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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: P Nelson on September 21, 2003, 01:51:11 AM

Title: New Bz Mak Song... Peep It
Post by: P Nelson on September 21, 2003, 01:51:11 AM

http://www.soundclick.com/bzmak

I just recorded a new song home, some ghetto quality tho, thats some laid back alkohol shit, it's the story of a guy who's trying to stop drinking but he cant , peep it and tell me what you think of it 8)

Title: Re:New Bz Mak Song... Peep It
Post by: P Nelson on September 24, 2003, 12:50:22 AM

Uppin :-\

Title: Re:New Bz Mak Song... Peep It
Post by: DJ_Jay_Deee on September 24, 2003, 10:10:00 PM

To tell you the truth, i wasn't feeing this at all. Didn't like ur flow. You also need to work on ur clarity. The lyrics are alos pretty weak.

Title: Re:New Bz Mak Song... Peep It
Post by: P Nelson on September 25, 2003, 12:30:57 AM

Yea, the song aint all that of a lyrical song, it's just a story of a guy who can not stop drinking, 8) I recorded this at home, thanks for the feedback tho

Title: Re:New Bz Mak Song... Peep It
Post by: T.J. on September 25, 2003, 12:50:15 AM

man this song would have been so much better if u rapped it with more emotion in ur voice..... u sound like u were forced to make this track

Title: Re:New Bz Mak Song... Peep It
Post by: P Nelson on September 25, 2003, 12:52:11 AM

Aight kool keep the advices coming, ill record this song in the studio soon

Title: Re:New Bz Mak Song... Peep It
Post by: T.J. on September 25, 2003, 12:55:49 AM

oh yeh, if u gonna record this track in a studio, i think u should pick a different beat too, this one didnt really match what u were rappin about

Title: Re:New Bz Mak Song... Peep It
Post by: BL7 on September 25, 2003, 01:07:38 AM

This song would've been better if you were a little more hyped up. It's still funny though, but that beat is kinda weird.

Title: Re:New Bz Mak Song... Peep It
Post by: P Nelson on September 25, 2003, 01:09:58 AM

Lol I think it's official that I will got to be more hyped up saturday or whenever I record this song for real..., Yea not a "Serious" type of song 8)