Tensions..LP ‘Clockin-ya-Life’! and ya ‘Time-has-Endend’!!
…a Prize-for-Pensions..mah Prime-has-Lifted..but when I Leave! Some Guys-is-Bitchin..so I Write-a-Sentence..
and Minds-get-Christened..Than mah Lifes-is-Missin!! Cuz LP ‘Takin-Out-Everyone’ like ‘Group Suicide Victims’!!

Title: Re:~BlaDeZ OF IllneSs (10 Bar of SicCneSs) ~
Post by: bez on September 06, 2003, 10:12:48 PM
fucking amazing, you have the capablity to become one of the best rhymes on wcc if you keeping droppin verses and battle verses like you recently have, fucking talented.

Title: Re:~BlaDeZ OF IllneSs (10 Bar of SicCneSs) ~
Post by: Code Blue on September 06, 2003, 11:17:38 PM
That was sicc f'sho.
Title: Re:~BlaDeZ OF IllneSs (10 Bar of SicCneSs) ~
Post by: |JEM|ILL| on September 07, 2003, 08:10:06 AM
hmm...I liked... Watch the menotonous concept though...dope multies, but in a topical you CAN devert your attention to the concept more, it makes it a better read then just rhyme scheming...
Title: Re:~BlaDeZ OF IllneSs (10 Bar of SicCneSs) ~
Post by: LP on October 17, 2003, 02:46:43 PM
Good looks..

uppin!