West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: kickz_deluxe on December 14, 2003, 04:56:39 AM
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thatz 2 ma sister mary shez mentally handicapped n noone carez bout her but me
C’mon baby, letz forget everythin
Forget tha past n enjoy, cuz life aint just anythin
Don’t know how much time we will still have together
But yo love meanz mo than everythin 2 me…forever
Seein yo smile untiez ma pain for awhile, fallin down lika a feather to tha low plain n fillin tha same sad line 4ever // i know i cant take mum 2 strike a bargain allthough u her own make, but shez always away, workin somewhere. Supportin tha church, don’t care , liez over liez. Mum I guezz u never heard of jesus christ // u didn’t realize tha dayz, all tha 24-7-365z when mary n me got sexual abused , but when im cryin todayz u “righteouz” angry, no askin, u aint even confused// ma baby, tha sadnizz iz over, no more bluez//n when imma pay tha slut who abused us own coin, when imma kill that bitch, kill tha ravage, youll have tha best coign of vantage. Damn her, she broke godz rulez// baby, I did badz lock, stock n barral cuz droolz worse than fuckin stabz in tha back but I’ll cope wid every single querulouz bastard don’tforget, ma lil baby, ma full hope// u don’t know pox tha fuck struck ma soul , mould of a forgettin plot, neverthelezz im all in not at all, blockin thoze bad momentz wid a dirked smirk, no swallow// when Iwas 2young ive been followin wrong prisomz wid double synchchronism ,cuttler gran told among fashizm n sylogism, little baby lizzy listen// little girl, one curl to tha next, trod on her own tod but didn’t throw up tha sponge n try forgettin her complete complex// a reflex az flux iz tha reflex of reflux like itz been little lizzyz held breath after causal hugs til daddy told her from all over tha worl there aint aloota personz who don’t suckz// baby, dadz workin himself 2 death cuza tha debtz but he teached me lifez a fight, 100 rounz approach 100 woundz. Usually he wasn’t ba yo side, neverthelezz his eyez alwayz reached us n he’ll still guard// baby, no matter whutever u do, shit iz getting thick nuttin can reatard ma love cuz every line I spit iz tha inspiration u gave me - over n above//
C’mon baby, letz forget everythin
Forget tha past n enjoy, cuz life aint just anythin
Don’t know how much time we will still have together
But yo love meanz mo than everythin 2 me…forever
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thatz da best ive ever heard, but u know still ma mind, so c u ! :o
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Where u mufuckers look at ?
why no of uall can say anything to this...
scared?
or what da fuck's goin on?
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It was nice man, more of a personal thing I think than an attempt at an absolutely amazing rhyme.
From a personal point of view there was alot of hard hitting feelings in there.
From a rhyming point, the bars where long and often ended in a non-rhyming structure. But I guess thats the style you was aiming to use because it was the same throughout.
I liked it tho man, gald to see your with your sister thru everything.
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i was feelin it man...shits deep...but bloods blood ya heard?...nice to see ya got ya mind right an ya lookin out for her...
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scared?
scared? yes..
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scared? DUMB!
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scared? DUMB!
lol.. dude..
dont dig your hole deeper..
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i dont!
aww...man i dont wanna get beef wid u,...okay?
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fa sho..
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That would sound better in the form of a letter, but as far as a rhyme goes tht shit blowed hella chunks. Good point tho that u were tryin ta get across.....
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tahts da least uall had to say!
cuz i think thats real shit!
PEACE, bro (sinister) 8)
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i just love yall
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Real nice... i've had times when i cant put a decent enough ryhme together, but the pains eased through writing it down. Im glad to see your with your sis on all this agro.. you gots my support. :)
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thnx indy